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Originally posted by: sweet_shagun

simply wonderful poor ragini how wud she knw kya hone wala hain but am sure she wud make sab kuch theek thak for sure!! Lovely indeed!!

Luv,

Shagun

Originally posted by: born-leader

Hey....!!! Affy di the part was wonderful...!!! Great...!!! 👏 And Aloo... 😆😆😆 Funny nick name...!!! Don't mind ha....!!!! Rocky and Angel are POSITIVE...!!! Uff...!!! Anyways, it's good too...!!! As you have said earlier that your fan-fic is without any sorrow...!!! thnx aimen.. lol yeh i took the names bidaaians haves given them - sadi n aloo. yeh rocky n angel r their friends. u knw in the beginning i said this story will have few traces of the actual film jtyjn..yh so i tk this friends ka idea frm there where rocky n angel r similar to bombs n rotlu ..only they r twins over here.
Hmm, Alekh was feeling uncomfortable na 😳 and he was only drinking lime juice...!!! It was Ranveer who asked him to go with him...!!! So why didn't he open his mouth to say that it was his fault...!!! Hoping next part would be Sadi-Alekh manaao part and that what we'll love to read...!!! 😳😳😳 Aalekh is mature n understanding na ... so he wont put ranveer in b/w. he ll try to save him frm every mistakes he ll do .. but tht the story u need to see .. hw ranveer bcomes mature like his bro n capable spouse fr rags.

Ratings.... 8.5/10 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 thanks
Best Dialogue... Alekh's "acha meri maa....ab jao" to Angel...!!! 😆😆😆 Was he irritated??? 🤔🤔🤔
Best Scene...!!! Sadhna finding out about her hubby....!!!!! 😉😉😉
Great part...!!! Post the precap soon...!!!! thanks for these choices.

One thing I wanna add...!!! I am going to a wedding and was getting ready, I was on the bidaai forum and was about to log out when see your's post....!!!! I rushed to my room changed the clothes, brought the ear rings and bangles on the computer table and now hurriedly wore them WHILE reading the FF...!!! 😆 I think it's kinda funny but I feel like sharing it with you...!!! My CRAZINESS....!!! 😆😆😆LOL thanks u like it so much!

Waisay...when Malti and Vinu will be coming...???? Add some nice-romantic-cool scenes of Mamaji and Mamiji...!!! 😉😉😉 Hope you don't mind...!!!umm aimen .. i think acc to my story what i have thought theres no place for malti n vinu. if i get i ll put them. but 99% no. lets see.. i ll try to put as said fr mama-mami.

Originally posted by: sumeya

hy very very nice

rily loved it

pls cont soon

Originally posted by: just_in

Aw Ragi in trouble for no reason at all! Who told those guys to dance.😛. And ranveer shouting at rags he better be ready to manaofy her after this.😆 My favourite scene has got to be between rag and alekh most probably because we don't get to see those two together. Very sweet scene. And I ain't in no hurry to see ranveer mature up. I like him all stupid.😆