ARJUN BHAVRI AND SURAJ MANASVI FAN FIC - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41

Thanx for the comments guys

RECAP: manasvi meets mansen…

HERE WE GO NOW:

Manasvi(M): doctor hum suraj e mil sakte hain

Doctor: nahin,aap abhi suraj goenka se nahin mil sakte

Mansin(Ms): why?????????

Doctor: kyunki woh abhi hosh main nahin aye,aap ko intazaar karana ho ga !

M: ok!!!!!

Then shakutanla arrives,she saw manasvi and goes towards her……

Shaku(Sh): are mansvi beta,tum yahan kaise?????????

M: jab suraj ka accident hoa tha to who muj se phone per baat kar raha tha!!!!!!!!!

Sh: acha!!!!!!!

Then mansin speaks

Ms: shakuntala tum manasvi ko kaise janti ho??????????

Sh: wohhh!!!!!!!!!!suraj ne mujhe manasvi ke bare mai bataya tha

!!!!

Bhumi is also there but manasvi doesn't meet her coz she was too muh upset ……then she releases that she have not met bhumi she goes towards her……..Bhumi is standing near the door and she is crying………………..

M: hi…..

B: hi……

They both keep silent for a moment then manasvi speaks…..

M: aap suraj ki kya lagti hain

B: suraj mere bhai hain

M: ohhhhhh!!!!!

B: aur aap

M: main suraj ki dost hon, hum dono college se aik sath parhethe the lakin hamari dosti university si hoi ……….

B: lakin suraj bhaiya ne kabhi bhi mujhe aap ke bare main nahin bataya ……….

M: kyun??????????

B: pata nahin

M: aacha,choro is baat ko…..

The doctor arrives

Doctor: ab aap suraj goenka se mil sakte hain , kyunki ab unhe

hosh aa gaya hai

Ms: okkkkkkkkkk!

The whole family is extremely happy Shakuntla , mansin , bhumi……

Manasvi is not there family member but she is more happy then shaku , mansin & bhumi

They go inside where suraj is lying on the bed

S: maa main yeh kahan hon??????

Shakuntala stay quiet…….Suraj remembers all the thing and then mansin speaks

Ms: thanx god tum bach gaye suraj!

Suraj see mansvi standing near the door….

S: manasvi !! tum yahan???????

M: kyun!main yahan nahin aa sakti ……..

S: nahin!!!!!!!!!!

They both start laughing……..

Then after 3 hours manasvi calls arjun

M: hello! Arjun tum kahan ho??????

A: main ghar main hon di!

M: ok! Tum jaldi se idhar aa gao

A: ok!!!!!!main aata hon di

M: acha!

Then she go to suraj

M: main ab chalti hon suraj

S: itni jaldi

M: jaldi!!!!!!!!!!……wohhhhhhh dad mera intaazar kar rahe hon ge

S: acha!phir to tumhe jana chahiay……

Then arjun arrives

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Hope u like this part

Plz give comments

Mehak

Edited by mako - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
wow!! very nice!!!!!superb infact was waiting for ur fan fic update......... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
lovely mahek, i just love ur ff... hats off. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowww mehak superb ff 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's very cool mahek 👏 .tg suraj is ok 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing 👏 post next part soon !!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx for the wonderful response 😛 😛 and i will post the next part soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur ff is rocking mehak... 👏
soooooo happy to find suraj okay... yahoo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ab to baat jaldi hi aage badhegi... 😉 😉 😉
update soon plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49

Hi friends,

Thanx q lot for the wonderful comments…

Here we go now:

Arjun arrives……..

M: hi arjun

A: hi di!!!!!!!!

They keep silent for a moment….

A: di aap ko pata hai kai dad kitne pareshan ho rahe the…aap unhe bata deti keh aap hospital ja rahi hain…….

M: sorry arjun who main itni pareshan ho gayi thi keh mujhe dad ko batane ki yaad hi nahin rahi……..

Mansvi continues:

M: dad thik to hain na!!..

A: who thik hain,main jab ghar puhnca to dad muje kehne lage ke mansvi ab tak university se nahin aayi ….tab maine unhe bataya ke..di ke friend ka accident ho gaya tha is liye who hospital gayi hoi hain

A: dad aap se buhut naraz hain !!!!!!!!

M: oh god !!!! Dad naraz hain ab toh kaniya hi bachaye muj ko baya !!!!!!

They both start laughing

A: ohhhhh!!!!main to aap se pochna hi bhool gaya ke aap ke cute se pyare se dost suraj thik to hain na!!!!!

M: arjun!tum suraj se itne jealous kyon hote ho

A: main or jealous!!!!!kabhi nahin main kisi se jealous nahin hota

M: arjun ab joth na bolo……

A: arjun khandelwal kisi se jealous nahin hota

M: ohhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

They reach home :-

Gurvanti & sidharth r sitting in the garden….

M: hello dad!!!!!hello mom!!!!!

Sidharth(Sh): mansvi tum aa gayi…manasvi tum mujhe bata ke to jati…..tumhe pata hai ke main kitna parshan hoa tha…

Gurvanti(G):han beta!!!tum bata ke to jati

M: sorry mom and dad !!!! Mere buhut aache dost ka accident ho gaya tha to mujhe yaad hi nahin rahi aap ko inform karne ki…..I am really very sorry

Sh: its ok!!!!!beta

M: thanx dad

G: lakin agli bar tum hame inform kiye bager kahin nahin jao gi

M: ok! Mom ….

Manasvi goes to her room……she fell asleep………………………

Suraj and mansvi r in a park……mansvi tries to tell her that she loves her…..

M: suraj main tum se aik baat kehna chahti hon

S: wah!!!kya baat hai madam ham se kuch kehna chahti hain

He starts laughing

M: suraj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He is still laughing

S: hi hi hi ha ha ha !!!!!!!!!!!!!

M: main chali jaon gi suraj..

S: chali jao!!!!

M: acha!!!!main chali jati hon

She goes

S: sorry manasvi !!!!!I was just joking ………………aur tum muj se kya kehna chahti ho

M(to herself):kahon ya na kahon!!!!!!!!keh deti hon kya pata suraj bhi muj se pyar karta ho

S: bolo na manasvi!!!!

M: suraj main tum se kuch kehna chahti hon

S: kehna chahti ho to kaho na..

No answer from manasvi

S: kaho na mansvi!!!!!!!!

M: hooooonnnn!!!!!!!!

M: suraj main tum se kuch kehna chahti hon…..

S: aadhe ghante(hour) se tum yahi keh rahi ho:main tum se kuch kehna chahti hon …….kya kehna chahti ho manasvi

M: suraj woh main tum se kuch kehna chahti hon

S: oh khudaya yeh main kahan phas gaya ………..bolo na mansvi kya kehna chahti ho

M: main tum se aik baat kahna chahti hon ke main……

S: ke main!!!

Manasvi says nothing

S: manasvi mujhe lagta hai ke,ke main se age dunya main koi lafz hi nahin hai

M: suraj tum mujse ghusa to nahin ho ge na

S: nahin!nahin mansvi main aur tum se ghusa ho hi nahin sakta…..ab ache bacho ki tarah mujhe bata do ke tum muj se kya kehna chahti ho warna mera to ram ram satya ho jae ga

M: main tumhe bachi lagti hon

S: nahin !!!!!! Tum to buhut bari ho gayi ho

M:

I LOVE YOU SURAJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To be continued…………….

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Hope u all like it

Plz post comments

Mehak

Edited by mako - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
whoa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WONDERFUL................................................... ......

that was toooooooooooo good episode mehak........ manasvi is behaving soooooooooooooooooooo cutely....... n i can almost hear suraj laughing at her...... too good yaar... too good...

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