ARJUN BHAVRI AND SURAJ MANASVI FAN FIC - Page 4

are.......... mehak !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its lovely..........
but itna sa???
3dino mein bas 1 update??
aur wo bhi tini short??
isse mera kya hoga.......

quick quick quick... it ant it updated now !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its great mehak 👏 but very short part
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Hi guys I am writing the next part of my ff and thanx for the comment

RECAP: manasvi calls arjun & informs mansen about the accident

Now the ff starts:

The mobile rings of arjun

A: hello!manasvi di

M: arjun tum jaldi se ghar aa gao

A: lakin kyun di!!!!

M: maine kaha jaldi aao to jaldi aao main baad main tumhe sab kuch bata don gi arjun

A: acha!acha main aa raha hon di

M: jaldi aao

Manasvi disconnected the phone …..she is very tensed

20 min go but arjun did not come

M: arjun abhi tak nahin aaya

M: main kya karon mujhe to driving bhi nahin aati pehle dad keh rahe the keh driving sikh lo lakin mujhe to susti ka buht chara hoa tha

Manasvi starts crying

She again calls to arjun,arjun attends the phone

M: arjun!!!!tumhe maine kitni daer pehle kaha tha lakin tum abhi tak nahion aaye

A: di!main to usi waqt ghar aa raha tha lakin yahan traffic buhut zayaada hai main bas 5 min main puhcha

M: jaldi aao arjun

A: main bas abhi aya

Arjun reaches the home after 5 min….arjun saw manasvi tensed he asks her as to why she is tensed? what happened?

A: di kya hua aap it ni preshan kyonm hain ???????

M: arjun baki baten main tumhe baad main bataon gi pehle mujhe CITY HOSPITAL le chalo

A: okkkkkkkkkkkkk

Arjun starts the car……………..

A: di ab to bata di jia ke aap itni pareshan kyopn hain aur mujhe city hospital kyon le ja rahi hain?

M: arjun,woh, mera aik buhut aacha dost hai jis ka accident ho gaya hai aur jab us ka accident hua to who muj se mobile par baat kar raha tha ..woh mere sath university main hai…aur us ka naam suraj goenka hai

Arjun see manasvi meaningfully but manasvi ignore………

A: oh!!!ho!!!di aap ne mujhe pehle suraj ke bare main kuch nahin bataya !?

M: han ,maine tumhe pehle suraj ke bare main nahin bataya !!!too kya hua ???tum ne aaj tak mujhe kisi ke bare main bataya ke main tumhe batati aur han mere paas it na fariq waqt nahin hai aap fil hal ghari pe concentrate Karen !

A: main aap ko kya batat di meri to koi dost hi nahin hai

M: dost nahin hai???????

A: nahin di! ab kya karon main aap ki tarah khubsdurat to nahin hon naaaa……!

M: arjun ab chup kar jao

A: nahin,main chup nahin karon ga

M: arjun!!!!!!!!!!!!

A: acha !choriye is baat ko wase yeh suraj dikhne main kaisa lagta hai

M: suraj!woh buhut nice,cute,dashing or smart hai….tum se bhi zayaada!

A: acha,aab muj se bhi zaayaad acha lagne laga who suraj

Arjun becomes a bit jealous

M: han!kyunki who tum se zayaada nice hai

A: kya baat hai di!aap suraj ki kuch zaayaada tarife nahin kar rahi

Arjun and manasvi reach city hospital

A: ok!di ab main chalta hon

M: kyon arjun ????????

A: who mujhe aik dost ke ghar jana tha kal America se aya tha aur mujhe time hi nahin mila ke main us se mil ata aur jab aap ne wapis aana ho to mujhe phone kar di jia ga

M: ok!!!!!!!!!

Manasvi goes inside the hospital …………

Mansen is standing there

M: nameste uncle

Ms: nameste !lakin aap koun hain ?????

M: main suraj ki dost hon aur ham dono aik sath university main parhate hain,suraj ka accident muj se baat karte hue hua tha………aur maine hi aapko accident ke bare main bataya tha……………

Ms: acha!woh tum thi beta!jiti raho

Manasvi could not control her tears when she see suraj laying on the bed …suraj was very injured

The doctor came out from the room

When the doctor came out of the room both mansin & mansvi say together "dostor suraj thek to hai"

Doctor:fikar ki koi baat nahin,suraj goenka hatre se bahir hain

M: thanx god

Guys hope u all like this part

Plz post comments

MEHAK

huh.................................................

thats all i hav to say........................

Suraj is well atlast...........

it really seems i myself got as tensed as manasvi reading the ff... n then wen in the end dr. said suraj is fine.. i let out that big... huhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... relieved... but ofcours tum ye to karti hi.... 😉


Exxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxtremly good part mehak... very very good 👏

no thanks wanks needed... if u really want to thank me..then post the next part sooooooooooooooon 😛

hey mehak!!

that was an superb part!!beautiful 👏

thank god suraj is ok.but really very good part.i just imagine the whole scene.manasvi's tensed face........oh god it's toooooooooo romantic 👏

heyi mehak....
plzzzzzzzz yaar... tum mu7jhe itna zyada kyu wit kara rahi ho.. i thot ll get uodate today..but again...
plzzzz update soon yaar... n suraj hospital mein n maansvi caring will be toooo rocking...
plzz ritsoon yaar

hey mahek, i read all the parts... n i must say that ur ff rocks! pls write soon. i m waiting. thoda jaldi likhna yaar... apne deewano se itna intezar karwana sahi nahi hota!

mehak.. mehak ... mehak.. mehak....
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