FKG-Creative Jodi Contest-Result pg1063 - Page 55

Originally posted by: rooma_q

ok here my story on second theme
A film by rooma_q named by
&nbs p; "HEERA PAAN"
film k caractors
1=shamit as a "bhai"
2=arijhit as "bhai's left hand"
3=anubhav as "bhai's right hand"
4=javed as "bara bhai of city"
5=shankar as"baray bhai's real chota bhai"
6=kk as "baray bhai's real chotay bhai's son"
ILLA da big boss of javed's gang
7=amit as "police man"
8=prashant as "police man"
9=sandeep as "police man"
n rex is as"paan wala"

now da story begins

illa ji ka husband 1 gang ka boss tha un ka
encounter main dehant ho jata hai to un k baad illa unki gaddi sambhalti hain
un k gang main JAVED main don tha illa ji k baad .shamit un k gang main job karta tha us ko kisi aur gang se achi offer aayi to wo wahan chala gaya apne saath do aur chailon ko bhi brain wash kar k lay gaya
us k baad se ye dono gang aapas main jani dushman ho gaye
1 din in dono gangs ko pata chala k 1 buhat valuable heeray ki exibition hone wali hai
phir us heeray ko hasil karna in dono gangs ki zindagi ka maqsad ban gaya aur 1 doosray ko neecha dekhany k liye buhat koshish karne lagay

exibition hall:
beech main heera rakha hai aur aas paas police hai
javed said to sm:sm apne bewaqoof baitay ko samjhao k aaj koi garbar na karay.
kk: no no garand pa main kuch nahi karonga ( ye log mujhay bewaqoof samjhtay hain na ab dekhna main kia karta hoon)
plan k muatabiq javed walay jaisay hi heera churanay k liye light off karwatay hain kk heera chura k bhag jata hai (bahar javed gang ki car k aagay shamit yani bhai ki car khari hoti hai )kk gharbrahat main bhai ki gari main baith jata hai
kk:chalo jaldi chalao main ne heera chua liya hai (peechay se awaz aati hai)abay tu ne heera churaya hai!!!kk mur k dekhta hai tu peechay arijit baitha hota hai
kk:abay tu yeh teri car hai ohhhh no
woh nikal k bhag parta hai us k peechay arijit,anubav,shamit,javed,shankar,police yani sandeep,amit,prashant bhag rahay hota hain koi aagay koi peechay saray gangsters aur police kabhi aagay kabhi peechay ho k kk k peeche bhag rahay hotay hain public dekhti hai k 1 aadmi k peechay police aur itnay sare log bhag rahe hain to wo bhi us k peeche bhagne lagtay hain kk peeche dekhta hai to preshan to ho jata hai aur sochta hai main itne sare logo se heeray ko kaisa bachaoonga aur use samnay hi pan ki dukan nazar ati he aur wo heera us k ander phank deta hai aur bhag jata hai sab dekh lete hain k kk ne heera pan ki dukan main phank diya hai( siwa e police k )lekin sab sochtay hain k kk ko heera phenkte hue sirf meine dekha hai baad main aram se utha loonga abhi to police peeche lag jaygee baad main jab sab aa k dhekhtay hain ti us waqt paan ki dukan bund ho chuki hoti hai
arijit:bhai ye dokan to bund ho gayee 😕
bhai shamit: koi baat nahi jeetoo subha aa k utha lain gay
doosra gang
javed:ye dokan bund ho gayee main ne kaha tha na shankar apne baitay ko samjhaaa aray kk tu to gadha hai ghadha
kk:main ne kia kiya 😕 main ghabra gaya tha 😭
sm"koi baat nahi babo ji apun hai na subha uthayga na
javed:pata nahi subha bhi kia garbar karayga tu chal abhi.
police ko shak ho jata hai k bhagtay huay kk ka haath rex paan house ki taraf kiun utha tha
prashant:hmmm kal se hum rex paan house ki nigrani karaingay lakin uniform main nahi jaingay warna ye dono gangs phir humaray haath nahi aaingay
amit:sir agar hum sabzi walon ka roop dharan kar lain to humaray liye ziada aasani hogi
prashant:offcourse

next day

paan ki dokaan khulti hai aur usay 1 mota sa aadmi khol raha hota hai (rex)
rex:o ka haal hain babwaaaaaaaaa zara paaan to layi lo
song comes:o khayi k paaan bana ras wala khul jaye bund aqal ka tala o us ne..........

rex:o ka baat hai babwa aaj to naye naye sabji walay rahat rahay .o babwa ka ka is area ma naye hooo
udhar amit sabzi waa ban k baitha hota hai
amit: ka karain bhai shaab majboori ka naam sabzi
rex:hahahahahaahahah oye huay aaj to bundriya ka naach dikhanay wal;ay bhi aaye rahat
bander ka naach dikhanay wala sandeep hota hai
aur fruit baichnay wala parshant
udhar se anubhav aaraha hota wo police ko pehchan leta hai aur bhais badal kar aata hai
anu:o paan walay bhai sahab zara paan to dena (pata nahi kahin heera is ko mil na gaya ho 😕 nahi nahi agar mila hota to yahan na baitha hota hai ye 😕 )aue idhar udhar heera dhondne ki koshish karta hai
rex:kaunsa paan banao baboo
anu:(heera dhondtay huay aankhon se )aaannnn kia
rex:baboooo paan kaunsa bano tuhar waste
anu:aaaannnnnnn haan aaaa heera
rex:kaaaaaa 😲
anu:ohhhh aaa i mean heera aaa heera paan 😕
rex:eeee kaunoo paan hai humray paas naaaahin jao jao
😡
aur wo pareshan ho k chala jata hai aur jaa k bhai ko batata hai
anu:bhai wahan to police ka pehra ai aur heera bhi kahin nazar nahi aaraha 😕
bhai:kiya ohh no kahin javed wale to nahi le gaye jeetu dobara jaa k check karo

jeetu:oooo motay .. heera de ohhh i mean paan de
rex:mota kis ko bolat rehat tu khud bhi to dhol jaisa hai k dholi taru dhol baje dhol baje 😛
jeetu;chup paan de(waqai heera to kahin nahi hai)
rex:kaunoooooooooooooooooooooosunai nahi deta
jeetu:hmmmm han haan heera
rex:heera paan lo tum bhi woh hi mangat rahat
jeetu: 😲 kisi aur ne bhi manga tha
rex:haoo idher naaahi hai heera paan weera paan jao jao(akhir ie heera paan hai ka cheez 🤔 )
jeetu wapis jaa k bhai ko batata hai
jeetu:bhai woh mota dhol dekhne hi nahi deta (use apni insult yaad aati hai jo us ne sab k samne kaha tha k dholi taru dhol baje dhol baje dhol baje dhol k dum dum baje dhol 😛 😛 😛 aur is khayal aatay hi woh chaunk jata hai)aur bhai woh buhat badtameez bi hai nafrat hai mujhe us se aap zara sambhal k jayega
bhai:hhhmmhhm aj tak koi mai ka lal paida nahi hua jo bhai ka mazak uray 😎 persnariry ka asar
anu:(ahista se)bhai persnariry nahi personality
bhai:(anu ko thappar mar k )ab to mujhe english sikhae gaapun ko english aati hai kia(aur chala jata hai
peeche se us k jate hi jeetu anu se kehta hai
jeetu:aay anu bhai ko english bolna aata hai dekh abhi bola na ENGLISH
dono hansne lagay:hahahahahahahahahahhahaah

bhai:paan walay chal paan bana(aur heera ko dhoondne k liye nazaren dorata hai)
rex:kauno pan
bhai :woh heera aaaaaaa aahem ahem
rex :tumka bhi heera paan chahiye
bhai:ye kaunsa hota haimain paan waan nahgi khata 😎
rex:to hiyan ka time pas karne ahat rahat humra bhi time bheste karat hohero banta hai bara chal nikal single pasli phigure to dekho"patlee kamar hai ....... terchi nazar hai hai....."
bhai:oooopsssss(agar police walay na hotay to dekh leta is ko) 😡
aur shamit insult ki waja se idhar udhar dekhta hai aur bhaag jata hai;

JAVED:shankar wo paan wala itna taiz hai kuch dekhne hi nahi main gaya tha wahan (us ki nazron main wo sceen aa jata hai jab rex ne sab k saamnae dance kae kar k us ka mazaq uraya tha
rex:kitni baar bolonnnnnn hiyaan heera paan naaahi milat naaahi milat phir bhi aa jatay ho sathiya gaye ho kaaa samjh naahi aata budhay khoosat kahin k tumri bv gati hogi "main kaaa karon raam mujhay budhaa mil gaya ... 😛 😛)aur wo chonk jata hai aur embaress ho jata hai 😳 aur kahta hai kk tu ghadha hai 😡
kk aur sm bhi a k be ijati kara k aajate hain rex k haathon

udhar police ko bhi shak ho jata hai jab rex cheekh cheekh k sab ki beizati karta hai aur baar baar heera pan heera pan karta hai

ye dono ye gangs buhat pareshan hotay hain k heera aakhir gaya kahan aur us motay se nikalwaya kis tarha jaye aur song aata hai sab gangs gatay hain
"janay kia hoga mola reyyyyyyyyyyyyy
jnay kia hoga raama reyyyyyyy"

ye dono gangs alag alag faisla kartay hain k ab ye teeno saath jaingay paan ki dokan lootnay 😆
aglay din dono gang co incidently saath hi chalay jatay hain aur rex un ko dekh k kahta hai
rex:aooo aaooo ka baat hai aaj heera paan k saray umeed war saath hi agaye kaunoo baat naaahi aaj tuhaar waste lay kar aaya hon heera paan eee lo ajao bhai heera pan lay k
phir charon taraf cbi k log phil jatai hain aur unhain arrest kar letay hain aur pata chalta hai k rex koi paan wala nahi asal main cbi officer tha
aur police walay humesha ki tarha dekhtay hi rah jatay hain.

Originally posted by: Anton

So guys yai hai meri story 😃

Is story ki cast he

Qazi
Ruprekha
Arijit
Arpita
Rex
Monica
sandeep
Ila ji
Parshant
Padma

or story ka name he Shamit ka murder

SO,
7 bohat hi ache friends hote hen Qazi , Rex , Arpita , Monica, Shammit , Sandeep.Yai log ik din mil ker program banate hen ,kisi hill station per jane ka ,holidays guzarne ke liya . Yai idea Rex ke mind me ata he wo Qazi se kehta he ke : Hey Qazi bohat din ho gai, kaheen mil ker nhee gai , kion na kisi hill station jaya jai is dafa ?? Qazi man jata he or wo sab ko apne sath mana ker hill station per le jate hen.
Wahan per Rex ka apna eik Guesthouse hota , jahan per yai sare dost thehrte hen . Wahan per yai log her jaga jate, hen enjoy kerte hen . Ab in ko yahan ai huwai 3 days guzer jate hen or 4th day ki suba in logon ne mil ker skiing ka program banaya hota he . Arpita suba uth ker sab ko utati he or sare uth jate hen per shammit nhee ata . Sab kehte hen Shammit kahan re gya , to qazi kehta he me dekh ker ata hon , wo jab dekhne jata he too shammit ka murder ho chuka hota he . Qazi chila ker sab ko bulata he wahan per , sab dekh ker pareshan ho jate hen . Arpita or Rupprekha roo pertii hen or behosh ho jatii hen Qazi police ko call kerta he . Kuch der me wahan police ajati he (Ila Inspector ) Padma or Pareshant Constables . Wo kehte hen jab tuk ke Katil ka pata nhe chal jata app me se koi yai city nhe chor sakta .
Ab police investi. kerna shoro ker detii he . Ila sab se pochti he ke Shammit ki kiss se larai huwii thee ? to sarai ans kerte hen ke: Kuch time pehle Shammit or Qazi ki kisi bat per kafee larai huwii thee. Pir ans me Qazi kehta he keh : Bad me hamare beech dosti ho gae thee . Pir wo pochti he ke Shammit ke bajo wala room kiss ka hai ? Wo room Arijit ka hota he . Arpita boltii he mene rat ko Arijit ko Shammit ke room me jate huwai dekha lekin wahan se wapas ate huwai nhee dekha . Sab ka Shak Arijit per ajata he . Per sath me sare kehte hen keh : Arijit or Shammit to bohat ache friends hen , arijit aisa kesa ker sakta he . Police sab ke finger prints leti hai or imvestigate kertii he . 2 days bad Police again ati he or Kehti hai ke Shammit kai room se sirf Arijit ke Finger prints mile hen or ager koi or saboot mila Arijit keh against to wo us ko arrest kerlen gen .
Arijit pareshan ho ker ro perta he , or kehta he mene nhe mara Shammit ko . Arpita ki statment se or Finger print report se sab ka shak Arijit bun jata he .
Pir usi rat ko Qazi Pani pine keh liya kitchen me jata he , wahan us ko lagta hey ki Arijit ke room me koi gya he ,,, per wo itna notice nhe leta or wapas amne room me araha hota he to USe arijit ke room se ajeeb c awaz ati hai . wo us ke room me jaker dekhta he too rex us ka murder ker raha hota he . Qazi rex per chilata he or us per vase utha ker rex per marte hen . Rex forun Qazi per attack kerta he apni knife se per qazi bach jata he or us ke sir per again vase mar ker us ko behosh ker deta he or sab ko bula leta he . Sandeep police ko bula leta hai or Police aker pochti he to qazi sare story batata he kai wo Arijit ko bachane me late hogya . Pir police rex ko hosh me laker arrest ker leti he or us ko umer kaid ki saza ho jatii he.
Rex hamesha ke liya jail chala jata hai.

The End 😃

Originally posted by: koenigbobo

SO matz here iz ma story .

Sony selected me to spend 1 day wiv ma fav contestent YANI Monica

Jiss din muje maloom huwa kai muje Monica ke sath ik din spend ka chance mila he to 😃 i was vry happy me khushii se saree rat soya nheee or suba 5 a.m per uth gya muje samajh nhee araha tha ke kesii dressing keroon pir mene black jeans or black t-shirt pehnii or perfume ki 3 bottles laga laga ker khatam kerdali....

Pir me gurukul ke bahir gya us ka wait kiya... pir wo bahir aii ... pir us ne mere sath apni nazren milain ...
or us ne muje bohat pyar se 😊 cute sa smile diya or hamare beech mai yai bat huwii....

Monica: Hello sameer how are you ? 😊
Sameer: eeemm ehaam ehaam jii ? 😳
Monica:😆 Mene Pocha Kese ho ?
Sameer: 😳 Me theek hoon ... Tum no mera matlab he ap kesi ho ? 😳 😳
Monica: 😆 Am fine.. 😆 or tum muje tum ke sakte
ho 😊 or yai tum itna sherma kion rahe ho confuse kion lag rahe ho. 😆
Sameer: 😳 no am not confuse . 😳
Monica: hmmmmmmmm well shall we ? 😊
Sameer: oh sure .😃

Wo mere sath meri car me bethii.. 😳 😳 mere liya jese wakt ruk sa gya ho. 😳
hamari car me yai baten huwii............

Monica: so sameer wot do u do ? 😊
Sameer: 😊 S.W.A.T ki training le raha hon. 😊
Monica: Oh nice . 😃
Sameer: Actually Monica am a big fan of urs 😳 mene
kabhi app ka sorry tumari koi perfomance miss nhe
ki. 😳
Monica: Really Thank you so much. 😊

Hum sab se pehle Cinema gae..wahan hum ne sath me movie dekhi movie me ik song tha.
Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhukne lage.
Bat aker zuban per rukne lage.
Ankhoon Ankhoon me Iqrar hone lage..
Bol do ager tume pyar hone lage.

Is song ke doran mene us ko dekha.. us ne muje dekha or hamare me is songs ki feelings ane lagee.. hamen laga ke yai song hum per he 😳 😳 wo bhi tora sa sherma gae 😳 or smile diya muje dekh ker 😊 mene dil me socha LERKII HASII TO SAMJOO PASII 😃 😃 😈

Pir movie ke Happy ending ke baad hum coffee shop gae.... wahan per wo mere samne bethii theeeeee or me us ke samne thaa... mou se kuch nhe bol rahe thee ankhen sara kuch bol rahee theen... kabhi wo sherm se nazer jhuka letii kabhii apni pyar bhari nazroon se muje dekhtii .... us ke chehre per ik ajeeb c kashish thee or ik cute c smile thee 😊 😊 itni der me waiter aya or bola sir your coffee... wo coffee de ker chala gya hum ne pir se eik dosre ko dekhna shoro kerdiya.. pir..

Monica: 😊 Sameer , 😊
Sameer: 😊 yeah 😊
Monica: Sameer tumari coffee 😊
Sameer: 😒 han han pii raha hon 😊
Monica: Aisai kya dekh rahe ho 😳
Sameer: Tumari eyes 😊 Bohat khobsorat hen 😊
Monica: 😳 thnkxx .. meri eyes ko choroo or coffee piyo.
Sameer: Tumari eyes me dekhta hon to dil kerta he dekhta jaon. 😊
Monica: 😳 😳 😳 Sameer shut up
Sameer: 😊 "Mast nazaron se kyon dekha, agar tamanna thi aazmaane ki ,hum to yoon hi ghayal they, kya zaroorat thi muskurane ki" ......me kahan kuch ke raha hon me to bus tumari eyes ko dekh raha hon 😊

pir mere dil me us ke liya yai lyrics ai

"Baat chalii teri aankhon se, jaa pahunchii paimaane tak
kheench rahi hai terii Muhabat aaj mujhe maiKhaane tak"

Pir hum wahan se shopping kerne gae .. raste me hamare me yai baten huween .

Monica: sameer tum jab dressing kerte ho, to tume kiss cheeez ka sab se zyada dhayan kerte ho ? 😊
Sameer: Mere Hair or meri Hand watch i love hand watches .
Monica:ooo nice !
Sameer: or tum ?
Monica: hmmm hairs like u....or my purse 😊
Sameer: hmmm wese bhi lerkian sab kuch bhol sakti hen per Purse nhe bhoolti... 😉
Monica: Lagta he bohat saree girlfrnds hen 😛
Sameer: Noo bohat zyada nhee 😊
Monica: Yani ke toree hen 😊
Sameer: 😊 Sirf frnds hen wo or kuch nhee 😊
Monica: ooooooooooooooooooooooooo sirf frndz nice .. lerke bhi frnds hen ya khali lerkian ?
Sameer: 😆 😆 arey hena bohat hen 😊
Monica: to GF koi nhee he ?
Sameer: nop koi pasand nhe aii ..
Monica: koi tume nhee pasand ai ya kisi ne tume pasand nhee kiya? 😆
Sameer: Aisa hi kuch samjhoo 😉

Pir hum shopping centre me gae ... wahan per us ne mere liya ik hand watch gift ki or mene us ko ik perfume...

Phir hum dinner ke liya gaee ... wahan per bethe the or..

Sameer: Monica.
Monica: hmmm ?
Sameer: me bohat der se tum se kuch kehna cha raha hon😳
Monica: To kahoo . 😊
Kabir: hmm wo kya he woo main ...
Monica: haaan kahooo bhii .
Sameer: Monica wo chaloo choroo pir kabhii sahii 😊
Monica: 😕 kya ke rahe ho ?
Sameer: kuch nhee ..

Pir hum ne dinner kiya or me us ko wapas gurukul chorne gya ... pir GK pohnchne kai bad .. wo mere sath car me thee..

Sameer: so GK agaya .
Monica: hmmmm
Sameer: Arey kya huwa pareshan kion hoo ? meri koi bat achi nhe lagee .
Monica: NO NO aisa kuch nahee hai .
Sameer: To phir ???
Monica: Sameer tum mujse kya kehna chahte the ?
Sameer: 😊 Kuch nahee
Monica: jhoot nhe tumari eyes kuch or bol raheen hen
Sameer : 😊 jab tum eyes per hi sakti ho to samaj jao kya bat he 😊
Monica: Khud mou se nahee bol sakte . 😊
Sameer: "Teri aankhon mein dekhi hai,Pyar ki chahat humne, Juban se ikrar kar lo, to yakin ho jaye...
Monica: 😊 Me jatii hon ab 😳 😳
Sameer: Muje jawab nhe mila abhi tuk .
Monica: KOi jawab nhee he mere pas .
Sameer: Yani ke "NO"
Monica: 😲 mene aisa nhe kaha .
Sameer: Yani ke "YES" 😛 😛
Monica: 😳 😳 gtg now
Sameer: 😆 alright bye
Monica: bye

or us ne jane se pehle mere liya yai song ga ker jawab de diya 😳

Monica: Hum dil de chuke sanam tere ho gae hum teri kasam 😳😳😳



so guyz yai thee mere sab se khobsorat din ki kahanii 😊


Toree der baad awaz aii sameer betaa uth ja ab bohat suba ho gaee he 😉