VeeBa OS 'Love in the house of the enemy'

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok so Nikki wanted me to write an OS on the poll i created 😆 so here it is.

VeeBa OS
"Love in the house of the enemy"

Baldev learned that Veera had been adding the tablets into his milk. He was heartbroken yet a part of him had full faith in her that she might not love him the same way he does but she won't purposely harm him in any way, and this didn't even involve her veerji.
He kept driving his jeep trying to think of something that would give him some peace of mind and then he passed by a familiar place that made his blood boil, even the sight of that place reminded him of bitter memories.
But still he stopped his jeep there and went to that place which was his enemy Rajveer's old house, it was sealed but Baldev broke the window and got inside, and by chance he entered the room that had Veera's photos and cut outs, Baldev's anger had no bounds, he never knew that Rajveer owned so many photos of Veera.

Baldev broke the chair that was placed in that room and taking the one of the legs he broke everything else.
He started hitting a cut out.

Baldev; asli pe to haath utha nhi sakta main, kyun k bht pyar kiya tha aur shayad zindagi bhar krta rahunga, isiliye tujhe me nhi chodunga, yahan Rajveer k saath maze kr rhi thi na tu.

he kept hitting the cut out until his frustration lowered.

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Veera was searching for Baldev and she saw his jeep parked outside Rajveer's house and the light lid inside.

Veera; Baldev Rajveer ke ghar pe kya kar rha he?

Veera got inside through the window Baldev broke and found him sitting on the floor in that room which had her cut outs. she saw the destroyed room and her torn pictures and broken cut outs. She sat down and took Baldev's face in her hands.

Veera; tu ithe ki kar raha he?

Baldev; tenu kya? kahan he tera dawai wala doodh de pee leta hun phir chali jana menu pagal khane me bharti krwa k thand paa le tu itne naataq kyun kr rhi he

Veera; Baldev menu maaf karde main..main teri bhalai waaste kr rhi thi,tu khud hi bta jabse doodh me kuch milaya he mene tabse tu chen ki neend so rha he na, tenu ab pehle ki tarah har baat pe gussa nhi ata tu kitna shant hogya he pehle ki tarah hone laga he, tenu kitni waari dr. k paas chalne ko kaha par tune meri baat nahi maani.

Baldev; tune khud kyun nahi bataya menu ke tu menu dawai de rhi thi jab tenu dikha k me theek ho rha hun? kyun menu dusre tere aur mere beech ki baaten batate hen? Kyun har baar koi teesra hamare beech main ajata he bol? kyun tu kabhi apne veer ko abhi us do take k thanedaar ko hamare beech lai kyun tune mujhpe itna shaq kiya ke phir beeji bhi hamare beech agai Veera kyun?

Veera took his hand in both of hers.

Veera; main tenu batane hi wali thi par meri qismat..jab bhi menu lagta he sb theek hojayega tab hi sab ulta hojata he, menu maaf krde Baldev, iske baad hamare beech koi teesra nahi ayega

Baldev; tujhpe bharosa krne ko dil to krta he pr...kya pta phirse tu menu dhoka dede

Veera; nahi dungi Baldev i promise, ab chal yahan se

Baldev; nahi

Veera; kyun?

Baldev pulled her close and traced her face.

Baldev; isne hamen juda krne ki koshish ki thi na! ab isi ke ghar me hum ek honge

Baldev stood up and pulled Veera too.

Veera; kahan ja rha he Baldev

Baldev; uska kamra konsa he bta? tenu to ye bhi pta hoga wo sui dhaga kahan rakhta tha

Veera; kya? Baldev ye kya hogya he tenu chal ghar chal

Baldev; bta uska kamra konsa tha?

Veera; wo wahan

she pointed towards a door.

Baldev; sab pta he na tujhe, uska kamra bhi dekh rkha he tune?

Veera; nahi dekha mene..is ghar me sirf 2 hi kamre hen, common sense naam ki bhi ek cheez hoti he.

Baldev picked her up and carried her to that room and lay her on the bed.

Veera; Baldev tu kya kar raha he? chal please ghar chalte hen

Baldev; tu chup chaap padi reh

he went outside and the returned with some rose flowers in his hands, he threw the petals on the bed.

Veera; Baldev?

Baldev; dushman ke ghar pe suhagraat ka maza hi kuch aur hoga

Veera; suhagraat? Baldev please kisi hotel me chal ghar nahi jaana to par yahan se chal

Baldev towered her.

Baldev; kyun? tenu bada dukh hoga ki?

Veera; acha krle apne mann ki, me kuch bolungi to tenu lagega main Rajveer k favor me hun.

Baldev smiled and kissed her, she kissed back and they were lost in their perfect moment.
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Bars thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So u chose rv's house 😆 I really luved how ballu was hitting veera's cutouts.. The convo of veeba was too cute too.. Perfect update!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!!! You seriously wrote? 🤣 👍🏼 Now i need to know how jeep wala SR happens 😆😆 pls write that next 😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bars

So u chose rv's house 😆 I really luved how ballu was hitting veera's cutouts.. The convo of veeba was too cute too.. Perfect update!! 😊

have to write on 3 machan and baldev's jeep are left 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

OMG!!! You seriously wrote? 🤣 👍🏼 Now i need to know how jeep wala SR happens 😆😆 pls write that next 😳😆

okay 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: overactor


have to write on 3 machan and baldev's jeep are left😆


Oh I am waiting. Write soon 😊 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all 🤣 !!!

tenu to ye bhi pta hoga wo sui dhaga kahan rakhta tha😆
I loved it ! ☺️ would love to read more !!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that is insane!!! rajveer's house???? and ballu 😲,but i should this is a unique thought 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: a4aarsh

that is insane!!! rajveer's house???? and ballu 😲,but i should this is a unique thought 👍🏼

ikr 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Jenvita_Neha.

First of all 🤣 !!!

tenu to ye bhi pta hoga wo sui dhaga kahan rakhta tha😆
I loved it ! ☺️ would love to read more !!! 😃

😳 thanks jen 🤗

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