VeeBa FF ~ Ek Ajeeb Prem Kahani!! part 11; pg21 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: evanna_rocks


😆😆koi gall nahin...😆😆

shukriya ji😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!Dis is such a beautiful story Eva!👏🤗My heart is so heavy wid pain..Ihope Veera is stopped..Nd plz dnt mk Baldev get married to any1 else..Plz?😭Love u so much for dis!Nd da link!Update soon!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

OMG!Dis is such a beautiful story Eva!👏🤗My heart is so heavy wid pain..Ihope Veera is stopped..Nd plz dnt mk Baldev get married to any1 else..Plz?😭Love u so much for dis!Nd da link!Update soon!🤗


sina di...thnk u...and veera will go...and baldev will get married...and the rest is the twist😉😉...hope everyone will like it😕😕...and the ending as always is veeba...so dont worry...😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey😕...u copied my style of writing haan???😆😆
Edited by evanna_rocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
waww awesme update Love it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mr.-Parfect

waww awesme update Love it ❤️


thnk u😉...glad u liked it😳😳...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnk u all🤗...for your loving comments...srry for the late update😕...so here is twists u all were waiting for...

Part 4
After 3yrs...
at the airport, ranvi was waiting impatiently for veera with his 3yr old daughter, gunvi {😉}...
gunvi - pappaji...bua kab aayegi???
ranvi - bass aathi he hogi vo...gunvi tu thak gayi hai ki?? paani lao kya??
gunvi - nahin pappaji...mennu bass veera bua se milna hain... mene bohot tasfeeren dekhi hain...bohot sundhar hain vo...main bhi badi hokar unhi ki tarah banungi...
ranvi - haan haan tu bhi bilkul meri veerakdi jese he banogi...

suddenly gunvi screams...ranvi was shocked...
ranvi - ki hoya gunvi tu kyun chilla rahi hain???
gunvi - vo dekhiye pappaji...bua...(she points smwhere)
ranvi - (looking at tht direction) haan...(screams) veera...veera main ithe hoon yahn aa...

veera,wearing a pink and blue kurta, was coming with her luggages...wen she spotted ranvi...she came to him...ranvi hugged his sister...she also hugged him...after sm time wen they broke the hug...gunvi was staring at veera's beauty...

gunvi - veera bua...aap kinni sundhar ho...
veera - (who was seeing gunvi for the first time..she had only heard her voice) thnk u...gunvi kinni pyaari hain tu...
gunvi - blushed...
ranvi - acha abb chal beeji, chaiji, gunjan sab indezaar kar rahe honge tera...kinni saal baat aayi hain tu...
veera - haan ji veerji...(thinking) pata nahin...baldev abhi bhi vaha hoga ki??

at veera's house...
wen veera entered she was astonished...the whole house was fully decorated with flowers, posters, etc...ratan, chaiji and gunjan came and hugged veera...
ratan - (crying) kitne saal hue tumse mil kar...pata hain ghar kinna soona lag raha tha tere bina...
veera - (crying) haan beeji...mene bhi aap sab nu bohot miss kiya vahan...
chaiji - oye cheechiri...apne beeji aur veerji ko he gale lagaye gi?? apni moti chaiji nu bhool gayi??
veera - (smiling and in a teasing way) moti chaaiijii...(hugs)
chaiji - ha..haan ji...pata hain teri ye sharaaratein kinni yaad aarahi thi mennu...lekin ye gunvi hain na...ye toh bilkul tere jaisa banna chahthi hain na...isiliye bilkul tari harqatein karti hain vo...kyun gunjan puttar...
gunjan - haan veera...gunvi na badi hoke teri tarah banna chahthi hain...kyun gunvi??
gunvi - (shyly) haan...😳😳
veera - (pulling her cheeks cutely) acha...meri pyaari si gunvi apni veera bua ki tarah banna chahthi hain...haan...
ratan - acha veera puttar jaake samaan sab kamre vich le jaa aur kapde badal le...
veera - ji beeji...
ratan - khaana abhi lagaoon kya?? bhook lagi hain tennu??
veera - nahin nahin beeji...abhi nahin...raat ko he khaaloongi...
ratan - acha theek hain...
veera runs into her room...after changing she went down...
veera - veerji vese...ek gall poochu??
ranvi - haan haan...pooch na...
veera - vo...baldev ki shaadi hogaya?? matlab main uske shaadi main shaamil nahin thi na...toh isiliye poocha...
ranvi - (disturbed) voh...veera...tere jaane ke baad bohot kuch hua hain yahan...
veera - (impatiently) ki...ki hoya veerji???
gunjan - voh...veera...voh muskaan haina...voh asal main veerji ke dost jaggi se pyaar karti thi...aur ussne eh baat veerji nu batayi...toh unhone unn dono ki shaadi karwali...
veera - ki??? matlab muskaan ne jaagi se shaadi kar li...toh fir baldev ka ki hua??
gunjan - veerji...ne abhi tak shaadi nahin ki...
veera - (thinking) matlab mennu ek aur mauka mil sakta hain...iss baar main koshish zaroor karoongi... kal main baldev nu apni dil ki baat bataoongi...

how was it guys??😕😕 hope u liked the twist😳😳...pls do like and comment!!





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: evanna_rocks


hey😕...u copied my style of writing haan???😆😆

yes,dear i copied from u??i love ur writting style...i hope appko koi pareshani nahi hain ji😆evanna ji😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
gunvi!!!😲ranvi aur gunjan ki beti...wow...superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
plzzz...continue ..i'm waiting for the update

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