VeeBa FF ~ Ek Ajeeb Prem Kahani!! part 11; pg21 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Good one. Keep updating Evanna. BTW have you gone through Bidzie's OS Betrayal? It's awesome check it out.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: feck

Good one. Keep updating Evanna. BTW have you gone through Bidzie's OS Betrayal? It's awesome check it out.


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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome and Fabulous update 😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update continue soon 😊
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Originally posted by: cuteBiya

Nice update continue soon 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

thnx...😛
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thnx...😉
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thnk u all for your comments🤗...and srry for late update...

Part 8
Veera was crying very badly... thts wen she heard a knock on her door... she wiped her tears and opened the door...
gunjan - veera tu darwaaza band karke ki kar rahi thi andar??
veera - ku...kuch nahin bhabhi... aap batayiye kis vaaste aayi thi aap??
gunjan - aree haan...main toh bhool he gayi... voh beeji ne mennu bheja tha... tujhe taiyyar karne vaaste... voh log aaj shaam ko aarahein hain na...
veera - theekhe...
gunjan - (showing a purple & blue salwaar kameez) veera tu yeh pehna haan aaj...
veera - ji bhabhi... vese balwant tayaji aur taiji aarahain ki??
gunjan - haan... unko bass abhi he beeji ne phone karke bata diya... aur veerji bhi...
veera got a bit uncomfortable wen she heard baldev's name...

at the evening...
balwant, bansuri & baldev arrived at veera's house...
balwant - sariakal ji...
ratan - sasriakal... aaiye na balwant bhaaisaab...
everyone settled down... they were busy chatting... but baldev was very restless... after she cut her phone, wen he called her her phone was switched off... thts wen the sound of car screeching, came...
ratan - lagta hain vo log aagaye...

everyone went to welcome them...
ratan - sariakal anjali ji... aaiye...
anjali(boys mom) - sasriakal...
boy - ji... sasriakal...
they all sat in the hall...
ratan - puttar tera naam ki hain??
boy - ji aunty mera naam parmeet hain...
ratan - bohot acha naam hain...
ranvi - tum kya kaam karte ho parmeet??
parmeet - main ek business man hoon...
ranvi - acha... bujiness karte ho... bohot changi gall hain...
anjali - toh ratan ji...apni beti ko bulayiye na...
ratan - ji... shouts *veera... gunjan, veera nu neeche le aao...*

veera comes down... baldev was mesmerized by her beauty... she came and sat in a chair...
parmeet - hi... main parmeet...
veera - (not smiling) hi... main veera...
baldev was very angry... his blood was boiling with anger... he couldn't tolerate anyone talking to veera...
anjali - toh veera... tumne kahan tak padhai ki hain??
veera - ji maine college poora kiya hain... aur maine england main 3 saal ek university main padhai ki hain...
anjali - vaah...bohot achi baat hain...hamein toh kudi bohot pasand aayi...kyun parmeet...tumhe veera pasand aaya hain ki nahin??
parmeet - haan... mujhe bohot pasand aayi... mere taraf se haan hain...
ranvi - veera tu kuch bolti kyun nahin... tumhari taraf se haan hain ya na??
veera - (looks at baldev) meri taraf se bhi...ha...haan hain...

baldev was shocked... he couldn't believe wat he was hearing...
balwant - vaah ji... matlab rishta pakka hua... aree ratan parjaiji sabka muh meetha kijiye...
chaiji - haan ratan...ja kuch meetha leke aa... aaj toh main bhi meetha khaaongi...
everyone laughs... except for 2 souls... they were looking at each other as though they are talking with their eyes...
##eye talking##
baldev - kyun kiya veera?? kyun kiya tune esa?? tujhe kabhi mera khayaal nahin aaya??
veera - main kya karti baldev... kese kehti ki main tujse pyaar karti hoon...shayad meri kismat main yahin likha hain...
##eye talking ends##
ranvi - oye veerakdi...ithe aa... aapni muh toh meetha kar... inni khushi ka mauka hain...
veera - ji...veerji...

everyone was very happy... and was going on chatting... veera was sitting silently... baldev was very sad, angry and heartbroken... now wat will he do?? how will he get his sherni back??

how was it guys??😕 srry for the short update... pls do hit a like and comment!!!😉😉😳


Edited by evanna_rocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice twist Evanna. BTW what is Baldev's profession?

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