Jo tu mera hamdard hai-VeeBa OS ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello all😃
Im here with another OS..
This story has been written by my best friend Rashi, on facebook😛 she is a diehard VeeBa fan and this is her first work on VeeBa😃
for some reason, she couldn't post this herself on IF, so Im doing it for her😳
Please read and give your reviews😃




VeeBa Returned to their Pritampura, Bt Still Both were in a beautiful dreamland,where only 2 persn lives "VEERA & BALDEV"

Now veera ws nt the same who went to poland, She ws new! New by her feelings!

Aftr Pand Return, She thought many times to Accept her feeling, infront of Baldev Bt failed due to many hurdles!

There, Baldev could feel Veera's changed behavior for him, He could now sense something! He said to himself,

"Veera, Kya chal rha hai tere dil me??!! Kya jo main soch rha hu.. Jo main samajh rha hu kahi tu bhi..." (And he smiles,his Eyes were Sparkling like always)

Meanwhile, in love environment, Neither Ratan n other knows abt veera's feeling nor Veera knows wht there family is upto? A lady adviced Ratan, that veera Is grown up now, and there is a best Rishta for her! Ratan discusses this all with other family membrs,excluding Veera! The day came when, Boy's family were to have meetimg wid veera n her family at her home! She ws told By Ratan that she has to dress well! Coz some Relatives are abt to visit them! She said ok!

Baldev thought "2 din ho gye veera ko nhi dekha,kuch adhoora sa lag rha hai" and she decides to visit her home!

He reaches there Ratan offer him, Some sweets to eat, Meanwhile ladke wale Reaches too! And Ratan,Ranvi,Chaiji n Gunjan Welcm them! Baldev couldn't get it all,

They sat And Ratan said Gunjan to call veera! veera comes smiling, and veeba had an eye lock!

Ratan: " Bhaisahab ye h humari veera, delhi se padhi hui hai bht hi samajhdaar hai, hume iske liye aapke bete jaisa padhe likhe ladka hi chahiye humari veerakadi ke liye"

*Baldev n Veera in shock!, Baldev smashes Sweets which she had in his hand" and says "Mujhe kch kaam hai main chalta hu, he leaves the home, veera couldn't stp him"

Boy's family cmpltd their meeting, and nw the family told to Them that they would take decision aftr Veera's Yes or no!

It ws 8:00pm, Veera- Baldev confronted in a mid-way! Baldev with anger in his eyes, he stepped forward, Bt veera stopped him n said "baldev sun mainu tujhse kuch kehna hai" Baldev: "Kehna hai? Mujhse?Kyun tera wo padha likha dilli ka, use suna jo sunana hai, aur hat parey" Veera: "Baldev aaj mainu kehna h, aur main keh ke rahungi bas"(She holds his hand tightly and take him to pondside place"

Baldev "Oye bahut ho gya tera smjhi!" Veera: "Baldev... Kaise samjhau tainu, main.. Mainu kuch nhi pta wo shaadi di baat,Main nhi krna chahti usse shaadi! Kaise btau tujhe, jab se poland gye hu, main bas ek bande ke baare main soche ja rhi hu aur wo banda...

Baldev cuts her sentence " Aur wo Banda Sahil hai? Mainu laga tha, samajh jana chahiye tha mainu"

Veera:"Saahilll?? Main sahil se pyaar krti hu?? (Veera turns, nw Baldev is standing behind her) Haa actually na, Main sahil se pyaar karti hu, Isliye toh Jab bhi main tujhe dekhti hu, meri dhadkane tezz ho jati hai!

Ha main sahil se pyaar karti hu, Isliye Maine,humare naam ka taala us bridge pe lagaya...

Ha main Saahil se pyaar krti hu Isliye Teri takleefe, mujh dard deti hai!

Ha main Sahil se pyaar krti hu isliye Tumh...

Baldev Forcely holds her hands, and turns her towards him And Softly,Calmly hugs her

*Veera is in shock*

NOW veera too tightly hugs him!

No words, No signs, But they confessed...They expressed their feeling for each other.! For few mins. They were at same position

Bt then, Veera's nails were hurting baldev's back!

Baldev Said calmly "Oye Veera..."

Veera :"hmm.." Baldev:"Oye maana, main tainu sherni bolta h, par iska matbal thodi na hai ki tu sach me apne vadde2 nakhoono se mujhe ghaayal kare?"

Veera take off her hands and she angrily gazes him. And says

"Oye tu toh pind da sher hai na? Pind da mard? Tujhe kabse dard hone lga?"

Baldev Keeps her hands at her waist and pulls towards him, and stares her wid sparkling eyes

Baldev: "Ha dard nhi hota tha mainu, Jab tak main sirf pind da sher tha!

Ha dard nhi hota tha mainu, jab tak main sirf pritampura da diler mard tha...

par ab dard hone laga...

ab in sab ke saath2 Ab VEERA KA BALDEV hu,

Aur ab Tere baldev nu dard honda hai, Jab bhi ye apni sherni ko dard me dekhta hai, Jab bhi Lagta hai ki main tainu kho dunga toh dard bhi hota hai aur darr bhi lagta hai"

Veera, *Compltly losted in Baldev's eyes and his words*

Veera :"itna pyaar? Kab hua tujhe, mujhse?" And tears came frm her eyes, Baldev wipes it And says, "Oye ro q rhi h? Veera : "Bas apne liye tera aankhon vich inna pyaar dekh ke..,"

Baldev : "Tujhe itna pyaar kb hua mujhse?"

Veera :" Shayad jb tu... Nhi shayad... Ummm... Pta nhi" Baldev: "dekha!, Pyaar kb hota hai, kaise hota hai nhi pta chalta"

And both Hugs again, Veera Crushes on him

And thus, The stars, The moon, The pond witnesses, this most beautiful confession ever by 2 lovely souls, which is now 1


Please 'like' and 'comment'😃

Thank you for reading🤗


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..rashi.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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TFS😊...
type your friend that it is a good os😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice os...no nice word would be understimating your os ...i mean ur friend's os...this veeba os is SUPER..DUPER...AWESOME...i have no more words to explain this fantastic os...why no one is commenting😡..all are lazy ones...this os deserves a 100 comments...thank you so much to your friend for writting such a beautiful os and also to you to take the pain to post it on the forum for us...keep it up...looking forward to more of ur os's...and love u lots!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjanatamannah

very nice os...no nice word would be understimating your os ...i mean ur friend's os...this veeba os is SUPER..DUPER...AWESOME...i have no more words to explain this fantastic os...why no one is commenting😡..all are lazy ones...this os deserves a 100 comments...thank you so much to your friend for writting such a beautiful os and also to you to take the pain to post it on the forum for us...keep it up...looking forward to more of ur os's...and love u lots!!!!!!!!!!!



Thanks for your review😊
unko pasand aayega toh woh comment karenge, nahi aaya toh nahi karenge, isme angry honewali baat nahi hai...😳

but thanks for reading...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi...

TFS😊...

type your friend that it is a good os😊



Thank you dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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and yes...thanks for the song humdard in the bg😉...
..IshqShava.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi...

and yes...thanks for the song humdard in the bg😉...



Welcome😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS Vibha...Please convey it to your friend Rashi...and tell her to keep writing...wonderful imaginations and loved the title and the song😳...thanks for the OS🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing OS😳 hope ur friend write more OS like this and share with us.. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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absolutely loved it vibha ,such a cute os,i'm mesmerized by the way veera confessed her love 4 baldev

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