Tu sirf mera hain- Veeba updated in page 2

Friends I have actually become mad after the Poland track has started. I'm sharing my pagalpan with all of you. It is based on all information we got from the articles and SBS/SBB segments. Please give me your feedback

[Baldev returned to the firm house about an hour ago. He has searched every corner of the firm house, but couldn't find Veera. He called her numerous times, but most of the times there was a network failure, twice the phone rang but she didn't pick up the phone. He was worried and restless. He finally decided to go out to the streets again and search for her...right then Veera returned. She was wearing a lovely red & white long grown type dress( sorry friends, I don't know the name)and was looking quite gorgeous...Baldev literary run to her ...]

Veera!!!...kitthey gayee thi tu?

Woh Baldev...thujh se ki matlab? main kahin bhi gauoon...

Veera...pichley EK ghante se main tenu is firm house ke kone kone main dhunda...tu kahin nahi thi...phone bhi kiya...tune phone bhi nahi uthaya...kahan thi tu????he sounded really angry.

Veera quickly took her mobile from her purse...there were two missed calls from Baldev. She was nervous...Baldev...mera mobile silent mode peh tha...main sun nahi payee

Par tu thi kitthey?? he became extremely irritated.

Main Sahil ke saath ballet show dekhney gayee thi...replied Veera very boldly.

Wah...inhaan main pagalon ki tarah tujhey dhoond raha tha...aur tu...Veera...kam se kam ek phone to kar deti jaane se pehle...

kiun...kiun bataun main tujhe...

Dekh Veera main tere pariwar se wada karke aaya hun ke tenu koyee bhi taqlif nahi hone dunga...

Oye...rahne de. Teri zimmedari ki pehchaan hain menu...Baldev tu na yeh drame bazi bandh kar...

Aacha toh tenu yeh meri drame bazi lag rahi hain...

Aur nahi to ki...wahse bhi Baldev, mainu khud ko sambhalna aata hain...

Phir toh ho gayee baat khatam...both kept mum for a while...Baldev calmed down and said in an affectionate tone

Dekh Veera... yeh hamara Pritampura nahi hain...videsh hain ...mainu pata hain tenu aangregi aati hain par tune dekha na yehaan to log AAngregi bhi nahi samazte...baas ek bar bol deti toh main bhi chalta tere naal

Tere paas fursat hoti taab chalta na...dekh Baldev tu phir se mujhey irritate na kaar...Agar tenu saachi me meri phiqr hoti na to tu...tu us kudi ke pitchey dum hilata hua nahi jata

Aare kitthey gaya tha main...woh faaloon se bhara busket usse uthaya nahi ja raha tha, usne issare se mujhse madat maangi, toh main main gate ke bahar uske Gaddi taq uska basket paucha key aa jaya.

Aur is main tenu 3 ghaante lag gaye...dekh Baldev jhoot maat bol

Oye...main toh 15 min main wapas aa gaya tha par tu inhaan nahi thi...tune kaha tha tenu Mr Neil se milna hoga, toh main ne socha tu wahan gayee hogi...phir bhi main aadhey gante tera intizaar kiya...jaab tu phir bhi nahi aayee toh main Firm house key us taraf gaya toh tu wahan bhi nahi thi...[Actually there were two ways for getting to Mr. Neil's office, Veera took the short cut and Baldev took the longer one, hence none of them had seen the other]...phir main tenu dhune woh baari sarak par us moorti ke paas gaya, whan se woh bridge taq gaya...paar tu kahin nahi thi...phir main raasta bahtak gaya...paal paal Bahe Guru se yehi dua karta raha...tu jaha bhi rahe sahi salamat rahe...woh toh raabji ki kripa se ek aadmi mil gaya jisse "Mr. Neil ...firm house" bolne se usne mujhe inhaan chod diya

Veera stood there like a statue...she didn't knew what to answer...

Inna sab kuch hogaya aur tenu laga ki main us kudi ke pitche gaya hoon...Veera main ek paal ke liye bhi aapna wada nahi bhoolta...he moved away angrily and sat on a wooden bench nearby.

Veera slowly moved to her and put her hand on his solder...he was struggling for breath due to anger..

Baldev...please mainu maaf kar de...pata nahi ki hogaya tha mainu...mainu laga tenu meri koyee parwa hi nahi...kahin peh koyee kuri dikh jayee to tu uski ke pitche chala gayega...please maaf kar dey mainu...tears were dipping down her cheecks...Baldev calmed down and first wiped her tears and said...

tere aansoo mujhse dekhe nahi jaate...par tu mainu ek baat bata...agar main kisi aur kudi ke pitchey jaoon bhi toh tenu ki fark padta hain?

Veera got furious...nahi jaa sakta tu

kiun?

main neh keh diya nahi jaa sakata...baas nahi jaa sakta

Paar kiun???

to be continued...

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Wow! 😛 I love ur Veeba obsession..! 😆 Plz.let it grow wilder and fast! 😃 I want to read more!Plz update fast yaar?No pressure but how about in a minutes? 😈

Awesome!!i cant wait to know what happens next,pls continue soon and if u could i wud really appreciate translations to the dialogs,cuz i'm a non indian and am still trying to learn the language 😃

Awesome
Loved it.
Continue soon, will be waiting eagerly.

Wow! This is a intersting Start :) Continue ASAP!

Friends thanks for your feedback. Here is the final part

Veera ran into the cottage. Baldev sat on the bench again. He was thinking in his mind yeh sherni ko kaya ho gaya. Veera had locked the cottage door, but she was looking at Baldev from the window. She didn't knew why he could not take her eyes of him. Suddenly she questioned herself "yeh ki ho rahi hain mainu? kiun us Bandar se nazar hata nahi paa rahi hu main, kiun mainu laga woh us kudi ke piche gaya hain? kiun main bardast nahi kar pa rahi yeh? kiun har par uske paas rehne ki maan ho raha hain mera? kiun? he raabji yeh ki ho raha hain mere saath?"

Baldev had calmed down completely, but sitting on that bench he tried to remember what Veera had said to him. "Woh us Shahil se saath show dekhne gayi thi? is Shahil ka toh kuch karna parega...soch Baldev soch..." He stood up for going to his room but suddenly looked towards the cottage windows, he could she Veera and she could not hide her smile, Baldev also smiled at her and moved to the other cottage where he was staying.

After freshening up Veera was sitting at her Bed and thinking...Keya eh sab sirf mere saath hi ho raha hain, Baldev ko jalane ke liye main Sahil se saath gayi thi, par woh toh kuch react hi nahi kiya...Lekin use meri itni fiqr kiun hain? keya sirf is liye ke main itni dur aayi hun or woh mere pariwar se wada kar ke aaya hani ki woh meri khayal rakhega, yah phir sirf dosti ke naate?...Keya woh mujhe ek dost se barkar kuch nahi samajh ta?...ki karoon...keya main Sahil ke aur karib jaane ki natak karoon...lekin agar use kuch gatat faimy ho gayee to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paoongi...soch Veera...soch...Nahi isse pehle ke baat hath se nikal jayee mujhe pata lagana hoga Baldev keya sochta hain mere bare main...Par kaise...IDEA...

Baldev was sitting on his bed and muttering to himself...Sahil...tuje toh main sabak sikhake rahunga..pura pritam pura janta hain Baldev Singh he hath uthte hain to saamne wala uthta nahi..is duniya se uth jata hain. Teri himmat kaise hui mere Sherni ko bahar le gaane ki...suddenly his mobile rang

Veera...tu abhi taq soyee nahi?

Nahi...Baldev, mainu need nahi aa rahi...sun na...mainu na tujh se ek jaroori gaal karni thi...tu ek baar mujhse mil sakta hain

Inni raat ko...Aisa ki gaal karni hain...

Woh main tujhse milke bataungi...Baldev jaab taq main tuh se yeh gal na karloon mujhe neend nahi aanewali.

Aacha ata hoon.

They met near that wooden bench again. Veera had intentionally changed her dress and wore the dress she had wore for going to the party. Baldev was stunned.

Tu abhi taq change nahi ki

Nahi Baldev...actually mujhe change kar ne ka maan hi nahi hua...Yeh dress kinna aacha hain na

Pehle kabhi toh tune aysi dress nahi pehni...chaad woh saab, bol keya zaroori jal karni thi.

Oho Baldev...baith na...pehle eh baata main kaisi lag rahi hoon?

Veera...pagal ho gayee ki...inne raat ko...

Bata na kaisi lag rahi hoon

Aachi lag rahi hain

Pata hain yeh dress mujhe Sahil ne gift diya

Veera...suddenly his voice turned in to a roar. Veera could see the injured tiger in him.

Janta hain Baldev aag main ne aur Sahil ne aaj bohot mazee kiye

Keya yeh hi tera jaroori gal hain...Veera mainu neend aa rahi hain

Keya Baldev main apni khusi tere saath share karna chati hoon aur tujhe neend aarahi hain

Koosh hain na tu...toh khoosh rahe...lakin Veera ek baat yaad rakhi tu yehaan koye kaam waste aayi hain...Aur woh Sahil...main kaal Mr Neil se milunga...keh dunga sambahl le aapne chamchey ko...nahi toh...

Keya baat hain Baldev tu inna gussa kiun ho raha hain?

Baldev didn't answer...he slowly started to move away and while moving he pick out something from his pocket and threw it on to the grass bank and walked away...

Baldev...Baldev sun...sun Baldev. He didn't looked back. Veera quickly moved to the grass bank and found a nice chain with a wonderful pendent. She saw it in a shop two days ago, she liked it very much, but it was very costly, that's why she didn't purchased it. Baldev had noticed he reaction then, but didn't say anything.

Baldev...rukh ja Baldev...she ran to Baldev and grabbed him from behind and then moved in front of him. Tears were dipping down his chicks.

Baldev...yeh chain...

Yeh haar tenu bohot pasand tha na Veera...main aaj Shyam koh kisi kudi ke pitche nah gaya tha...tenu waste yeh haar lene gaya tha...paar tujhe toh aur badda gift aur baddi khusi milgayee.. Agar tu khoos hain toh main bhi khoos hoon.

Baldev...please maaf kar the mainu...tujhe jalane ke liye main Sahil ka gift accept kiya tha us ke saath show dekhne gayi thi...Please Baldev...maaf kar de mainu...

Veera...baas ek baat yaad rakhhi...tu sirf mera hain...Koye ullu ka patha tujhe mujh se chin nahi sakta...

Veera gave him the tightest hug she could and then broke down in tears...kiun karta hain inna pyaar mujhe...kiun nahi bataya aaj tak...

Mainu pata nahi...pyaar ki honda hain...par tere bina main ji nahi sakta...Veera...tu sirf mera hain

Aur tu bhi sirf mera hain Baldev...sirf mera...Suddenly they heard somebody clapping and approaching them...it was Sahil...

Thank god Neil Sir ne mujhe hindi sikhaya tha and hindutaniyoon ke imotion ko samaj na sikhaya tha...nahi to is wonderful moment ka main witness kaise hota.

Veera and Baldev were still hugging each other...they were socked

Aare tum dono ko first day dekh ke hi main samaj gaya tha tumhare beech kitna gehra pyaar hain, paar koye aage hi nahi barta...is liye maine intentionally Veera ko gift diya aur use show dihane legaya...the trick has worked...Ladies and Gentlemen here I present to you and adorable Indian couple VEEBA.

OMG! This was so amazing. I just loved it!! Great job.

This was wonderful. Loved the confession part,
But One small correction, "It has to be Veera tu sirf Meri!" 😆
Otherwise the emotional quotient was wonderful 😳

Good work...nyc ending.👍🏼

Originally posted by: Nayana21

This was wonderful. Loved the confession part,
But One small correction, "It has to be Veera tu sirf Meri!" 😆
Otherwise the emotional quotient was wonderful 😳

Thanks mate. Next time I will be careful. Actually I say the lines in my mind and which ever sounds correct I write.👍🏼