dedication of my poem to veeba.edited!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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baldev has a untold care and attraction towards veera which is from birth...from their childhood...in their teenage hood...and in their adulthood now too...

i wrote a poem of a friend who is not with me anymore,mean we are not friends like the old time..i wrote this when i was returning from my school in my auto because of my sadness..iam a malyalee from kerala..but i know hindi tik tak...i am in 10th only...dont steal or copy the poem...no copyirght...comment and like only...
if this poem is taken by anyone...i will cry!!!!!!!i would like to dedicate this to my veeba too..this also explains their relation.dont steal!!!!!!!!!!



teri yaadein har pal mere zindagi mein ghassitkar
koye huye apnapan ko mehsoos karvarkar
tere liy jo dhosti main sambhal kar rakha,
tujse nafrat ka naatak karke kudhko bhi nahi sambhal paati main aaj...


ek samay tha...
naam tere apne zindagi main sabse aage rakhta tha...
aaj ussi naam se judi huye har ek cheez se nafrat ka deewar kada kar diya maine...
kamzori nahi hai yeh meri...
sirf taakat hai meri wafadhare ki...
mere kissise jude huyi purane dhosti ki rishte ki

dushman ho tum mere
aisa pehchan maine dhoshit kiya tuje
kitni koshish karun?
apne aap ko yeh ehsaas dilaane ka
jitne vyarth ho mere humdardi tumhare saamne
kabhi lagta hai laayak bhi nahi hai tere pyaar ke

apne aap se sheeshe mai dekhkar poochta hun
kya mujme itni shakti hai ki mai tuje bhool pavun...


hasta hai teri chechra toda jab tuje nazar aata hai muje
sirf ek jaan pehchaan ki nishaani chod dene keliye
lekin jo rishta itne gehre tha
tootne ke saaman hai ye jo aanjana ki kathardhaari
jisse tumne salkarith kiya muje

hope u all like it...i wrote about my childhood friend from 1st standard who does not remain my friend anymore...this is the last poem iam writting about my friend...thats why iam posting this!!!!!
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sanjanabaldev thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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please my friends...say howz my poem...i wrote it on my own about my friend...who is not my best friend anymore...say howz it?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great post and very nice poem ...A long way to go yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww... so sad its abt ur friend! sorry darling abt the rift. Don't worry! like they say be it love or dosti - if its true, you'll never lose it. True friendship and true love wins over all odds.
Great writing! awesome! keep fine tuning your skills. You'll reach the stars someday. And probably we might be reading Author Sanjana's poems or fictions in futurešŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dis is beautiful dear!Pain etched in da lines...very good work! ā­ļø Keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u guys...i wrote it in the moment of pain when my friend ignored me...the mark of strong writing is in the paper because of my pain...hope to get feedbacks..love u guys a lot!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks tehsina di and everyone for liking it!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjanatamannah

tere liy jo dhosti main sambhal kar rakha,
tujse nafrat ka naatak karke kudhko bhi nahi sambhal paati main aaj...

ek samay tha...
naam tere apne zindagi main sabse aage rakhta tha...
aaj ussi naam se judi huye har ek cheez se nafrat ka deewar kada kar diya maine...
kamzori nahi hai yeh meri...
sirf taakat hai meri wafadhare ki...

dushman ho tum mere
aisa pehchan maine dhoshit kiya tuje


OSM!! sanju di...these r my favourite lines in the poem...(which r bold)...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: evanna_rocks


OSM!! sanju di...these r my favourite lines in the poem...(which r bold)...


thank you my little princess evu...iam glad you liked it..the funny thing is that at that time i just wrote down some lines to vent out my pain and it actually turned out to be a poem..each of the words in each senctences speak my heart out...thanks everybody for commenting!!!!love u all!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow sanjana .😳...heart touching lines snd pain was beautifully expressed .😭😊..and u r a malayali ...great to know that😃...i think u dhould write more poems...beautifull lines expressing emotion directly from heart😊so sorry for rift btw u and ur friend

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