VEEBA FF "TUM HI HO AB TUM HI HO"
Hey peeps it me annie u can call me wishi I'm new on this forum and this is going to be my first veeba ss so plz bear with my mistakes... nd a big thanks to all who encouraged me to write this ss ok enough of my bakwaas here goes my ff (it is after wen baldev jumps from veeras window)
Part 1
Baldev: ooi meri taang !! ; He said in pain while roaming around his pind
Kaisi nagin hai yeh bina dasey hi apna zeher phela gayi!! mujhe bhi bara pyaar araha tha nah uss nagin pey jo main ussey dekhney chala gaya !!
As soon as he finished talking he just realized what he had said a second ago
B: oye nahi koi pyaar vyaar nahi aa raha tha mennu uss pey main toh bas dekhney gaya tha kay who ki kar rahi thi!! ; He said trying to convince himself
While talking to himself he never noticed tht he waz going to bump into someone and them DHUM!! They banged onto each other. He recognized it waz someone whom he loved banging into her fragrance always had some magic on him. It was his sherni! His veera ... wait a minute did he just say his veera... he didn't know what was getting on to him
V: baldevaa! Dekh kay chal nahi sakta tu andha ho gaya hai ki !! dekh nahi sakta terey samney sey koi aa raha hai ! Huh? ;she yelled at him with all her anger on the face
Her screeches were like melody to his ears but after such a betrayal it was like mocking of his love which he never realized. He had been wounded but never showed that this petty little drama in her words had broken him down inside. he wanted to flush out all the pain in once which he did the very next moment .
B: HAAN! Main andha hoon !! sahi bola tu ney main hoon andha isliye toh terey is masoom say chehrey ke piche ka asal raaz nahi jaan paya! Menu lag ta tha kay tu kisi kay saath bura nahi kar sakti ! sahi tha main tu kisi kay saath bura nahi bohot bohot bura kar sakti hai ! main hi gadha tha jo soch ta tha kay tu kisi kay naal inna vadda dhoka nahi kar sakti !! ; he said flushing out all his agony ... he had never been so depressed even when his own father used to rebuke him
V: baldev meri...
BAS AB MENNU KUCH NHI SUNNA SAMJHI; HE ROARED WITHOUT LISTENING TO HER AND STOMPED AWAY
Veera was knew that baldev was hurt but she never knew he was so hurt that he would not even listen to her. Veera have seen an angry baldev a lot more than 100 times but a broken baldev was someone she could never bear to see . veera knew how does it feel to be betrayed then how could she do it the person who had always supported her whenever she needed a friend. She left with a heavy heart . she had just seen a nightmare in the daylight which she could never imagine.
percap: another biggest shock for baldev in his life which he could never imagine after that baldev has broken down completely nd tries to hurt himself+ lots of veeba romace
Guyz I know it waz short but plz do let me know if I shud continue ? criticisms and advices are welcome if u liked itt plz hit the like button