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hey guys i'm sana here again after a vry long time. i got vry gud reponses for my story new veeba one kiss and confession. i actually don't remember the exact name of my story but its quite sumthin like this .No more talks and here goes my story.
And i'm giving the english translations only beacause of zainabawoon coze in previous story she asked me to do so. I'm sorry if i wrote
its like after the scene where baldev discovers veera pretending to be in love with him.
Veera thinks that now Baldev will do anything to win the elections so she plans a trick against Baldev. She thinks that whatever she did with Baldev was wrong but she can't ket him win.
Scene: the bridge or whatever it is where ranvi usually sings his melodramatic songs.
Baldev: (heartbroken)Veera, aye tune acha nhi kiya. main to tujhse sach mein pyaar karta tha . par tune to mere naal aur mere pyaar de naal dokha kar ditta.
( Veera, wat u did wasn't correct. i loved u with all my heart. but u betrayed me and my love.)
He was really heartbroken. he sobbed the full night. He cried untill it was morning. He didn't even realize that he didn't sleep the whole night. His eyes were blood red. He had lost confidence in him of becoming a sarpanch for his village.
The vry morning baldev returned back home. Balwant was sitting at the dinning table and drinking tea. As soon as he saw Baldev, he got up and stormed towards him.
SLAPP!!!!
The sound of slap echoed in Baldev's ears for nearly minutes.
Balwant: Oye nalayak! teri inni himat kaise hui?
( O u useless! how dare u?)
Baldev: (confused and angry) Oye papaji, maine ki kiya?
( Dad, what the hell did i do?)
Balwant: tune ki kiya. teri himmat kaise hui veera nu dhamki dene ki?
( What u did, how dare u threaten Veera?)
Baldev: papaji, maine kab dhamki di Veera nu? Wo na zaroor jhoot bol rhi hogi.
( Dad, when did i threaten Veera? She must be lying.)
Balwant: CHUP KAR BADTAMEEZ!! Veera ne mainnu sab kuch bata diya hai. Tu chunav jeetne ke vaste ranvi ko chot pohchane ki koshish kar rha hai. Par ik gal na tu yaad rakh, jab tak main hu, ranvi de shareer pe ek chhoti si kharonch bhi nhi aane doonga. SAMJHA!!!
( SHUT UP U IDIOT!! Veera has told the entire matter to me. For winning the election, u wanted to hurt ranvi. But do remember one thing, as long as i'm there ranvi will not get a scratch also. UNDERSTAND!!!)
Baldev: Wah papaji wah, Veera pe inna bharosa or apne puttar pe itna sa bhi nhi. main jab kah rha hoon ki maine koi dhamki wamki nhi di hai , to kya apnu mera yakeen nhi ho rha?
( Wow dad wow, So much trust on Veera, and on ur son not even a bit. When i'm telling u that i didn't threaten Veera. why are u not believing me?)
Balwant: Mainnu teri koi gal nhi sunni.
( I don't wanna hear anything from u.)
Saying this he marched away from the house.
Again poor Baldev was heartbroken. He couldn't believe that Veera could do such a cheap thing. He decided to stay away from her.
Scene: Veera's house.
All were busy in election preparations. On the other hand Veera was rejoicing. She was talking to herself.
Veera: Bechara Baldev!! Mainnu maaf kr dena. Par kya hai na ki main kisi bhi halat mein tujhe jitne nhi de sakti thi. Ab to tennu bohot kam vote mileinge.
( Poor Baldev!! Pls do forgive. But u see i can't let u win at any cost. Now u see, u are gonna get the least of all the votes.)
On the othe rhand, Baldev decided to quit the elections cause he didn't have more courage to tolerate his father's taunts.
He thought
Baldev: aye kya hogaya. Veera itni gir jayegi, mainnu to andaza bhi nhi tha. ab to mere naal koi bhi nhi hai. Papaji to bachpan se hi nhi the, Gunjan to Ranvi de naal ho gyi hai, Aur beeji ab tak jo mere saath thi , kuch paison ke liye Ranvi ke taraf ho gyi. Mainnu pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha ki beeji ache hona da natak kr ti thi. bachpan se.
( What happened? Veera could stoop so low i could never imagine. Now i'm left all alone. Dad was never with me since childhood, Gunjan is with Ranvi and my mom, till yesterday she was standing with me . But today just for some money she joined hands with Ranvi. I should hve understood that she was pretending to be nice towards me. From childhood.)
At the ground where the pind usually has the sabhah, all were gathered for the elections. It was one day before the result. The candidates were Ranvi Bakhtawar and Baldev. Everyone apart from Baldev was present for the result.
All started to worry about Baldev. Suddenly he entered and everyone got relieved.
Billa: Oye paaji! kahan the aap inni der se?
(Hey brother! Where were u so long?)
Jaggi: Haan , bataiye na . kahan the aap?
( Yes. tell us where were u?)
Baldev was still silent.
Veera: Oye wo ki hai na ki Baldev na dar gaya ki kahi woh chunav har na jaye. Shayad is vaste woh nahi aana chahta ho. (smirks)
(Hey, the thing is that Baldev got scared that he will loose the elections. Maybe that's the reason he didn't want to come here.( smirks))
Balwant: Sahi kaha. Aur tu Baldev, tennu to darna hi chahiye. Kisi kaam ka toh tu hai nahi.
( Correct. And u Baldev, u should be scared. Anyways u r useless.)
Baldev still did't utter a word. This shockes everyone. Veera felt something wrong but then forgot about it thinking that it must be his new plan.
Baldev: Main...*pause* main iss chunav mein khada nahi ho raha hoon!!!
(I...*pause* I am not standing in the elections.!!!)
Everyone was shocked. Baldev's face clearly showed that he had been crying the whole night and had not slept.
Balwant: Aye tu ki kah raha hai puttar ? {He keeps his hand on Baldev's shoulder}
(What are u saying son?)
Baldev moves Balwant's hand off his shoulder with a force.
Baldev: Kyun, aap mujhse kyun sawaal poonch rahein hain ki main kyun oeeche hat gaya? Aap bhi to yahi chahte the na ki main iss chunav se peeche hat jaon. aur waise bhi ab mujhe aap ke aur taane nahi sunne hain.
( Why, why r u asking me this that why did i back out? Anyways that's what u wanted right that i should back off . And now i don't wanna hear any taunts of ur.)
Saying this he left. Veera was shocked. The campaign went on and got over.
Next day Baldev was with his chamchaas drinking tea at a small stall. Veera was passing from there. She saw him and thought to pass some taunts.
Veera: Baldev, tu peeche hat gaya. Bohot changa kitta tune.Ab na mere veerji nu jeetne se koi nahi rok sakta. Aur waise bhi tu to dar gya ho ga na ki tu kahin har na jaye? {raises her eyebrow twice}
( Baldev, u backed off. Well done. Now no one can stop my brother from winning. And anyways, u must have got scare that u mght loose the elections?)
Veera thought that Baldev would react and yell at her, but the opposite had happened. He didn't say a word. His eyes started to fill with fresh tears. His chamchas didn't notice but our sweet veera did. She was confused and shocked. Confuse because she didn't know the reasons behind his tears and shocked beacause she had never seen him crying.
Baldev just walked away like this. veera didn't like it.
i know its boring. but tell me should i continue or not.😊
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