As per they current track, there can not be any love story between VeeBa in the near future and even if happens it can not be a traditional lover story. Some wild thoughts were running through my mind. I tried to pen them down and came up with this os. Please give me your honest feedbacks.
[The result of the Sarpanch election has been declared, as you all know Ratan has been elected as the Sarpanch. That evening Baldev was sitting near the "Purana Kuwa" of his pind. He was devastated. Suddenly Veera came there...]
oye Baldev, kee hoya...oooh aab tu ki karega...tera inna badda sapna chrur chur ho gaya...chu...chu...chu. ...Kaha tha na tenu...burai ki kabhi jeet nahi hoti...ai bhi kaha tha apna josh bacha ke rakh...Jab mere Veerji jitenge to tujh se dholok bawaungi main... ai le mere Biji ke jitne ki mithai kha...aur ai dholok baja... she extends the dholok towrads him.
Veeraaa...tu ja inha se...mainu tang maat kar...ja
oye...ki hoya...tu inna dukhi kuon hain...ai to hona hi tha...Sarpanch banega...oye koye kabiliyat hain tujh main...kar... ...jitne waste aur galat or bure kaam kar... ehi hoga.
Baldev stands up and kicks the dholok away...bura hu a main...bura hu na...aaj tu dekh...kinna bura hu main...he picks up Veera in his sholder and starts walking...
Baldev...baldev...chod ..chod mainu...utar neeche... Baldev didn't stop...Vera Kept kicking his chest with her knees...but in vain. He took her to an abandoned stable near to the end of the pind and tied her hands from back with a pole of the shed.
Bura hun na main...aaj tenu dikhata hun ...kinna bura hun main...said Baldev while taking his shirt off
Baldev...chod ...mainu...tu ai ki karne chala hain...tu mere sath aisa nahi kar sakta...
Baldev sat near her. With a very innocent expression said..."nahi kar sakta?...oye kiun nahi kar sakta...tu meri bahen ya biji to hain nahi...ek ladki hain...tab kiun nahi kar skata"
"Baldev...chod menu...mere Veerji ..teri Jaan le lenge"
"Kon ...Ranveer?...wah Veera...keya joke mara tune"...he sat very close to her..."oye agar jaan le vi liya...to jo tu khoyegi...woh wapas to nahi ayegi na...tenu aur tere pariwar nu barbad kar dunga main". He hold her chick and come very close her...Veera had started to Shiver...suddenly...he stopped.
"oye main ne toh kabhi dhyaan hi nahi diya ke tu kinni khoob surat hain...he picked up a feather and started moving it on veera...yeh tere Pankhuri...jaise honnth...yeh gora badan...aur yeh tere...he starts to move the feather down her lips and stops at the end of her throat...aab saab mere honge...he throws away the feather and hold the chick of Veera...and came ever so close to kissing her "...meri buraiee ka tenu andaza tak nahi hain...par ai to zarror pata hain na chahu to keya kar sakta hun tere saath...par kisi kudi ki izzat ke saath khelke...mainu kuch sabit karna nahi hain...ja chali ja inha se"...he unties her hands...Veeara stood up so does Baldev...Vera tires to slap him but he holds her hand and hold it very hard...she was in pain...
"Kaha na tenu...chalija...abhi chalija..." Vera started to leave...Baldev stood there facing backwards to her...as Veera was nearing the exit...she noticed a sharp dagger hanging from one of the poles...she pulled it down and turned around and came Very quietly back to Baldev
"Baldev...tears were pouring down his chicks as he turned around...Vera hit him with that sharp dagger..."
"Maaa...screamed Baldev...and stumbled to the ground, he was bleeding very badly...the accusing glare in his eyes said how could do this to me...you never understood me...Veera also looked stunned for a while...then threw the dagger away and left form there. She didn't noticed stains of Baldev's blood on the sleeve of her kurta.
As she was nearing her pind she saw a few elderly man had gathered...they were gossiping...one of them said..."Yeh Baldev bhi ajib pagal hain...kaal tak bol raha tha...mainu vote do...aur aaj matdan ke din sab ko bola Ratan Chachi ko vote do mainu nahi...pagal kahin ka". Veera approached them
"sastikaal ...Tau ji"
"Oh Veera puttar...saktikal"
"Tau ji yeh keya keh reh they aap log...baldev ne..."
"Haan puttar...usi ne hum saab se bola tha Ratan Chachi se zayadah kabil aur koyee nahi...aap log mainu nahi...unhe vote do...aisa nahi ki humme parchaijee ke kabiliyat ke koyee saq tha...lekin dil nahi maa raha tha...ek janani hamare pind ki sarpanch kaise ban sakti hain...phir Baldev neh hum se kaha tau ji mard ko jamam denewali ...MAA hamesha ek janani hi hoti hain...baas hum sab ne upne vote parchiji ko de diya aur woh jeet gayee...aacha puttar, hum calte hain...sastikaal". They all left. Vera stood there like a statute.
Bahggi and Manni were coming...they didn't notice her...both of them were drunk...
"oye manni... mainu kabhi...Baldevpaaji ke soch samaj main nahi ayee...Ranveer pe hum la hum kilya...aur ilzaam unho neh upne sap pe le liye... aur to aur aaj apna vote bhi...Ratan chaiji ko de diye"
"oye aise hi humare Baldev paaji...suchha hira hain woh"... and they left.
Things were becoming blur in front of Veera's eyes...she didn't knew where she was heading...luckily her feet took her to her home. She could not sleep the entire night. More than anything else she was scared. She kept questioning herself why did I hurt him. "Woh to mujhe dara raha tha...koye zabardasti nahi ki, mujhe chuwa taq nahi...phir kiun maine use pe war kiya...he rab ji agar woh mar gaya toh...mere paas toh koye saboot bhi nahi ke usne kuch galat kiya tha...she cried all night.
[Next morning Ratan got a call]
"Ji..bhai saab hum saab abhi aate hain"...she hung up the phone. "Ranveer...Gunjan...Veera...Chaiji...jaldi au sab log...except Veera everyone came rushing...Baldev pe kisine humla kar diya ..woh Hospital main hain...abhi Balwant Bhai Saab ka phone aaya tha...keh rehe they Baldev behoonsh hain...bohot Gehra jakhm hain...humme abhi hospital chalna hoga...Veera...Kahan hain tu.." Vera came out very slowly...she was having fever. Ratan aksed her to stay back at home with chaiji...but she went with them. As they reached the hospital...the Doctor came out and Said to Balwant
"Agar unhe laane main itni si bhi der ho gaati to unka bachna na mumkin tha...par abhi thik hain...lekin behoonsh hain"...he turned towards Ratan..."sarpanchji...maaf karna...yeh aisa mamla hain humme police ko khabar karna hi para...Inspector saab aate hi honge. Ratan nodded affirmatively.
Soon the Inspector arrived. He quired Bahggi and Manni...
"Baldev tum logo ko kahan mila"
"Saab...kaal raat hum do no nashe ke haal main rasta bhatak ke "purani kuwa" ke taraf chale gaye they, bohi humme Baldevpaji pare hue mile. Bohot khoon beh rahi thi saab...hum ne paaji ko Hospital laya...aur Tauji ko khabar kiya..."...said Bahggi.
"Keya... tum ne kisi ko dekha"
"nahi saab"
"hmmm...aab to baldev se hi pata chalega...keya huwa tha"
Around midday Baldev came to his senses...everyone went to meet him...Veera stood at a corner in the room. The Inspector asked " tume yeh chot kaise lagi Baldev"
"Saab ...main nashe main tha...purane tabele main kuch kaam kar raha tha...lakri chirte waqt katar laag gayee"
"Baldev...hum 20 saalon se Police ki naukri kar rahe hain...bohot murder case dekhe hain maine...aise zakhm sirf katar lagne se nahi hoti...such bolo Baldev kisne war kiya tha tum par...aur tum hospital kaise pauche"
"Saab...such keh rehe hain...kisi ne mujhpe war nahi kiya...main hospital hi aa raha tha paar Purane Kuwa ke paas gir paare"
"Tum us tabele main kiun gaye they...woh to barso se biran para hain"
"Woh humari pustehni tabela tha saab...main use saaf karke ek chota ghar banana chata hun...aab wohi rehna chata hum"
"Agar tum ne thaan liya hain ke tum saach ahi bologe toh thik hain...lekin Baldev...police ke bhi apne tarike hote hain...hum tehkikat karenge...aur agar tum ne jhoot bola toh tume bhi saaza hogi...tum smaz nahi rahe ho Baldev...Doctor Saab se pucnho...is humle main tumhari jaan ja sakti thi...raabji ka sukar hain...tumare dost tumhe sahi waqt peh yahan layee"...Baldev looked at Bahgii and Maani and smiled.
"Mainu aur kuch nahi kehna hai saab"
The inspector leaves. The Doctor asked everybody to leave...Veera was approaching the bed...
"Baldev...". He put his hand up and didn't even looked at her and made a gesture to say "Get lost".
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Veera was madly kissing the wound on Baldev's chest. He was half dressed and so was Veera.
"oye Veera ki kar rahi hain...mainu gudgudi hoh rahi hain". She was in no mood to reply or stop. Suddenly Baldev pulled her up and rolled her over to put her underneath him.
"Bohot dino se is paal ka intezar tha mainu...aab tu dekh Veera... kis Sher se pala para hain tera. He locked his lips with her's. ...Veera was hugging him as tightly as she could. She was loving every moment of it...The time had come... It was their first night.
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Ratan was preparing to wash some clothes. In that small heap of clothes she found Veera's kurta and noticed the blood in it.
"Veera...ek bar edhar aaa."
"Ji biji"
"ai kurta tune kaal shyam ko pehna tha na"
She was shocked. "Veera jawab de mainu"...
"Ji...biji"
"Is main ai khoon kaise lagi Veera"
She didn't knew what to answer..."kuch poonch rahi tujhse...jawab de mainu"
"Biji...woh...yeh...yeh ...khoon nahi...baas lal rang hain...woh Veerji ke prachar waste maine poster likhe they na...tab lag gaye"
Ratan dipped the sleeve of the kurta into water and squeezed the water on to Veera's plum. It was evident it was blood and not red colour.
"tere kutre main khoon kaise laage...jawab de mainu"...she look very angry.
"Biji...ki hoya"...Ranveer came running in.
"Tu isi waqt apne kamre main ja Ranvee...he was still standing...Suna nahi tune...aapne kamre main ja Ranvee..."
"Par biji...". Ratan looked very angrily towards him. Ranvee left... Eventually Veera Succumbed. She confessed everything to Ratan.
[Next morning in the hospital]
"Baldev...AAb kaisa hain tu" asked Ratan.
"Aab thik hun chachiji"
"Is jakhm nu apna taqat bana Baldev...Jab bhi isse dard ho woh tujhe aur bhi buland banade...aur khud ko inna kabil bana ke tujhe kisi se vote mangna na pare...log khusi khusi tenu hi Sarpanch chuune"
Baldev looked embarassed. "Chaci ji...woh"
She took his face in her plums "Puttar...aab tu woh chota Baldev nahi raha...Badda ho gaya hain...apne pyarro pe khar kona hoga tujhe. Tenu Kheta main kaam karna aacha nahi lagta na...toh maat kaar...tu apna karowar karna chahta hain na...wohi kar...lekin sachhyee or imandari karna puttar...she paused for a while..aur tab tak main tere is aamanat ko samal kar rakhungi...she show him the paagri of saarpanch...mujh se wada kar puttar...tu mainu is bojh se jald se jald chutkara dilayega...wada kar..."...tears were pouring down her chicks. Baldev took her hands and touched them to his forehead and started crying like a baby. First time in his life someone had given him affection...someone had shown him the right way.
It took 15 days for Baldev to recover. After that he took a Bank loan and started a Fertilizers shop in his pind and also started studying about agriculture very seriously. The farmers of Pritampura eventually realized they were saving both time and money as they don't need to go to the town to fetch the essentials for farming. Now even the farmers from the neighboring Villages and Pinds purchase fertilizer from Baldev's shop. He not only earns a substantial amount, but also make substantial contributions to any good initiative taken by Ratan.
[Two weeks ago...Balwant's house]
"Balwant bhai saab...woh main ki keh rehi thi...woh baat ..." Ratan was scared to say the rest.
"Parchiji...ki baat hai...aap inni pareshan kiun ho...aur inni hichkicha kiun..rahi ho" Balwan looked surprised.
"Bhai Saab...main baas yeh keh na chati thi...keh...keh...aap ke is...badde se ghar main...meri Veera ko...inni si jagah milegi..."
Balwant almost jumped to joy. "woh parchaijee...aap ne toh humari dil ki baat keh di...yeh sapna to hum kab se apne dil me chupa rakhe they...humsha ehi soch the they...Veera inni pari likhi hain..Zarror aap ne aur Ranveed neh uske liye koye badda sapna dekha hoga...apke bhabnawo ko tesh na pauche baas is liye kabhi keh nahi paya...par aaj toh kamal hi ho gaya..woh Bansuriji jaldi ayeeh..."
Bansuri hurriedly came there "woh ji...ki baat hain"
"Aare Sandhanji aapni Veera nu humme saopna chate hain...bhai maja aa gaya"
Bansuri was socked. "Apne Baldev ki marzi punchi..."
"Oh ji us nalayak se ki puchna...ha maana aab zimmedar ban gaya hai...aapna karobar ko badde tarike se samal ta hai...pind ke kamo main bhi hath baata ta hain...par ushe Saadi---behya ka ki anubhow hai...woh to humme hain...woh Samdhanji...jis tarah aap ne meri Gunjan nu aap ne palko pe bithake rakha hain...usi tarah hum bhi Veera nu apne seense lagake rakhenge"
"Ratan ..tune Veera ki marzi poochi...kahin Gunjan aur Ranvee ki tarah..."
"Bhabi...mainu apne beti ki dharkan ki pehchan hai...aap chinta na karo..."
Although Bansuri was not very happy, but for a change she didn't created any scene or planned anything evil.
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The alarm started ringing. Baldev switched on the light and looked at Veera. He was shocked. She had hardly any cover on her. Baldev pulled the chaddar over her. She woke up.
"oye Veera...ei alarm kahan bajh rahi hai"
"khat ke neeche"
"oye.. is tarah aadhi raat ko alram kiun lagaya tune"
"maine nahi...Gunjan bhabi ne lagaye hain"
"oye...is ki awaz toh uske kamre taq pauchegi hi nahi...aur use kiun aadhi raat ko gagna tha"
Veera was smiling..."behkoof..."
"oye jaab tenu pata tha ki Gujan neh alarm lagaya toh mana karna tha na"
"mana karti to yeh moka kaise milta"...she was still smiling
"matlab?"
She threw away the chaddar and pulled Baldev towards her and rolled over him. She was breathing very quickly..."Intezar to is paal ka mainu bhi tha Baldev...aab tu bhi dekh...kis se pala para hai tera"
She locked her lips with Baldev's...Now it was her turn to become the... Sherni.
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