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This os is based on yesterdays awful sr scene🤢...i just made few changes here and there...
It begins with gunjan coming to room with a glass of milk
gunjan:ranvi tu ab tak ye sab padh raha araam nahi karna tenu...ye le doodh peee...teri pattiyan bhi toh baldani hain menu...
ranvi keeps the papers aside and starts drinkng milk...
one end of the bandage roll slips nd comes to lie near his foot...gunjan strts rolling the other end
ranvi keeps the milk glass on table and smiles naughtily ...picks up the other end of bandage and pulls it ...gunjan looks at him
gunjan:ranvi ye kii masti kar raha hai patti ke saath...chad menu teri patti karne de...upar se bahut saare kaam hain menu..kal subah ke naaste ki tayyari bhi karni hai
ranvi:haan tu subah se kaam hi kare jaa rahi hain...mere taraf to tune ek baar bhi vekha hi nahi...(dialouge delivery and expressions here shuld hav been better )
gunjan:ranvi bacho jaise naa kar ..chad patti kharaab ho jaani hai
ranvi gets up and says teasingly:
ranvi:bas kaam kaam wahi tujhe yaad rehta hai aur pyaar ...pyaar toh kabhi soojta nahi ...he says this nd raises his eyebrow
gunjan nervous and says:ranvi...ye ki masti kar raha hai...menu der ho rahi hai ...main jaa rahi hoon and turns to leaves
ranvi goes to the door and closes it (kal raat nikkammone romance ke chakkar mein door bhi bandh nahi kiya)
gunjan:ye kiii kar raha hain
ranvi:wohi jo menu karna chahiye
he wraps his arm around her waist
gunjan:ran..vi...
ranvi puts his finger on her lips and says sshhh
eye lock
he tightens his grip on her waist and pulls her closer...
he looks into her eyes nd his eyes fall on the loose strand of hair...
he tucks the loose strand of hair behind her ears and touches her ear rings...
he then slides his fingers on her arm and takes her hand into his ...looks at her nd kisses her hand...she closes her eyes ...
she slowly opens her eyes ...looks at him and again lowers her gaze smiles blushing ...she turns nd strts walking towards the couch...
he grabs her dupatta from behind nd pulled her towards him...he takes off her dupatta nd throws it on the floor...
he then traces his finger along her dori and unties the dori...
she turns to look at him...eyelock
he bends to kiss her shoulder and she starts breathing heavily...he gives a small kiss on her neck...lifts her in arms and carries her to bed...he gently places her on bed nd lies next to her
he slightly kissed her forehead nd strts removing her earrings ...she encircles her arms around his neck
he runs his hand across her arm and intertwines his fingers with hers(camera focus on their fingers)...now camera focuses on ranvi's face
ranvi looks at her nd smiles ...she too smiles back nd closes her eyes
he leans in closer for a kiss...lights go dim
Next day morning...both of them sleeping in each others arms ...gunjan resting her head on his chest nd clenching his vest
she wakes up nd smiles blushingly nd looks at him lovingly ...
her hair was falling upon his face tickling him and he finally opens his eyes and sees her looking at him lovingly and smiles ...
he takes her hand and strokes gently and kisses it and caresses her cheek..
knock knock
veera:veerji...
both stunned
ranvi:veera!!!!
both sit on the bed
ranvi:gunjan mera kurta
his kurta is lying near gunjans side of the bed...she gives it to him
he wears it hurriedly and buttons his kurta ...gunjan too adjusts her hair nd dress
he gets off the bed to open the door
gunjan:ranvi baal...he adjusts his hair and opens the door
veera:veerji kii hua aap darwaaja kyon nahi khol rahe the?
veerji ye affidavit mere kehne ka matlab yeh hain ke sapatha patra ke kaagaz hai...inme naa saari jaan kaari hai etc etc...🥱aap na ispe dastak kardo
ranvi:main thodi der mein dastakat karke dedaanga
veera:theek hai and she notices a red mark on his cheek
veera:veerji ye aapke gaa ...her eyes fall on condition of the room...gunjan's dupatta on floor...gunjan sitting on the bed all embarrassed ...
veera thinks in her head:shayad main galat samay pe aagai
veera:veerji main baadme aati hoon and leaves smiling...
ranvi closes the door
gunjan gets off the bed and says ranvi ye kya kaagaj hai
ranvi:gunjan ye sapta patra hai😕...chunav ke adhikaari na iski jaaz partaal karke do din ke baad ummidvaar ke naam ghoshith karenge
while ranvi is speaking gunju notices the lipstick mark on his cheek and she strts rubbing his cheek
ranvi:kii hua gunjan mere gaal pe
gunjan:kuch nahi ...ranvi touches his cheeks and understands it...
he grabs her by waist
gunjan:ranvi tujhe phir se masti sooj rahi hain...chad menu...tenu nahi jaana chunaav office...
ranvi:nahi ...aaj meri kharbujji par pyaar aa raha hai
gunjan:ranvi...she hits him lightly on chest
ranvi cuddles her nose...both smiling ...phone rings
ranvi:ye lo ise bhi abhi aana tha..
gunjan sees that its bansuris call
gunjan:beeji ka phone hai ranvi
ranvi leaves her nd strts reading the papers and gunjan attends the call
ranvi:kii baat hai gunjan
gunjan:pata nahi ranvi beeji ne ghar pe bulaya ...main naha ke chalti hoon
he nods his head ...as she turns to leave...he calls her
ranvi:gunjann...
gunjan:haa ranvi
ranvi:kuch nahi and smiles
gunjan leaves blushing
P.S:No bashing of any charecter...this os has been a result of my frustation after watching the yesterdays scene😭...i tried keeping it as simple as possible😕...cant we audience expect even the simple things😭 ...i wish they had shown it better😡 ..sry for ranting abt the scene again🥱...well i hav nothing more to say🥺 ...sry if i have hurt anyone😭
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