Veeba story: Pyar ka izhar-part 5..update on page 3 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

16

Views

4.5k

Users

8

Likes

50

Frequent Posters

VeebafanSonam thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Sorry for delay..
Will update the next part soon as m too busy in office...
VinithaDhawan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sonam_Piilai

Sorry for delay..

Will update the next part soon as m too busy in office...

Luvd it... Update soon sonam!!!!!😉
❤️evanna
VeebafanSonam thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#13
😲 guys i m facing some issue while posting any reply.trying now frm my mobile.story's next part is ready with me but i cannot posted it due to some technical issue😕
VeebafanSonam thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#14


Veeba Story Part 4- UPDATED


Veera and baldev started their journey towards Preetampura.


Both were silent for long time but Veera who can not sit like this trying her best to talk to him.


But he is like...she can not see this Baldev.. now she started missing their nok jhok.


She thinks for while and laughed very loudly.


He asked:" Ki hoya tenu achank...kahi tera dimag utarke ghutne me nahi aa gaya, hmm? kyu apne daat dikha rahi hai?"


Veera: " oye, me hasu ya rou, tenu ki? apne kaam se kaam rakh and gaddi chala...bakwas na kar tu mere naal, samjha, bewakoof kahika"


Baldev: oye bewakoof kise bol rahi hai tu ha?


Veera: tenu aur koi dikh raha hai kya gaddi wich, bol?


Baldev: Veera...he got angry on her.


Veera looked at him and smiled. He realised that she did this intentionally and she as always win.


Veera became so happy that Baldev came back to his actual sense...


Veera: Baldev.ahhh.ahhh...holding her stomach...


Baldev: Veera, ki hoya, tu thik to hai...ki ho raha hai tenu...


He stops his jeep at one place where Veera can atleast sit.


He then went to Veera and asked her to come out from Jeep.


Veera: Tu pagal ho gaya hai ki? tenu dikahi nahi deta menu kinna dard ho raha hai, me kaise bahar aau..


Baldev now became very afraid seeing her in that situation...


He thinks for while and went near her. He picked her in his arms and made her sit at one stone which was very big at size.


Veera (in her mind): hayo rabba, ee to mene nahi socha tha ke ye menu aise utha lega.


Baldev in very caring voice: Veera tu thik hai na? ki ho raha hai tujhe?


Veera: Baldev pls menu maaf karde, jo bhi hua use bhul ja...hum ek hi baat leke jindagi bhar to nahi reh sakte na.
kabhi na kabhi to hame aage badhna hoga...pls Baldev, menu maaf karde.ye le kaan pakadti hu.bass, ab khush...?


Baldev: iska matlab ee sab natak tha.


Veera: ha baldev, menu e natak islye karna pada taki tu meri baat acchhe se sun sake...gaddi wich to tu menu vekh bhi nahi raha tha.


Baldev: Veera...


Veera: pls baldev maaf kar de pls..pls...plss...


Baldev could see genuiunness in her eyes.he goes near her and takes her hand from her ear.


Baldev: theek hai Veera..maaf kiya. tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi ki Baldev singh ka dil kinna bada hai...


Veera became so happy and offer him a handshake


Veera: to ab hum dost hai na...


Baldev with handshake: ha, pakke wale dost.ab chale? der ho rahi hai.


Veera: ha Chal.


And they again move towards Preetampura.

Edited by sonam_Piilai - 11 years ago
DazzilerDizzy thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Aww..good update after so long..continue dear..
VeebafanSonam thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Next morning Veera was having her breakfast and looking so happy (guys you all know the reason)...


Suddenly her phone rings:


Veera: Hello, Kaun? (she had some convo on phone with someone regarding her KV approval docs)


After 5 mins conversation Veera finished her breakfast.


Veera: Beeji me na Balwant tayaji ke ghar ja rahi hu, wo darasal kya hai na KV waste kuch jaroori kagaz me pind ke sarpanch ke dastakhat chahiye,
to me abhi jake aati hu.


Ratan: thik hai puttar, ja.


Veera reached to Baldev's house:


At Baldev's house everyone was busy doing decorating home, arrangements and all.


Bansuri was busy decorating table and arranging breakfast on it.


Veera was confused after seeing all this. She went to Bansuri and asked what is all going on?


Bansuri: Veera, wo kya hai na mene na Baldev ka rishta pakka kar diya hai. aaj wo ladkiwale sagai ki baat karne ke waste aane wale hai.


Hearing this Veera was completely loss of words and dont no why sudden disappointment came on her face.


Veera: Bansuri taiji, kya baldev iss rishte waste maan gaya?


Bansuri: wo kyu nahi manega, itni acchhi kudi hai, mere puttar ke sath uski jodi bahot hi changi lagegi.


Suddenly world became finished for Veera. She herself was wondering why she is not liking it abd why she suddenly started feeling jeaslous on...wait...
Veera in her mind, whats her name? where are she from? how she lookes and most importantly did Baldev meet her??? bunch of questions came into her mind.


Veera: par me ye sab q soch rahi hu, menu ki farak padata hai agar wo bewakoof kisi ke bhi sath shadi karle.


She turned back to leave when Baldev arrived there.


Baldev: Veera tu itthe?wo bhi inne savere savere? kuch kaam tha?


Veera: ha wo menu na KV ke in kagzat pe tere dastakhat chahiye the, par lagta hai tu busy hai...koi gal nahi me baad me aa jati hu...


Baldev: arey Veera koi baat nahi, tera kaam jyada jaroori hai.la de, me dastakhat kar deta hu.


Veera: Baldev pehele padh to le.


Baldev: menu tujhpe pura bharosa hai Veera. He signed that papers and give them back to Veera.


Veera: Thank you Baldev, waise menu tujhse ek baat pucchni thi.


Baldev: ha Puuch na, ki hoya?


Veera: tune us kudi nu dekha he ki? kya tu usse mila hai? kaisi dikhti hai wo? kya naam hai uska?


Baldev: bas bas Veera, kinne sawal puchegi aur aur kaunsi ladki? kya bol rahi hai tu?


Then Bansuri arrived there.


Bansuri: Puttar mene baat to ki thi kal tujhse jab tu sheher gaya tha, wo darsal na mene tere waste kudi pasand kar li hai aur wo log na aaj roka
karne waste aa rahe hai, isiwaste ee sab taiyariya ho rahi hai.


Baldev who was in shock looked around at his home which was fully decorated with flowers and gave very angry look to his Beeji.


Baldev: Beeji a sab ki hai? mene aapse kitni dafa kaha hai ke menu nahi karni shadi, aap bhi na bas hadd karte ho. menu nahi karni koi shadi wadi.


Bansuri: par puttar kabhi na kabhi to tujhe shadi karni hi hai na, aur ye mat bhool ke tune mujhse wada kiya hai. ab to tujhe wada jaroor pura karna padega, samjha,
ab ja aur taiyar ho ja.


Baldev could not say anything further as he dont want to hurt his beji and dont want to break to promise.


Baldev: thik hai beeji?
he made face and turned back when he was realised Veera was still standing there.


Veera who was standing like broken heart could not believed that Baldev can ever think of any other girl other than her. she was feeling very jealous at that time.


Baldev: Veera wo me...


Veera: menu kuch jaroori kam hai, me chalti hu.


She went leaving Baldev in confusion.


Baldev: isse ki hoya achanak? thik to hai ye?


and he went to his room to get ready.


Precap: Baldev introduces Chandani (a girl for Baldev) to Veera and Veera ran away from there

Edited by sonam_Piilai - 11 years ago
MrDarcyfan thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Chandani ha? Let's see how dis Chaar din khi Chand lasts next to Veera? Lol. Please update again soon!!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".