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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is the first time im posting a os here 😛...im not very good at it but giving a try ...hope u guys like it😃

so it goes like this:

Its night and ranvi havent cum back home yet...everybody waiting

beeji :yeh ranvi ab tak aaya kyun nahi...chaijee,gunjan main ketho vich dekhar aati hoon

gunjan: beeji...veera ko bukhar hain na aap yahi ruk jaayega ...usko aapki zaroorat padegi...main jaati hoon ketho

beeji:acha tu jaa gunjan
chaijee:jaldi aa jana tum dono

gunjan:jee beeji ,jee chaijee...toh maine ab chalti hoon
(gunjan goes to fields and finds ranvi there)

gunjan:ranvi ...tu itni der kiii kar raha hai idhar...ghar par beeji pareshaan ho rahi thi

ranvi:woh...gunjan tu ithe kii kar hain...main thodi der main aane hi wala tha...woh main subah seher chale gaya kuch kaam waaste aur aane mein deri hogayi aur ghar jaane hi waala tha ki kheto vich kuch kaam yaad aagaya ...tu jaa main kaam niptaake aajaunga..

gunjan:main tere saath rahungi ...phir hum dono saath chalte hain

ranvi:acha theek hai...

gunjan:tu beeji nu phone karke bata dena

ranvi:ab veera ki tabiyat kaisi hain

gunjan:theek hai ...soo rahi hai

ranvi:acha theek hai ...main beeji nu phone karda
(ranvi informs beeji and strts doing his work...while gunjan goes and sits there waiting for ranvi)

ranvi:gunjan chal ab kaam hogaya...ghar chalte hain

gunjan:ranvi bait na mere saath...waise bhi hum dono nu saath mein waqat bitane mein kinne din hogaye

ranvi smiles ...goes and sits beside her
gunjan places her head on his shoulder

gunjan:ranvi tera gaana sun ke kinna waqat hogaya...ik gaana
hojaaye
ranvi:gunjan ...abhi

gunjan:haan abhi ka abhi ...abhi ka abhi matlab abhi ka abhi
menu sunna hai toh bas sunna hai

ranvi gives in nd strts sings the song...gunjan enjoying and looking lovingly at him

song is over

gunjan:kinna sona gaata hain tu...
wind starts blowing...

ranvi:gunjan abhi ghar chale

gunjan:mausam kitna acha hai...thodi der rukte hain ...waise tune ghar par bata diya hai na

ranvi:baarish hone wali hai gunjan

gunjan:mausam ki pehli baarish hain ...menu beegna hain...

strts raining heavily ...ranvi takes gunjan and stands near a tree...gunjan releases her hand from him and runs to get drenched in rain

To be continued...

P.S:No bashing any charecter or making fun plss its my request😃...
if u dont like it u can ignore😳 but no bashing plss

P.S.S:My fellow ranjanians this is for u😉 ...plss give ur lovely feedback...will continue the next part soon😳



part 2:page 1

part 3:page 2

part4 :page 3






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Posted: 11 years ago
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im quite impressed with d story. its really awesome plz do continue.👏 i wanna knw more. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continuation: part 2
So gunjan completely enjoying the rain ...

ranvi:gunjan...tenu zukaam hojayegi

gunjan:ranvi...tu bhi aaa na
she pulls ranvi tooo...but he just stands there smiling at gunjan as she continues dancing in rain
finally he pulls her towards him ...they share a small eyelock

ranvi: breaks the eyelock ... smiles and says ab chale...bohat der ho chuki aur menu thand lag rahi hain

gunjan smiles and says acha chal

They both reach home holding hands ...beeji sees them completely drenched ...they see beeji and leave the hand

beeji: ranvi...gunjan itni baarish mein kyu aaye ...dalveer ka dhaba ketho ke paas hi hain na ...waha kuch der ruk jaate baarish kam hone tak...

gunjan :main ranvi nu yehi kaha beeji par meri baat maane tab na..
gunjan looks at ranvi and smiles teasingly

ranvi shocked

beeji:ye ranvi aaj kal kisi ki baat kaha sunta hai...apni man mani kar raha

gunjan laughs

ranvi:beeji...ye gunjan toh and starts sneezing

beeji:ab bas karo dono ...jaa kar kapde badlo cheti se ...main haldi wala doodh banati hoon...

both of them leave to the room

continued...



Edited by fardee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vckavs

im quite impressed with d story. its really awesome plz do continue.👏 i wanna knw more. 😳


glad to know that u liked it...writing the second part ...will take some time😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely ! I always love rain romances
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww tfs fardee awesome os
Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VasusenaRadheya

Lovely ! I always love rain romances


thanks vasu😃 i too love them 😉
Edited by fardee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rimicuty

Wowww tfs fardee awesome os
Plz continue soon.


continuing rimi ...hav patience😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its an awesome update continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay fardeee..i love you...finally u paid heed to our requests n wrote something...i loved it...do continue!!!😃

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