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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok..so its my first try on an OS/FF(whatever u think it is)😕 the current frustrating ranjan track forced me to forget about my boards n write this...😛(i knw m the craziest person on this earth)😆...anyways i knw i have already bored u a lot... lets discuss work now...its a os/ff on how gunjan madam realises her already commited sins n try to win back her ranvi's love n trust...
WARNING: read at ur own risk... as i said its my first time so pls try ur hardest to tolerate me...
JAI MATA DI...
THE REALIZATION

PART 1:gunjan's encounter with truth

it was holi n gunjan as usual was pentending hard to act happy with her in-laws. she excused herself as she cant take that anymore n went to a lonely corner to b herself for a while. just then she felt a hard on her sholder and turned and was pleasantly surprised to see her childhood second bestfriend(obvs. apart from ranvi) simran from neighbouring pind. they shared a tight hug n it was then when simran noticed that gunjan was wearing a mangalshutra around her neck n chuddas on her wrist.

Simram: eh ki gunjan! tera vyah b ho gya or tune menu neyota tw chadh btaya tk ki..

Gunjan: chadh na simram menu iss bare mei koi baat ni krni.

Simran: oho gunjan ab esa b ki ho gya ki tu apne vyah k bare mei he gaal ni krna chandi.. accha itta tw das de ki mere jeeja kon h.. (she said in a teasing way)

Gunjan: tu toh jandi h na simran mera ik he sapna tha ki mera kisi NRI mudde de naal vyah ho or mai videsh chali jaun humesha k liya. mera vo sapna tot gya h simran. balki ye kaho ki uss ranvi or uski veera ne mera ye sapna jaan bhuj k todh ditta...
n she told everything to her.

Simran: ki naam btaya uss NRI munde da??

Gunjan: Jagjeet Khurana.

Simarn(shocked): apne area (yaad ni aara area ko hindi mei kya kehte h 😕) k corporater ka beta Jagjeet?

Gunjan (in a surprised tone): haan par tu ese kyu pucgri h!!

Simran: tenu tow shukergujar hona chahiye ranvi-veera ka ki unhone teri jindai bcha li..

Gunjan: eh ki kehri h simran!! unhone mera sapna tota h..

Simran: tere sapne se jada jaruri teri jindagi h gunjan. oh hagjeet changa munda ni h. jb tere sath baat ni bani tw usne humare pind ki ik khudi de naal vyah kiya or usey knnada(canada) le gya..vaha jake pta chala ki vo pehle se shadi shuda h or ethe dubara vyah kiya kuki uthe uspe bhaut karza ho chuka tha jo vo chuka ni parha tha. vo tw balki jaskeet se galt kaam b karvata h apna karz chukane de waste.

gunjan was hell shocked to hear all this n started crying badly.

Gunjan: iska mtlb ranvi or veera be kasur h or mene kitta galt kitta unn dono k sath. simran ab mai ki karaan kese karu unn dono ka samna.. (still crying)

Simran: koi ni gunjan galtiyan sbse hoti h tjse b hui..par kbi b jada kch ni bigda h gunjan..balki tje toh khush hona chahiye ki jese sasural tu chahti thi bilkul vesa he mila..itta pyaar krne vala pati, bigi jesi saas, itte pyaari nannad or bilkul dost jesi chaiji..or toh or apne he pind vich h tera sasural..or tu vkhna gunjan tu ik baar dil se maafi magegi na toh sbne tenu b kar dena h.. tenu pata h pritampura toh chadh mere pind ki kudiyo ne b kitte sapne vekhe the ranvi ki voti bnnke k..sbse sapne todh diye tuney gunjan..

simran was trying everything to cheer gunjan up n she did succeed as gunjan gave a little laugh on her last line..

Gunjan: par ranvi sirf mera h..toh kehna unn kharbujjiyon se ki bhul jaye usey..iss janam ne toh ki aane vale 7 janam mei b ranvi unka ni ho skta..

n with this gunjan wiped her tears n decided to repend for her deeds n win her ranvi back..

boaring?? interesting?? ok ok?? whatever it was pls leave ur valuable comments n feedbacks...criticism is welcome so pls leave ur suggastions also...thank u..

next part when mom will allow me to use net again.. 😭






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Posted: 11 years ago
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it will have some veeba too...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pretty interesting os , pretty well written even if its your first OS, felt like you have been writing a lot longer. .
wanna say thanks that this was a ranjan related os, because they are like the oasis in the middle of the desert in these not so good times. .

your focus on nri related matter was also well deep, really nicely laid out os, looking forward to more , if you have planned more parts, keep up the awesomeness!! 👏

and yes: welcome to the veera if forum as well, 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayee ranjan os... its like water to a thirsty in d desert..
I really appreciate ur effort and initiative ...
Lovely bit.. do write ahead.. i would love to read:-).. do join our ranjan page in Fb.. i will give u link tomo..
Nd please pm me when u write more.. thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vinder90

pretty interesting os , pretty well written even if its your first OS, felt like you have been writing a lot longer. .

wanna say thanks that this was a ranjan related os, because they are like the oasis in the middle of the desert in these not so good times. .

your focus on nri related matter was also well deep, really nicely laid out os, looking forward to more , if you have planned more parts, keep up the awesomeness!! 👏

and yes: welcome to the veera if forum as

thanks yr..thank u so much..it really encouraged me a lot..n i'll try my best to fulfill u exceptations...
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Originally posted by: namratavyas

Hayee ranjan os... its like water to a thirsty in d desert..

I really appreciate ur effort and initiative ...
Lovely bit.. do write ahead.. i would love to read:-).. do join our ranjan page in Fb.. i will give u link tomo..
Nd please pm me when u write more.. thanks

thanks di..actualy I was hell frustated with never ending current track..n di sorry I dnt knw how to send pms..so can u pls tell me??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u...😊
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Originally posted by: cutekk

thanks di..actualy I was hell frustated with never ending current track..n di sorry I dnt knw how to send pms..so can u pls tell me??


dont worry dear.. concentrate on ur boards,... this is just a serial.. sometimes there will be happy times and sometimes sad times.. thats business u know.. but ur studies and exams are utmost priority.. so just dont get affected.. and chill
and yeah to pm go to inbox and there is option to send a pm.. i dont know how many buddies u have.. u can just clcike their names and send..or else u will have to go to the profiles of indivuduals and there is a pm option there to send as well
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Originally posted by: namratavyas


dont worry dear.. concentrate on ur boards,... this is just a serial.. sometimes there will be happy times and sometimes sad times.. thats business u know.. but ur studies and exams are utmost priority.. so just dont get affected.. and chill
and yeah to pm go to inbox and there is option to send a pm.. i dont know how many buddies u have.. u can just clcike their names and send..or else u will have to go to the profiles of indivuduals and there is a pm option there to send as well


hawww mumma ki yaad aa gyi...😛 dnt worry di mai pehle se prepration krke rkhti hu...last week is only for revision...😊 btw thanks for ur concern di...😊 n i'll send u a pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, I can't thank you enough for this. Desperately needed a ranjan story at this stage of the serial to keep up the ranjan flag up. Please do continue soon, can't wait to read ahead.

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