A VeeBa story season 2 pt 25 (last part) pg 64 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

awesome update!!!great going so far...just make sure the characters dont lose their original personalities as the story progresses, especially in the romance department.lots of jealousy and possessiveness to come up...i guess bt it wud be interesting to c how they pretend to not care about it infront of each other and come up with excuses to cover up there possessiveness and jealousy becuz of their massive egos ;)

i'l try my best..do try my 1st season to c how i dealt with their romance😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update...why can't these two just see how perfect they are together?!

Well I'm lookin forward to their eventual realization, make it long and windy road for them...more awesomness for us!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Baldev was at his house, Balwant was trying to reason with him

Balwant; o tujhe andaja vi he..tune us ladki k sath shadi ki he..majak nhi..wada taqatwar rishta he..tu to phir se shadi kr bhi le..wo ki karegi..na uski tujhse talaq ho skti he na hi wo kisi aur se shadi kr skti he..qn us masoom ki zindagi barbad krne pe tula he tu

Baldev; papaji..hum wo registrar k pas ja k dastakhat wali shadi kr lenge..phir hojayegi talaq..uske chaqr me apni zindagi barbad kr dun aur wo bhi mere naal khush nhi rehne wali ki karegi wo..me aur wo bachpan k dushman hen

Balwant; o khoteya..e rishte na tere mere banaye huye nhi hen..e to Rab k banaye honde hen..tum dono ko us ne milana hi tha...aur talaq se to uski zindagi me kuch baqi he nhi rahega

Baldev; papaji wo to london ja rhi thi na..chali jayegi...o hum paise de denge..wahan talaq shuda hona koi wadi gal nhi

Balwant; dekh baldev..tu seedhi tarah maan ja..wrna me..me tenu ghr se niqal dewanga..aur apni jayedad se bhi..ab tu soch le

Baldev; papaji me..acha theek he..jesa aap kaho ge wesa hi hoga
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Veera was arguing with her family too

Veera; bg..hum divorce le lete hen na..aur sirf sindoor hi to he..aur shadi ko ek din bhi nhi hua..hum shadi annul bhi kr skte hen

Ratan; puttar e videsh nhi he jahan e sb hota ho..talaq ka to hum soch bhi nhi skte..teri puri zindagi phir kanware hi guzre gi

Veera; to theek he bg baldev se acha me kanwari rahun

Ranvi; veera..meri pyari veerakhdi..baldev ne tujhe bachate waqt nhi socha k tu uski dushman he..use teri fiqr he aur ye fiqr jald pyar me badal jayegi..tu gal smjh veerakhdi wo hi ab tera pati he

Veera; veerji..ye kya he..agr me wahin ye sindoor mita deti to aap sb ko to pta bhi nhi chalta

Chaiji; pr cheechdi tune esa kiya to nhi..qn k tujhe pta he sindoor ki kya ehmiyat he..dekh puttar hum tere bade hen tera bhala hi sochenge na

Ranvi; aur veerakhdi tujhe tere veerji pe bharosa nhi he?

All this emotional blackmailing forced her to agree.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Woo woo!!! Two updates in one day...I feel like I hit the jack pot homie lol!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Awesome!!
Continue Soon!!
Really excited for there marriage!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Hey great to find two updates.. I wasnt feeling sleepy nd ur updates turned out as night treat :)

Very nice.. But very short.. Story is getting ver interesting.. Ragerly wsiting what's gonna happen next..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
The grand wedding..in part 10..
Every1 is invited to the grand wedding of
Baldev singh
son of balwant singh


with

Veera Singh
daughter of sampooran singh

Venue; a veeba story season 2 part 10

will appreciate ur 1 like and a sweet long comment..

Lots of love
Sonu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: overactor

<font size="4">The grand wedding..in part 10..</font>

<font size="4" color="#3300ff">Every1 is invited to the grand wedding of</font>
<font size="4"> <font color="#cc00ff">Baldev singh</font></font>
<font size="4" color="#cc00ff"> son of balwant singh</font>


<font size="4" color="#cc00ff"> with</font>

<font size="4" color="#cc00ff"> Veera Singh</font>
<font size="4" color="#cc00ff"> daughter of sampooran singh</font>

<font size="4" color="#00ff00">Venue; a veeba story season 2 part 10</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff00ff">will appreciate ur 1 like and a sweet long comment..</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff00ff">Lots of love</font>
<font size="4" color="#ff00ff">Sonu</font>




For sure...consider this my RSVP!

Lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: overactor

i'l try my best..do try my 1st season to c how i dealt with their romance😉\

I did read it,i ws so... in2 it that i read all 50 parts in one go! :) but the hollywood kind of romance (the lip lock) after the first 30 parts some how didnt work with me... i guess it ws becuz the characters are indian and we are used to them that way and i also felt that they lost their typical veebaness (the cat-mouse fight,constant teasing and the hate bit of love-hate they share 4 each other) in the last 20 odd parts.but i honestly enjoyed the first 25 -30 parts they were simply awesome!hope u do a great job with this one cuz girl i love the way u write! :) hope u take my comment in a positive way and this ws only my opinion...we all think and like differently,i hope no one bashes me...i love my veeba as much as anyone here :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

I did read it,i ws so... in2 it that i read all 50 parts in one go! :) but the hollywood kind of romance (the lip lock) after the first 30 parts some how didnt work with me... i guess it ws becuz the characters are indian and we are used to them that way and i also felt that they lost their typical veebaness (the cat-mouse fight,constant teasing and the hate bit of love-hate they share 4 each other) in the last 20 odd parts.but i honestly enjoyed the first 25 -30 parts they were simply awesome!hope u do a great job with this one cuz girl i love the way u write! :) hope u take my comment in a positive way and this ws only my opinion...we all think and like differently,i hope no one bashes me...i love my veeba as much as anyone here :)

i knw i added the kiss bcoz sum1 requested..in the last 20 parts i had to do that bcoz i had to end it like a fairy tale..happily ever after..though i tried to maintain their fights..but who fights with their pregnant wife😆...u r in for shudh desi romance i guess haha..but since v cant expect a kiss onscreen v decided to add them here..don't worry no1 would bash u here..its good that u r telling me what u feel i really appreciate that..anyways i hope u like this 1..lots of fights r on the way😃

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