RANJAN NEW OS *dard-e-dil* last part (ranjan reunites) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
oh so sad
gunjan she is suffering just becoz of her mother
hope ranvi understands her
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Namrataji as usual U rocked again.LOVE U nd loved Ur post.Super Awesome.waiting for next update.Love U dear.❤️👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
do update very soon ,so that atleast kisi jagha to hume ranjan saath dekne ko mile😉😃
aww my sweet broken doll, i just wanna hug her!...even today, she was looking so sweet when lying on her bed 😳 (farnaz is a cutie), and i could imagine her lying like that when in the os bansuri came to yell at her😡

nice update nj😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Sasha_Yuvreen

do update very soon ,so that atleast kisi jagha to hume ranjan saath dekne ko mile😉😃

aww my sweet broken doll, i just wanna hug her!...even today, she was looking so sweet when lying on her bed 😳 (farnaz is a cutie), and i could imagine her lying like that when in the os bansuri came to yell at her😡

nice update nj😃


atleast mere os mein to mila sakti hoon.. atleast acha feeling to deta hai na.. i was hoping to see something like this in the show.. lets see😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Brilliant update
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alisha-2887

Brilliant update
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm 😊


sure dear very soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Excellent update!!! Luvd it!!!
Poor gunjan...hope ranvi understands her!!
Can't w8 4 d nxt update!!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Man!!After reading this update..i felt like crying!!Poor Gunjan!!
It would have been better if there was an accident...so ranvi and baldev get closer to her!!But still I love your story!Iam sure you are gonna make it interesting!!Continue ASAP!!Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

Man!!After reading this update..i felt like crying!!Poor Gunjan!!

It would have been better if there was an accident...so ranvi and baldev get closer to her!!But still I love your story!Iam sure you are gonna make it interesting!!Continue ASAP!!Thanks for the pm!!


oh dont cry.. all ranjan fans are bit upset... hope this os cheers them up and makes them feel gud 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gunjan goes to her room and sits down near her bed and cuddles up herself and weeps... she goes back in time and remembers all the beautiful moments she had shared with ranvi..

The time he taught her how to ride a bike and she hugged him scared of the tractor that was approaching them.. the rain hug and his prayers for her happiness.. remembers all those times that he has supported her.. and finally something that stops at..

Ranvis story of heer ranjha at the jalsa...

Ranvi telling her how heer and ranjha loved each other so much but separated by destiny and she was listening to him totally immersed in his words... and then the last line he says " heer aur ranjha phir mile.. lekin unki shaadi se pehle hi heer ne zehar kha liya.. kuch mohabbat ki kahaani adhoori hi reh jaati hai"

Gunjan wipes away her tears..

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Ranvi is sitting in his room and thinking about gunjan and what just happened.. he keeps looking at his wrist that she was holding and just let go of it when he told her that he will never forgive her.. her tear filled eyes still hovering in his mind..

Suddenly ratan enters the room..

" ranvi... mainu tujhse kuch gal karni hai"

Ranvi just shakes his head asking her to go ahead

Ratan continues " ranvi.. main jaanti hoon ki gunjan ne bahut galat kiya tere naal aur hum sab ke saath bhi.. par yeh bhi sach hai ki who apni kiye pe pachta rahi hai.. apni baat kehna chahti hai tujhse.."

"main janti hoon ranvi ki uss se bahut naraaz hai.. par kabhi kabhi apni naraazgi mein hum saamne wale insaan ko pachtane ka mauka hi nahi dete.. aur yeh faisla shaayad unki ki hui galti se bhi badi galti ban jaati hai.."

" kisi ko pachtaane ka mauka na dene ka anjaam ki hota hai main achhi tarah se janti hoon"

Ratan says and just leaves from the room leaving ranvi to think..

Ranvi tries to understand what ratan told him.. and it does strike him that he might have gotten too harsh... he takes his phone to call gunjan.. but then he doesn't and lies on the bed and goes off to sleep..

Next morning ...

Ranvi comes down to have breakfast with family.. ratan serves him some food.. but he keeps on thinking about ratans words and feeling restless.. he is unable to eat anything..

He just gets up and starts leaving " beeji main khet jar aha hoon" and he goes near the door

Suddenly there is a phone call and ratan picks it up.. and she has a shocked look on her face.. everyone looks at her with astonishment

Ratan looks at ranvi and says "ranvi.. balwant bhaisa ka phone tha... gunjan.. gunjan ne zeher kha liya.. kal raat ko.. hospital mein hai who"

Ranvi suddenly feels a pit in his stomach and his eyes filles with water and a big shock paralysis him..

He turns towards the door and starts running..

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Ranvi runs and reaches the hospital and sees everyone standing outside a ward.. and the doctor comes out and says " sarpanch ji.. dekhiye mainu lagta hai ki yeh zeher aap ki beti ne kai ghante pehle hi khaya hai.. kyuki saare sharer vich pahil chukka hai.. uski nas aur dil ki dhadkan kam ho rahi hai.. hum apni koshish kar rahe hai.. par shayad who nab ach paaye.. aapko koi galat ummed nahi dena chahta hoon" he asks them to stay away from entering the room for sometime

Doctor holds balwants shoulder and says this and walks away..

Balwant starts to break down... ranvi hears the whole thing and tears start to roll out of his eyes..

Ratan chaiji and veera also come there.. ranvi goes to balwant and puts hishand on his shoulder.. and balwant sees ranvi and cries " ranvi puttar.. dekh na gunjan ne ki kar diya".. he takes out a letter from his pocket and gives it to ranvi..

Ratan comes there and asks how did this happen to bansuri who is also crying.. bansuri tells her ..

In the morning she was trying to knock the door and gunjan was not responding.. then baldev and balwant also keep on knocking at the door.. finally baldev broke open the door and saw gunjan lying on the floor.. he runs upto her " gunjan.. gunjan.." but she isn't waking up.. and then baldev saw a poison bottle there and was shocked and he carried her to the hospital immediately..

Ranvi take the letter and walks closer to gunjans room and reads it..

" ranvi.. mainu pata hai kit u mujhse bahut naraaz hai.. magar mainu tujhse yeh batana hai ki main tujhse bahut pyar karti hoon..

Lekin mainu pata chal gaya hai ki meri iss zindagi vich meri zaroorat kisi ko bhi nahi hai.. na beeji papaji ko.. aur pani khud ki galtiyon mein maine apne doston ko bhi kho diya hai..

Mainu maaf kar dena ranvi.."

Ranvi's tears start to pour out of his eyes as he folds away the letter and sees gunjan through a small window of the ward.. she is fixed with an oxygen mask and a couple of machines..

Ranvi just walks away.. ratan follows him

beeji.. aapne theek kahan tha.. kaash ki maine gunjan ko apni baat kehne ka ek mauka de diya hota.. to aisa kabhi nahi karti who.." he says weeping

They all wait for a long time outside the ward.. then the doctor comes and says that she is just the same.. no improvement ... and allows them to see her..

All go inside and look at gunjan.. balwant tries to talk to her as well and asks her to come back ...

After all of them.. ranvi enters the room.. he slowly goes and sits beside gunjan.. bansuri also doesn't say anything..

Ranvi holds her hand in his and softly kisses on it.. and says " gunjan.. tune aisa kaise kar diya? Apne ranvi nu hamesha ke liye chod ke jaane ka faisla kaise kar diya tune?.. mainu maaf kar de gunjan.. bas ab waapas aa jaa .. tu chali gayi to ranvi da gaana kaun sunega.. mujhse bike chalana kaun seekhega?or mainu apni shaitaaniyon se din pareshaan kaun karega?" he starts weeping holding her hand...

Everyone leaves and asks ranvi to come out as well..

Once all left... ranvi goes near the door but he still turns back to see gunjan.. and she seems to show some sign of getting conscious.. ranvi calls the doctor and nurse to come quickly..

They all rush to her and start checking her again moving everyone out of the room...

Gunjan slowly gains back her conciousness.. the doctor is relieved and he goes out and informs everyone..

All go inside to see her.. balwant bansuri and baldev all go and sit near her and try to talk to her.. and tell her how much they were scared seeing her like this..

Gunjan keeps looking at everyone around.. till her eyes stop at ranvi standing near the door.. they keep looking into each others eyes..

And everyone notice that they are just looking on to eachother..

Balwant gets up and brings ranvi and makes him sit next to her.. he holds gunjans hand and is about to say something..

"mainu maaf kar de ranvi" gunjan says first..

" bas gunjan.. ab aur kuch nahi.. bas mainu ek hi gal bata.. mujhse shaadi karegi??"

Gunjan has a teary smile on her face.. she shakes her head in a "yes".. they both smile.. and she gets up and they both share an emotional hug..

Chahatein ye kaisi hain mujh me aapke liye,

na rona nasib na hansna nasib.

Kho jaata hun aapko dekh kar is kadar,

k sapne me bhi na sona nasib na jaagna nasib...


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