VeeBa- ~Manmarziyan~ OS2-part-3 UPDATED(15)

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

OMG!!!
D confession was superb!!!
Amazing upd8!!!
Loved it!!! 😊

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malini

@malini96

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

truly u are a one awesome writer

and love u for it

do keep writing beautiful stories like this

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overactor

@overactor

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

i was missing u so much rimz..i didn't know u had exams..u r d 1st person i read stories of...and i love u for that..

Coming to the OS..i loved it...so intense..such passion..haye mere ballu k aankhon me aansu..i love him and i love u too..u made my love for ballu increase and gave me the inspiration to write...the kiss was...so so passionate..haye im n dreamland...ballu is the baazigar of my dreams.

P.S it was almost error free..haha

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nicky13

@nicky13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Oye hoye u r back with a bang ... Wow Rimzi what an update yaar ... Baldev g ka confession was very much Hattke like him ... And his letter was so funny loved it yaar ... The confession part u just nailed it ... Thanks sweetie pie ... Keep updating ... Will wait for next part :) take care and stay blessed :)

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Siya N

@monumolu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

rimi nice part yaar i love the ending👏... Missed u yaar...

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ZainXAliya

@ZainXAliya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Waah kya baat hai yaar. Bohot zyada awesome hai! Loved it!!

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

wow,u decided 2 extend it,good decesion,pm didn't got the pm😔

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sana2511

@sana2511

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

haaaiii ye mein kya padrahi hoon..😲.rimi yaar aakir tu meri sapna poora kardi veeba ka kiss woh bhi itni intense wali aww i can imagine all the scenes.😳...now im in gutter land pata nahi kab nikalungi...🤪.great update yaar...👍🏼

yes indeed it was an heart attack...😆 dhak dhak karne laga...😆😳

Edited by sana2511 - 11 years ago

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Wow Rimi!!!

Wow!!!

What an update...it was so romantic, so freaking awesome, and still full on Veeba!
Thank you for a wonderful update...I was missing you bud, me and everyone else this forum!

I cannot wait until your next update...you're such an amazing writer!! 😊

Edited by sunny303 - 11 years ago

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836559

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

OHk! Alright so as u know i am unable to spend much tym on forum, i just updated it and logged out, and now sudnly today i open it on my mobile just to check and i see such beautiful and overwhelming comments! My God! I can't believe you all love my work so much. Even when i didn't pm any1 i got all ur cmnts and likes... Thnku so much guys :'-) miss u all too... And its midnight now so i have to sleep, but tmro i will thnk every1 indivisually...
:-* luv u all :-)

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