OS- 8 -------~Weird feelings~...(baldev's house)
(baldev is standing on the window thinking about veera and karan's relationship. how he saw them on the terrace, how he felt, why he felt that way, why did he blame veera, why was he so angry at her for hugging karan, etc. etc. etc.)
(Gunjan enters the room)
Gunjan- veer jee...😊
(baldev is lost, he doesn't respond.)
(gunjan rolls her eyes and goes to him)
Gunjan ( pushing him a bit)- oye! veer jee.😊
Baldev ( looking at her angrily 😡)- ki chahida hai tenu? akela chadd de mainu.
Gunjan- mainu kuch nahi chahiye veer jee... aapnu papa jee bula rahe hain, koi zaroori kaam hai...
baldev- theek hai mai aa raha hoon.😳
(baldev goes down to balwant.)
baldev- ki hoya papajee...?
balwant- beta... vo veera ke ghar pe na aaj koi nahi hai... vo akeli hai... toh tu jaake use ye khaane ka dibba de aa... theek hai...
baldev- ki? mai kyu jaaon? 😕
balwant- dekh beta, ek toh vo akeli hai toh vo kisi aur nu andar nahi ghusne degi...
baldev- akeli hai toh sabse pehle mainu nahi ghusne degi ...😡
balwant- baldev!!! naatak matt karr.. mai gunjan nu bhej deta.. lekin inni raat nu vaha ghar pe do ladkiyaan akeli hai ye baat sab nu pata chal jaayegi, aur tu jaanta hai na aaj kal doosre pind ke ladke...😕
baldev- haan haan theek hai. mai jaa raha hoon.
(baldev reaches veera's house and knocks. no-one opens the door for few minutes)
Baldev- oye veeeraaa!!!!!!! 😡😡😡
(veera finally opens the door. she is not looking well. sleepy eyes, dark circles, running nose etc. etc.🤢🤢)
Baldev- ye le, beeji ne khaana bheja hai... khaa liyo.
Veera- haan theek hai. abb jaa yaha se.
(she was very angry at him after how he accused her for the terrace "kaand")
(but baldev suddenly went cautious about her, as soon as he saw that veera was not well)
Bladev- kuch help chahiye tenu? tu beemaar lag raha hai?😕
veera- jee nahi. jaa yaha se.🤢
Baldev- ha ha theek hai jaa raha hoon... mainu kaun sa shauk hai ki mai teri madat karoo...😕
(He turns around to leave)
(But as he hears something fall down. he looks back in shock)
(he sees veera has fallen down)
Baldev-😲 veeraaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲.
(He runs to her and kneels on the floor, he puts up her head on his lap)
Baldev- veera... veera....
( he is moving his hands on her face and trying to wake her up)
Baldev- veeraa.. aankhe khol veera... ki hoya tujhe...?? 😕😕😕.
(veera is not responding, he is completely tensed.)
Baldev- veera uth...!!!!! veeraaa... kuch bol... mujhse baat kar...veera...😭.
(He quickly picks her up in his arms and takes her to her room. he lies her down on the bed. He quickly gets some water and food for her.)
(He sprinkles the water on her face. waits for 2-3 seconds and goes to close the windows as cold breeze was coming in.)
(meanwhile, veera sits up. she is confused.)
Veera- baldevv?😕.
(Bladev looks at her and immediately goes and sits next to her and hold her by her shoulders)
Baldev- veera... tu theek hai? 😊
Baldev- jaanti hai tu mai kinna pareshaan ho gaya tha? haan?
(veera is confused, she breaks the hug)
Veera- mai theek hoon.
Baldev- ( feels awkward.)- mai.. vo... khaana leke aaya hoon... khaa le.
Veera- tu jaa.. mai khaa loongi...
Baldev- nahi veera... tenu bukhaar hai... khaana khaa aur jaldi se dava khaa le... varna mai nai jaana yaha se...samjhi...!
(Veera is too weak to fight him back so she gives up. Baldev starts feeding her from his own hands. Veera looks at him with confusion.)
Baldev- vo...vo... jab mainu bukhaar hota hai toh beeji mainu haath se hi khilaati hain toh...
(Veera knew he was making an excuse just to feed her from his hands, she wanted to snap him, but she somehow enjoyed the feeling of being feeded from him.)
(she gave up and baldev started feeding her roti and sabzi)
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(After a while... baldev is sitting on a chair and staring veera, while she is asleep.)
Baldev- (answering balwant's call)- jee.. vo mai veera ke yaha hoon... use bukhaar hai toh socha use dava deke hi aaon.
balwant- wah! accha kiya beta.. mai abhi gunjan nu bhej deta hoon...
(baldev cuts the call)
Baldev- eh ki ho raha hai mainu? iss veerakdi ki inni chinta... kyu? ki ho jayega jo ye marr bhi gayi toh...oye! ye tu ki bol raha hai...veera ko kuch ho gaya toh...toh...
(he is totally confused about his feelings...)
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Sorry guyzz its small, but iss thread me i will write normal vaale OS only... extra hot namak mirchee vaale fictions are on my new thread called- MANMARZIYAAN 😉.
i just felt like writing something so i came up with this... plzz forgive me if it was boring... forgive me for my pathetic grammar. 😆
waiting for ur comments...😳
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