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Posted: 11 years ago
that was so beautiful😳.. loved it πŸ˜›
loved the way Baldev picked her up in his arms and led Veera to her room..
hayye so romantic
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Posted: 11 years ago
Post soon... Amazing loved it:))
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Posted: 11 years ago
OS-7 (Koi fariyaad)
(Veera is talking to karan on the phone at night)
veera- accha karan, abb bohot neend aa rahi hai mujhe, mai sone jaa rahi hoon...
karan- theek hai veera, kal tum mere ghar aa rahi ho na?
veera- ha baba haa... but tujhe mujhko subah subah pickup karna hoga, kyuki veer jee se maine kaha hai ki mai gunjan didi ke saath mandir jaa rahi hoon.
karan- ok ... chal bye.
(in the morning veera bluffs ranvi and goes with karan.)
(on the way)
Veera( thinking)- karan... aaj mai tumhe apne dil ka raaz bata hi doongi 😳 tu toh sharmila hai kabhi bolega nahi.😳
Karan- kya hua veera? kuch soch rahi ho?
Veera- nai.. kuch nai... tu ghar chal mai bataa doongi vaha.😳
karan- ok...
(veera and karan reaches a beautiful mansion.)
(karan takes her inside and makes her sit on the comfortable and beautiful sofa.)
Karan- veera, tu ruk mai apne papa ko bula ke laata hoon.
veera- ok karanπŸ˜ƒ
(karan goes in)
Veera-(thinking) aaj mai seedha karan ke papa se karan ka haath maang loongi πŸ˜†...

(she was smiling in her thoughts when karan comes there and tells her that his father is there.)
(veera closes her eyes.)
karan- ye kya karr rahi hai?😲
veera- kitthe hain tere papa jee?
karan- tere peeche πŸ˜•
(veera turns around without opening her eyes)
veera- uncle jee... mai agar aapko dekh loongi toh shaayad jo kehna chahti hoon vo kehne me darr lagega, isiliye aapko dekhne se pehle hi bataa dena chahti hoon... ki... i luv karan...mai usse bohot pyaar karti hoon...
karan- 😲.
(veera then opens her eyes to see "sujeet singh" standing in front of her.)
veera- 😲. Surjeet singh?
(she turns to karan)
veera- tum ... tum inke bete ho?😭😭😭.
karan- πŸ˜• haan veera...
(there is silence. veera is crying)
SS- suna beta? ye tujhse pyaar karti hai... abb mai kaun hota hoon tum dono ke beech aane vala...😈
karan- stop it dad... veera aur main? never...πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ
veera- 😭 karan.. tu...
karan- tumne kya socha veera? mera ye alishaan bangla dekh ke tumhe laga ki tumhaari nikal padi? iss ghar ki maalkin banne ke liye tum iss hadd tak gir jaogi mujhe nahi pata tha πŸ₯±.
veera- karan?😭 tu mere baare me aisa sochta hai?
SS- abb kyu na soche aisa? teri ma aur bhai, dono mujhse nafrat karte hain, toh tujhe achanak mere bete se kaise pyaar ho gaya?πŸ˜†
veera- 😭
(all SS ke gunde mavaali come there)
SS- dekho bhai dekho... ye rahi vo ladki... jo mere bete se shaadi karna chahti hai... ha ha haha πŸ˜†.
veera- 😭.
(just then baldev comes there, with some work.)
(he is shocked to see the scene 😲)
baldev- veera😲 tu itthe...😲 karan tu?😲
SS- πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† aao baldev mere puttar aao. ye hai mera beta karan...πŸ˜ƒ
baldev- karan aapka puttar hai?😲 ( he pities veera and looks at her with all the sadness.)
(karan is just smiling away🀒)
SS- aur ye dekh, veera... pata hai yaha kyu aayi hai.?
baldev (looking at veera with pain)- k...k...yu?πŸ˜•
SS- mere puttar se shaadi karne ko poochne ke vaaste πŸ˜†
(baldev is shocked and sad as wellπŸ˜”)
SS- abb jab maa aur bete se karzaa nahi chuka... toh bhej diya apni beti nu yaha 😈.
(This was just too much for baldev to bear.)
Baldev- basss 😑. aur ek shabd nahi bolna veera ke baare me 😑.
SS- oye😲 tu veera ke taraf se kab se bolne laga?
baldev- 😑.
(He goes to veera who is standing still, only tears are rolling down frm her eyes😭. everyone except baldev is laughing at her. baldev goes to her gently holds her by her shoulders and takes her out of the terrible situation. he makes her sit in his jeep and moves towards the pind.)
(on the way...)
baldev- veera? kuch bol... ki hoya.
( veera is not responding at all, she is in shock.)
baldev- veeraaa....
veera- 😳😭.
(baldev stops his jeep, he gets out and drags veera out as well.)
(he shakes her)
baldev- veera hosh me aa... ki ho gaya hai tenu...?
veera- 😳 🀒.
Baldev- kuch bol veera... kuch bol...😭 veeraaa...!!!!!!
Veera- mai usse pyaar karti thi...
baldev- ki?πŸ˜•
veera- (shouts along with crying)mai usse pyaar karti thi... baldevv...!!!!!! 😭.
(baldev is still holding her by her shoulder as she is crying.)
baldev- veera bass... rona band karr....
veera-😭😭. mai abb jeena nahi chahti...😭.
(baldev pulls her close and hugs her tightly. he caresses her head.)
baldev- chup kar... aisi gal dobaara ki toh maarna hai mainu tujhe.
veera- 😭 mujhe marr jaane do baldevv... mainu marna hai...😭.
(baldev breaks the hug and holds her tightly.)
baldev- paagal ho gayi hai ki tu? uss karan ke vaaste marna chahti hai? uska pyaar tujhe apne veer jee ke pyaar se zyaada zaroori lagta hai? bol?
veera- 😭😭😭.
baldev- kuch bol veera.. soch apne veer jee ke baare... unhe kaisa lagega agar tune apni jaan de di? gunjan nu kaisa lagea.. mujhe kaisa...πŸ˜• veera kuch bol.
(Veera hugs him and cries)
Veera- kyu baldevv.. mere saath aisa kyu hua??😭😭😭.
baldev- nai veera rote nai... vo tere laayak hi nahi tha...
veera- 😭😭😭.
baldev- chal abb rona band karr.. aur chale ghar? vaha unn logo ke beech tujhe accha lagega jo sach me tujhse pyaar karte hain.😊
(veera nods, her head still sunk in his chest. she is not willing to leave such a supportive, and caring hug.)
baldev- abb chale veera?😊
(veera sits in the jeep and they move)

~~Veera (At night in her room)
(she is having flashback of the humiliation.)
veera- kyu rabb jee kyu 😭😭😭.
(she also realizes how baldev supported her)
veera- baldevv.. yu toh tu ek number ka gadha aur kameena hai.. lekin aaj jo tune kiya... mera dil jeet liya tune😊... kyu meri inni parvaah karta hai tu?πŸ˜• teri ye harkate tu hi jaane...

~~ baldev at his room
(he looks at his shirt and the tear marks which were left by veera. he takes out his shirt ( πŸ˜†) and kisses the tear marks.)
baldev- jiss insaan ne veera nu inna rulaaya hai.. uss insaan nu abb rone laayak bhi nahi chadoonga...😑 veera... pyaar ki hota hai...vo mai bataoongi tenu 😳.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<3 <3 <3~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.

ho gaya guyzz.. nicky ne mujhe mere baldev 😳 ki kasam di thi ki mai apne b'day ke pehle ek update doon so here it is...πŸ˜ƒ thoda boring tha i know πŸ˜• but ki karoo abhi dimaag kaam nai karr raha πŸ˜†. and sorry yaar time ki kami hai so i can't pm u all.. next update on my b'day and then i will pm u all... 😊
still. kaisa laga? jaldi batao πŸ˜›πŸ˜³.
error queen ko maaf karr dena for any error. 😳
PS- parso mera b'day hai... sabko yaad hai na πŸ˜†πŸ˜³

Rimi ❀️

Edited by RiMjHiM19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
again wonderful OS rimi πŸ‘
i want KK to be tat SS's son only
kaash aise serial mein hota😊
u keep writing
Edited by sparkle2985 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my goodness!!! that was fantastic..πŸ‘
hayye you are.. just the best writer ever..πŸ˜ƒβ­οΈ
I loved this OS to the bits.. hated Karan for being so rude to Veera😡
and Baldev My hero... he took away Veera with him.. so cute.. πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 11 years ago
really nice update yaar and advance happy b'day
Edited by piya05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow superb update.. and thanks to nicky jiss ne kasam di our tune update kiya
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum updt πŸ‘πŸΌ n 6 wala Os to i jst luvd itt great work πŸ‘ keep writing more stories 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _mahi_

Oh my goodness!!! that was fantastic..πŸ‘

hayye you are.. just the best writer ever..πŸ˜ƒβ­οΈ
I loved this OS to the bits.. hated Karan for being so rude to Veera😡
and Baldev My hero... he took away Veera with him.. so cute.. πŸ˜ƒ

thnku so much mahi... luv u dear ...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: piya05

really nice update yaar and advance happy b'day

thnks shweta...😳

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