Ranveera (FF) Tu meri jaan hain (coming Soon)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys
Ive tired something new with this ff i hope u guys like it.This is a mystery/suspense based ff.Its about a brothers love for her and to what extent he will go protect her.

promo 1
His numb body lay still on the burnet grass, the blood of his open wounds soothed the flames of fire that still flickered around him. His red eyes stared directly into the sky questioning the very existence of his God. Every muscle in his body screamed in pain. Yet his mind stood frozen to the repeated the cries of his sister, with each echo in his mind a tear dropped from his eye which dedicated his love for her.

Promo 2



"Veerji veerjiii...Veer jiii catch me if you can" her voices echoed through the walls of the house. The sound of her payal lit up the smile of her family. He ran after her using all the energy he had.She ran as fast as she could and hid underneath the stairecase trying to control her laughter. Ranvi finally reached the stair case when he was jus about to pull out Veera when her smiling figure disappeared. The surroundings of the house changed to black and grey the smiling faces of the family changed to tears and sadness. Whereonce the laughter of Veera echoed throughout the house now her screams screech through the house.


Hope u guys like it ive tried something new.Its not tragic its jus suspense.plz tell me if you guys would to read it and pl do comment

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The promos are great!😃 Ranvi's pain was clearly visible in the first promo and the second promo was heart wrenching. Please continue soon.👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Promos very mysterious and suspenseful
looking forward to the first part

cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvrainaarti

The promos are great!😃 Ranvi's pain was clearly visible in the first promo and the second promo was heart wrenching. Please continue soon.👍🏼


Thanx alot am reali glad u liked it ill update as soon as i can.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice promos
Looking forward for the story😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Great Promos very mysterious and suspenseful

looking forward to the first part

cont soon


Thanx ill update as soon as i can
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very interesting. really liked it. do continue soon, looking forward to the first update :)
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Originally posted by: .S.i.m.r.a.n.

very interesting. really liked it. do continue soon, looking forward to the first update :)


Thanx ill update soon

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