SS-The Immortal LOVE

Hello everyone

I am not a writer but just trying my hand on writing something on raga

And writing a story from where, we r in our actual show and how can we continue from here as a good beautiful love story of RAGA

Part - 1

Story starts when Ranaji came to know about swarna

R"were u knowing it

G- Give me some time I can explain pls

R- Were u knowing or not

G -yes but this is not the complete truth, in the given circumstances

R-an immoral act is immoral in every way, I cannot forgive u for this, how can u support just an act being a queen and being women.

G but ranaji they love each other

R- It is not love and don't defend them and degrade urself more in my eyes

G -I will defend them becoz what they did is justified and right in every sense, u said that women have equal power so what is wrong if Swarna took a stand. If only u will let me explain

R-(shouting), just shut up, u r involved in an immoral deed and justifying it, I hate u Gayatri and don't want to see ur face again get out get out of my life, u have cheated me

G - (in tears and shocked to hear those words, she left the mehel immediately in dismay. It was a rough weather, lightening thunderstorm and heavy rain. But G was not affected by it. Turmoil was inside her. She could not belief her ranaji said those words to her. Travelling for long she came before a temple. Coming out of her state. She cried a loud and said that u never loved me Ranaji, u never believed me. Every time it is me who has to prove my love and prove that I am right. I was fighting for a love that never existed, I will never return again, ranaji u don't want to see my face again so let it be like that. It is the end of our story)

She turned and then saw a man aiming a rifle on her.

He was KAAl, she tried to run but he fired a bullet and she fell from the cliff

part 2 coming soon

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part 2 -below

part 3 on page 3

part 5 on page 5

Congo 4 ur first story interesting start ranaji didnt do right atleast he would listen what gayatri wanted to say like the twist that gayu left him plz do cont

wow!!its superb 👏
waiting fr next part !!do update soon!! 😃

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Congo 4 ur first story interesting start ranaji didnt do right atleast he would listen what gayatri wanted to say like the twist that gayu left him plz do cont

Originally posted by: sishtyfan

wow!!its superb 👏
waiting fr next part !!do update soon!! 😃

Part -2

R- spend whole night on her chair, in the morning rajmata came to his room and asked about G ,

Instead of replying her he told the truth of swarna to rajamta and how he felt cheated by his queen rajamata was shocked but just said that if G is supporting her there might be a reason

Rajamata called swarna , lakhan , chacah amd his wife before ranaji and asked swarna to tell the truth

Swarna narrated everything , torture of her in laws and her husband , everything she suffered , truth about his husband and how they forced her to give them heir fro lakhan and how lakhan saved her.

Hearing all that ranaji was shocked and realized his mistake, he ordered to put his chacha and chach to to jail .

Ranaji"( again I repeated the same mistake, why did not i believed her and listened to her, how will i be able to face her and ask her to forgive me again pls God help me.

Then the search of G was on. Ranaji searched in mehel and tehn remembering his words he went to her father's house but he could not find her

After two days-

Ranaji was madly and crazily searching for his queen but in vain. All his soldiers and lakhan were making efforts.

Rajamata- ranaji eat something , since two days u have not taken rest and ate nothing. This way u will get ill.

R- i have to find her, i can't live without her, she cannot leave me like this. She can't punish me like this . talking to himself he left the palace .

Lakhan accompanied him. On their way they were attacked by Kaal, they had a huge fight, finally ranaji was able to caught him and almost killed him with his sword, KAAl died but while dying he told that he was asked by Brm and Chacha ji to kill Rani and raja . He then smiled and said though u r alive but I killed ur wife and she fall from the mountain so my revenge is complete .

Listening to that ranaji went mad. He was about to jump from there but lakhan controlled him.

For few days soldiers tried to search for the clues of the queen , finally they got a news from some villagers that they got a ruined body which cannot be identified so they did the last rituals and gave the belongings of that lady to them.

Ranaji was standing with tears in his eyes before picture of his queen with her mangalsutra and that same kangan which he gifted her in his hand. The belongings given by those villagers

Part 3- after leap of 3 years

good story

Nice update ranaji realised his mistake but its too late thnx 4 update

interesting!!
would love to see tashan between rana nd g!!

Amazing updates dear...please do continue..!!