SS: The Suhaag Raat of Broken Dreams (An apology and a new start p.43)

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BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow loved part 1 so thrilled to see Gayatri total feisty with Rana ji showing him reality on face

loved the update wonderful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

amazing update gayatri was too good im shocked n also pleased the way she gave back to ranaji was superb she loves ranaji but she cant hear him insulting her n her father ranaji was shocked hearing her point of view he never thought the situation like this liked the fact that she gave back the ring hope ranaji will give her ring when he will fall for her nice part thnx 4 update

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fanraya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

So beautifully written, great work.. Loved it..

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Niharika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Now that was worth it.
Ranaji on flames and Gayatri on fire.
When fire meets gasoline kinda situation

I'm intrigued in this plot.
loved it and would be waiting for further update.
PS: Bite back Gayatri bite him *evil grin*

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drashti01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This is so awesome loved first part

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Zaalima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Woww This is so Good ...

specially Gayatri's Answers

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cactusbutt1123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Thank you firstly for making gayatri as strong and smart as ranaji! I hate it when women in daily soaps sit and cry in some corner. I wish in the real episode also gayatri puts forword her point of view standing high.

Awesome post! Please write more :) would love to read how gayatri grows as a person in this journey :D

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Marybarton

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Draco_Elt
Now that was worth it.
Ranaji on flames and Gayatri on fire.
When fire meets gasoline kinda situation

I'm intrigued in this plot.
loved it and would be waiting for further update.
PS: Bite back Gayatri bite him *evil grin*

More fire to come. They will burn the palace down!