Dilbar mere - Page 4

we can ask permission for such threads but no gaurentee it will be sticky or not... it can be shayri or poem anything...

Originally posted by: babydolll

we can ask fpr permission for such threads but no gaurentee it will be sticky or not... it can be shayri or poem anything...

my frnd was saying she will be making one thread for her poetry so lets wait 😉

Originally posted by: abba12

my frnd was saying she will be making one thread for her poetry so lets wait 😉

we can ask mods 😛 let me pm them 😉

u can ask in permission thread... increase the number of comments 😉

Originally posted by: abba12

wow rana rocked👏..

yaar really love it ,, m waiting for u guys to make a poetry page for our forum😛,, i want it to be no comment post..just poetry😉

I was wanted to post these two shayaries long back. Whatever they have shown about Gayatri and Rana's characters, these two shayaries depict their situation very well.

Originally posted by: babydolll

u can ask in permission thread... increase the number of comments 😉

ohkk 😉.. i will ask there ... hope our poets will wake up and write something 😆

Originally posted by: Flawed-Beauty

I was wanted to post these two shayaries long back. Whatever they have shown about Gayatri and Rana's characters, these two shayaries depict their situation very well.

i m gonna take permissions ..u guys can post there 😉😉

Arti ur lines are really beautiful and very poetic & suits condition of RaGa very well 👍🏼

apni gayatri ranag ke liye ek gana pesh karti hai
milti hai zindagi me muhobbat kabhi kabhi
hoti hai dilbaron ki inayat kabhi kbhi
sharmake muh na fer nazar ke sawal pe
lati he eise mod pe kismat kabhi2...milti hai...
tanha na kat sakrnge jawani ke raste
pesh aayegi kisi ki jarurat kabhi2...milti hai...

lovely song