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Nazzyx8

@Nazzyx8

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Perfect FF Jumoke!! 👏👏👏

Love you loads & loads!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

ShraNal scenes was magical & loved each scenes especially the romantic ones!!!☺️☺️☺️

You're the best Jumoke!!😃 Thank you for making me smile!!😳😳

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: Duggukede
amazing update
beautiful
your an awesome FF writer
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks Niki and awesome FF writer...but this is my very first one😆😆😆

I will try to do so and no need for thanks as I don't mind PM-ing so thanks for the comment and reading😳😛

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: Nazzyx8
Perfect FF Jumoke!! 👏👏👏

Love you loads & loads!!🤗

ShraNal scenes was magical & loved each scenes especially the romantic ones!!!☺️☺️☺️

You're the best Jumoke!!😃 Thank you for making me smile!!😳😳

Now you having me blush...how can it be perfect?😆😆😳

Love you too dear and gazillion, trillion times dear🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Of course you loved the romantic ones especially...you didn't visit Shranal land this time around😆😳

Thanks dear and awww I made you smile then that's enough for me. Thanks dear and love you tons ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Reshmaxo

@Reshmaxo

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Omg!!!!! Ahh I'm in love with ur stories.

Hehe ur "note" always makes me laugh. ☺️

Loved the holi scene. A drunk shraddha and kunal was too cute. So wished they had played holi on the show. And the romance...🤪I died.

🤗One big tight hug coming ur way. Love you lots.

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: Reshma4lyf
Omg!!!!! Ahh I'm in love with ur stories.
Hehe ur "note" always makes me laugh. ☺️
Loved the holi scene. A drunk shraddha and kunal was too cute. So wished they had played holi on the show. And the romance...🤪I died.
🤗One big tight hug coming ur way. Love you lots.

LOL😆😆😆😆

Ur too cute Reshma...awww my notes makes you laugh oh wow😆😆😳😳

I just try to warn as much as possible😃😛

Yes...I wanted to make it a success and was afraid it was that good as to what i had in my head...but i guess i was wrong😆😆😛

Wish we could have had that during the hen's and bachelor's party but with some shranal or possible anki scenes as both couples were drunk but never mind all that.

Totally wished they did

The romance...hehe...😈😈😈 Last minute idea and went with it.😳

One big tight hug going right back from my side as well and love you as well dear🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Nikita

@niki_2293

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

omg...were you, by any chance, reading FIFTY SHADES OF GREY??? I mean seriously, this was truly truly suggestive as u said in the disclaimer. i had been gaping the whole time during the love making scene. and the love bite description had me grinning like an idiot. Amazing!! and this time a really long update with full-on shranal and kunal's mischiefs!! Loved it!!

P.S. just a question...are u planning to make shraddha pregnant after this hot hot romance?? plz do...i really wanna read kunal's reaction:)

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xyz

@reetnooor1234

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Comment for chapter 17

Your story is fictional but always have some reality touch.This is what i love the most.I prefer reality but not too much because then i think its same as my real life and story become monotnous for me and at same time i like fiction but i think it should also not be too much as then i start thinking it is not possible and looses interest.So i like stories where fiction and reality are aptly balanced and your stories are perfect example of this as u never loose reality touch but have charaters in your story that creates suspense and thrill.I just love your writings.

Now coming to the story...loved the way shraddha waiting for dhruv, Kamini love for dhruv always make me smile...wanted to see this in episodes but bad luck...anyways lets not go there...Jin and Shraddha scenes are always my fav ...Shranal +Dhruv scene are always treat...u included holi part...i never thught that you will include holi part in this story...u always surprise me and as usual i loved this surprise also..while reading the story i felt i was not reading but was seeing it...ur genius in creating scenes...the way you explain the holi set up, the way everyone was greeting was damn good

I can only say this Spectacular update

Thanks ❤️🤗

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: niki_2293
omg...were you, by any chance, reading FIFTY SHADES OF GREY??? I mean seriously, this was truly truly suggestive as u said in the disclaimer. i had been gaping the whole time during the love making scene. and the love bite description had me grinning like an idiot. Amazing!! and this time a really long update with full-on shranal and kunal's mischiefs!! Loved it!!

P.S. just a question...are u planning to make shraddha pregnant after this hot hot romance?? plz do...i really wanna read kunal's reaction:)

I guess you never saw that post about my intense dislike and horror for that book. I do not DO NOT like that book AT ALL!!!!! 😡😡🤢🤢🤢

I would attriubte this more akin to all the historical/contemporary romance novels i have read over the years but not to that thing that book at all😡

Sorry I just really dislike the book and that is just my reaction sorry😆😆😆😆

Gaping lol😆😆 don't let anything fly in in the process dear😆😆😳

Yes full on shranal as i really wanted this onscreen during holi but it never happened so oh well😛😃

Thanks dear and glad that you loved it.

LOL!!!! See i was thinking that as well but i wonder...hmmm...who knows...lol.

Thanks dear 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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xyz

@reetnooor1234

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Comment for chapter 18

Once again fantastic work...loved it as usual...Zor and kamini dancing and puruji getting jealous😆...ishaan taking care of her wife...too cute...Shraddha and kunal drunk 😆...love bite desciption ☺️...epic romance...after reading update i literally died...i wanted to see holi on show but tht never happened...thanks Jumoke for doing this

Jumoke you always out do yourself...love your writings to the core...with my reply i always want to make you feel special as what you do for this forum is just out of world but i always fail...anyways in the end i just wanna say im you fan and will remain ur fan

❤️🤗

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: reetnoor89
Comment for chapter 17

Your story is fictional but always have some reality touch.This is what i love the most.I prefer reality but not too much because then i think its same as my real life and story become monotnous for me and at same time i like fiction but i think it should also not be too much as then i start thinking it is not possible and looses interest.So i like stories where fiction and reality are aptly balanced and your stories are perfect example of this as u never loose reality touch but have charaters in your story that creates suspense and thrill.I just love your writings.

Now coming to the story...loved the way shraddha waiting for dhruv, Kamini love for dhruv always make me smile...wanted to see this in episodes but bad luck...anyways lets not go there...Jin and Shraddha scenes are always my fav ...Shranal +Dhruv scene are always treat...u included holi part...i never thught that you will include holi part in this story...u always surprise me and as usual i loved this surprise also..while reading the story i felt i was not reading but was seeing it...ur genius in creating scenes...the way you explain the holi set up, the way everyone was greeting was damn good

I can only say this Spectacular update

Thanks ❤️🤗

Awww thanks dear🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Fiction and reality should be hand-in-hand and i do read to escape the realism but i will stop if its too far-fetched so i understand dear.

I wanted to bring Dhruv back as it felt like FOREVER since he has been in the story but i think at the time i didn't feel comfortable portraying the relationship between him and Kamini but was able to improve a little bit after writing about them in the previous story i had so...sorry for the rambling.😆😆😆

Jin and Shraddha are always so cute to write hehe😆😆

I didn't think i was going to put a holi scene but after not having it on-screen or it ever showing so i decided to do it😳.

Thanks dear and golly ur compliments always having me smiling and blushing...thanks dear🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗