FF: Revenge is best served cold : Chapter17 Pg69

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone!
This is my first FF in the forum. I used to watch the show when it was on air but i recently rewatched it and hence want to write an FF. Kindly let me know if it is interesting enough and if i should go ahead with it.😊






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Preface

18 years is a long time by any means. But it was especially long for Raghav Singhania who spent every second of every day for the past 18 years waiting. Waiting to come back to India. Waiting to meet his nemesis. Waiting to get his revenge. Waiting.

The first 8 years of his life were his best years. He had a loving family and an innocent childhood but all that was snatched away from him. His parents' faces flash in his mind and his chest clenches in pain. The memories never fade away nor does the pain.

These 18 years have hardened him so much that sometimes he questions if he has any heart or love left at all. Revenge runs through his body making him burn but he knows that patience is required to win. It's like a game of chess. There are pawns and scapegoats. There are strategies and check mates. In the end only one king survives.

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Mother's love is the ultimate love. Or so they say. But Kalpana Jhadav doesn't know what that is in spite of having a mother. She has led a sheltered life under the protection of her father, Vitthal Jhadav and care of her brother, Pakhya Jhadav. But nobody had been able to fill the void left by Kamla Jhadav.

She was two years old when she fell into the bath tub in her house. She had almost drowned when her brother had rescued her. The doctors had revived her and she had searched for her mother frantically but Kamla was nowhere around.

She was five when she was supposed to go to her first picnic but her mother had forgotten about it and Kalpi stood waiting for her mother holding the balloons in her hands and her picnic bag on her shoulders.

She was ten when she won the running race at school. She stood on the first position with her trophy and looked around for her family. Her father and brother stood clapping but her mother was absent. The smile slid from Kalpi's face.

There were missed birthdays, missed special days, missed hugs and missed smiles. Distance between Kalpi and her mother increased over the years and only a miracle can bridge the gap between the two.

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These two broken people who crave for something in their lives with all their heart come together in this story. But how will this happen? How can two people who are separated by thousands of kilometers, immeasurable financial gap and belong to different social strata of society meet?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please continue and update soon ...waiting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😊BEAUTIFUL story line .please continue.any story with RAGNA then i am their i love RAGNA and thier stories .please if u continue then tru to ive update reguraly or at least ones or twice a week so we can connect alltime with story and u .THANKS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"These two broken people who crave for something in their lives with all their heart come together in this story. But how will this happen? How can two people who are separated by thousands of kilometers, immeasurable financial gap and belong to different social strata of society meet?"

My interest is peaked by your prologue...hope to read further chapters
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. One thing is never change tat kamla love for pakhi continue soon dr.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Update soon
Want t see cold revenge
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great Concept and awesome chapter. Cant wait for the next updates snd plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you everybody! I will try to update regularly with slightly longer chapters.
Keep reading and commenting😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful Preface n chapter
Keep updating
Waiting for the next update

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