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Posted: 9 years ago
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This story is about four middle class childhood best friends that are raghav,sammy,pakhi n maya, four of them use to study in same school,then same clg n now four of then were working in a same company that is Raizada group of companies n being together from such a long time n understanding each other very well pakhi n sammy very in a relation n other side maya too secretly loves raghav n dreams to get married to him but she never had guts to tell raghav about her feelings for him because she is scared of loosing their friendship or you can say she is scared of raghav's no because if he rejects her then she wont able to bear it but raghav,he only consider her as a best friend n nothing else infact he had decided that he will only marry a girl whom his parents will decided for him as he fully trust on his parents choice n moreover every parents wants or will give the best to their kids but still for safe a side he had given a long list to his parents about the qualities he wants in his would be wife that is she should have to be smart,bold, modern,confident,independent, mature,fun loving,full of life,self made girl, well educated,very supportive n caring,bubbly,chirpy, outspoken,can easily mingle with people's n can easily makes friend's,who can stood besides him like a pillar n support him in time of need n many more but its said na that all our plans go unplanned when destiny plays its game,in our life's most of the time we never get what we wished for n same happens in raghav's case, his life gets totally changed when he gets married to a girl pooja who is totally opposite of his dream girl,who doesn't even have a single quality in her which he wants in his future wife n all this starts from when his parents go to their village to see one of their relative who is not well but their they saw pooja who was happily playing with kids under tube well n as soon as they both saw her they like her innocence,her smile, her behavior n decided that only she will become their bahu n after that they both enquiry about her n her family from village peoples n from them they both get to know that long back when she was very small her parents died in a car accident leaving her all alone in this world n now after her parents death she stays with her nana n nani,they both her only family,her entire world n now as they were very old so they were looking a boy for her marriage, they both wants to do her marriage as soon as possible so thinking this as the best opportunity to talk to pooja's nani n nana about pooja's n raghav's marriage raghav's parents just landed up at their house n talked with pooja's nani n nana about this n soon after talking with each other everything gets final n even within two weeks both raghav n pooja gets married clearing out all the odds as maya loves raghav a lot so she tried her best to create problems in the marriage to stop this marriage anyhow but nothing works out in her favour,she atleast loose her raghav to pooja n raghav,he was very excited to step into new phase of his life but above all this although pooja is happy with her marriage but still she is very damm nervous that who she will gone manage everything all alone but soon everything gets shattered for both pooja n raghav,all their dreams gets broken into many a pieces, their smile,their happiness everything gets ruined on their first weeding night itself when raghav learns that pooja is totally illiterate n about being modern, confident,bold,outspoken,independent then pooja is very far away from all of them,she is very shy n reserve type of girl who doesn't mingle with anyone so easily n on the name of her friends she only had some kids of her village,she doesn't even have a single friend of her age n about coming to the city then its totally new for her as before her marriage she never ever even step out of her village,in short she is totally introvert n on learning about all this he just wants to confront pooja's nanu n nani for cheating him n his family but his parents stops him n told him that its was not pooja's nanu n nani mistake but their as they were the one who never told him anything about pooja inspite of knowing each n everything about her because they were scared that he will never accept pooja after knowing all this which comes as a biggest shock to raghav as he still cant able to digest this fact that his own parents cheated him,ditched him,back stab him,played with his feelings n emotions n that too for an unknown girl which give him one more reason hate her n after knowing every truth of everyone raghav just disown pooja,he just clearly told to everyone that he had no relation with pooja,he doesn't consider her as his wife n very soon he will going to divorce her so that soon he can get rid of this unwanted relation n till the time they doesn't get divorced she will be his wife but just for name sake n that too infront of society n she can become the bahu of his parents but she will never become his wife,he will never gone love her nor will give her any wife's right which this time comes as a shock for pooja n after hearing all this she just faints because of stress but raghav doesn't care about it,he doesn't give a damm to anything as this time he too feels very hurt n cheated by his own parents,they both just broke up his every dream,the one whom he always trusted n respected the most played with his life,his heart,they choose a wrong or worst girl for him n all this is killing him from inside,his friends tries to make him understand that everything will gets fine with time n he should have to atleast give a one chance to pooja n their relation,he must tries to sort out everything between them but raghav,he didn't pay any head to his friend's words,right now all he wants is to just run away from here leaving everything behind,now he wants sometime for himself,he wants sometime to understand n cop up with situation,right now he himself was not in his state of mind then who can he makes everything fine,in such a short time spam his life takes a complete U turn n his friend understands his condition too so they didn't force him much n even they all know this also that pooja was nowhere responsible for all this,it was not her mistake that their was no school in her village, that her nana,nani was so over protective for her that they never allow her to go to the city to study, they even never allow her to step out of the village so why should she suffer,why should she gets punished whereas after gaining conscious pooja was sitting all alone in raghav's room n were thinking about all the past incidents n wondering that how would her life gone be if raghav divorce her,who will she face the society,will her nana,nani accept her back again like before,will she gets the same respect n love from her loved one's after her divorce or will everything gets back to normal after divorce or not or if by any chance they both doesn't get divorced then will she ever able to make her place in raghav's heart, will raghav accept her ever or able to love her,if not husband n wife then will they both ever able to come friends also,will she ever able to gain raghav's love n trust, will raghav ever try to understand her side too,will raghav ever gets ready to stay with her,will he takes her to Mumbai with him or not where he works, will raghav ever support her or not all this thoughts were roaming in pooja's mind but soon her thoughts were broken by sound of door n she see raghav entering the room with fully of red eyes like he had cried a lot,she tried to talk to raghav but he didn't listen n after changing his clothes when he was about to go pooja from back told him that she doesn't want divorced as she wants to give this relation a chance but hearing this raghav starts boiling in angry n within a sec she found herself pinned to wall,raghav was tightly holding her hands n it was paining her but raghav doesn't care,he just slowly whisper to her ear that very soon you will gone regret for your decision,I will make your life a living hell where you will die each n every sec of your life so be ready for it n after saying so he left the room by almost slamming the door..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😲👏👏👏👏😲😲Happy and shocked at same time .how beautiful is story line .wow jiyu really wonderful thoughts .love it please update next one soon.poor pooja suffer lot .raghav needs to understand her.but is pooja will be kalpi or kalpi is also onther part of charater in the story ..ahha so much thinking .that ur job jiyu i just love to read u do ur best and me here for reading .Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so no Ragna in this story??
Hope Pooja gives equally back to him ...Nothing i like better then to read of a sucess story where the female comes back with vengence ...hmmm though in Raghavs defence I have to say with parents like his who needs enemies😭
great start Jiya 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice story
Raghav parents done wrong with him
Where is kalpana ??

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update. Love to read more. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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New concept. ..nice Jiya
Etani sari khubiya ek ladki me...bhagwan ne bhi banai hogi kya😒
Kalpi kaha hai...shayad pooja hi kalpi ban jaye...Waiting for next update
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is nice! Different! Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fab like always
Your each story has a diff n a grt touch.
Loved d start
Frankly speaking dis is d first story were I dont want kalpi to come..
Pooja is a nice grl n I m sure rag is angry but still a nice guy.
Hope dey get together well.
Loved it
Update soon n do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...super interesting...waiting to know if Raghav will give her a chance n Pooja becomes stronger n changes herself...pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept update soon thanks for pm

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