THREAD 2- THE GLASS WALL: RAGNA FF, Part-28(LAST),Pg-11,11/1/17 - Page 4

Originally posted by: kinnapatel

😊😛WOW after long my di got little time to update this beautiful story .sweet little update .i don't want u finish this story but its up to u how u like .i never want to leave u on any condition always wants to stay with u as RAGNA ALONG .i heard about SHIMLA but never been thier .love to see snowfall in INDIA .i lived somany yr,with snowfall .Let RAGNA enjoy some thier new romance time and the time they was seperated now they r married .u just think to give us more RGANA stories without ending any .SORRY I BECOME SO GREEDY .THANKS for PM and awesome update .love u so much charms di .

Originally posted by: shoonya9

It's a pleasant surprise to receive TGW update after a long nd I guess I completely missed the previous choppy too. So for me it was double treat. O thats great 😃

After all the major glass walls broken union of RAGNA had to happen, nd this union depicted by u is just like meeting of two strong yet silent life currents who hv overcome all the odds nd obstacles nd defied nearly death with their love, grit n determination nd now they are merged together nd one current.

Though u hv admitted you feel inadequate in writing consummation moments, nd your Kalpi is shy in it, but it's truely aesthetic nd shyness illuminates the scene nd not dampen. Shyness is the precious jewel of RAGNA consummation..

The song selection aptly depicts the inner state of both RAGNA. Both hv silently n openly yearned each other, waited for each other, fought the most tough battles together especially psycho Premier n his evil intentions. Their consummation is pinnacle of their relationship. Congratulations to u for putting it so well.

All that ends well is well nd all tht fought fiercely together is strong.

After mutual acceptance nd becoming one, the last wall tht remained was tht of publicly announcing the relationship to the judgemental world.

And yes waking up with questioning media after the most beautiful night is not tht anyone want, but RAGNA r different so their first mo ring post union had to be different.

The cat is out, evil intentions of Kapoor r out nd for a change Pakhi in this ff is good character so far unless u still hv planned some twist is introduced with Sammy as Raizada.

All the walls r broke but yet last wall of approval from Kamla the mother without whose blessings their relation wud be incomplete or at least with her blessing wud b more beautiful is yet remaining. Going with concluding line of update, wall of Kamla seems to be of Acrylic appearing transparent but tougher than glass to break.

Always love your poetic, analytical replies. I also know you have a hidden poet/writer here. Do share your own poems, stories with us here too. Only a writer can understand another stories' characters so much better in depth, or a poet. About Pakhi, no I can think of turning Sammy/Pakhi negative in second season. Story wise I can do that. But keeping in mind, shows' basic ground which viewers had loved so much and also hated 😆 i won't do that. I have few ideas for new season though. Which ll start onyl after many months I am sure 😆 Thanks a lot also for your feedback on whether to continue in this or bring another season 😳

I agree with you that this story is complete now with one or two more updates to conclude. If u wanna add new tracks you can definitely start the season II, that will make more sense.

It's sad tht this ff too is about to end, but will like to see it as new beginning...