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Hello guys...I am back after a looonnggg pause...and...I have something in store...well...this story is not not my own...I have seen it in a show...I don't remember the name of it...the credit for the story goes to the show and it's writer...but...there is a twist...since I have not seen the show from the beginning so there are changes...for which the credit goes to me...and of course leads i have taken as is Ragna...
"Raghav...did you take your..." Gauri stopped when she noticed Raghav sitting standstill staring at the vast Arabian sea which was looking calm...quite...dead..."What happened Raghav?" Gauri asked in concern... " CANCER..." Raghav replied coldly while his eyes were still fixed on the sea..."Raghav...move on child...you'll be alright once your medications are complete..." Gauri said consoling Raghav...
"Move on...Mom...this cancer is eating me everyday...every hour...every second..." Raghav said in despair...
Gauri was feeling helpless...she couldn't do anything for her son...
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"Doctor she will be fine na?" Kamla asked the docter about her daughter who had collapsed when she was having her breakfast..."See Mrs. Jadhav...Kalpana's heart is very weak...she has handful days if she is not going to have a heart transplant...and i suggest you to keep her away from any kind of shock..." Doctor said explaining Kalpi's condition...
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"Mom I am going to Sammy's beach party...he will eat me raw if I don't go..." Raghav said hurrying up with his clothes as he was getting late already...
"Ok beta...but be careful..." Gauri said while chopping vegetable in the kitchen...
"Ya mom...take care..." Raghav said opening the door of his big bungalow...
"God please give him some reason to live...he had already given up to his cancer..." Gauri prayed for her son...
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"Mom can I go to the beach party...Pakhi is insisting a lot..." Kalpi said with pleading eyes..."You can...but...promise me that you will not forget any of your medicines...only...only then..I can let you go..." Kamla said stritctly...
"Promise mom...I love you...I love you...I love you...you're the best..." Kalpi said placing a peck on Kamla's cheeks and went to dress herself up...
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They were thete on the beach with friends and fun...Pakhi was moving hand-in-hand with her boyfriend Sammy and welcoming everyone...there arrived Kalpi in white dress with a floral print on it and a white tiara on her head...perfect for a beach party...
"I am sooo glad you came..." Pakhi said gripping kalpi in a tight hug..." By the way...he is Samar Raizada...Sammy...my..." Pakhi introduced Sammy to Kalpi..."Someone is blushing...hi...I am Kalpana...kalpi...Pakhi's..." "best friend...right? ??" Sammy said pulling out kalpi's hand in a formal handshake..."Enjoy!" Sammy said...
And there came he...in off White shirt and blue jeans...again...perfect for beach party..."hey bro...What's up..."Sammy said giving Raghav a wide smile..."fine Sammy..." Raghav said casually..."Raghav...meet Pakhi...my girlfriend...and Pakhi...he is my beat buddy...Raghav..." Sammy introduced Raghav to Pakhi..."Enjoy!" Pakhi said...
Mostly all the friends have arrived and party was going in full swing...but the two people were sitting doing nothing...music started..."God nooo...you know na I can't dance...then why this favourite music of mine???.." kalpi said looking toward the full of stars...
"Raghav...Kalpi...why are you sitting idle...get up and dance people..." Sammy said pulling Raghav and Kalpi on the dance floor..." No Sammy...you know na...I don't like dancing..." Raghav said...
"You're such a bore Raghav...Kalpi...will you dance..." Sammy said...
"Nope...I am not in a mood..." Kalpi said plastering a sweet smile...
"Ok..."
"You don't like dancing? What kind of a person you are?" Kalpi said...
"No..."
"What? Seriously..."
"Yes..."
"I mean how could you??"
"If you like it so much why don't you go and dance?"
"Haww...that's rude...well..actually...I have some health issue and doctor has said not to dance or do any strenuous work..."
"Hey Pakhi...look at them...they look so cute na..." Sammy said while dancing with Pakhi...
"Yeah"
"Pakhi tell me one thing..."
"Hmmm"
"If I am not wrong...Kalpi loves dancing...see...she is tapping her feet with the beats of the music...then why she is not dancing??"
"Actually...she has some health issue and doctor has said not to do any kind of work which requires lot of energy...by the way...she loves dancing..."
"Hey...will you like to dance with me?"
"I am sorry...I am not in a mood..."
"Ok..."
"Kalpana...why don't you go and dance...see you're tapping your feet and I guess this is your one of the favourite song...I know your health issue...but...nothing will happen if you dance once..."
"Raghav...you don't know what I am suffering from...it's not that easy for me to stop myself from dancing...you know what...my heart has bloody hole...and...and it can't be even cured...doctor says...the bicuspid valve is damaged and it the cure is only heart transplant ( I know it's silly...but bear it) And I can't do any work which requires lot of energy...but you will not understand it Raghav..."
Kalpi goes home as it was getting very late...
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Raghav was standing in front of the window of his room...looking at the sea...but...he was only getting the flashes of kalpi...
"What's happening to me...why am I thinking of her so much?? Raghav...you need to get out of all this..."
He went downstairs and took his keyes and swayed...to the sea...this sea had always something in itself...it had the ability to calm him down...whenever he was sad... happy...anxious...he would always go there...that sea would always calm him down...today he was going there with his newly acquired feelings about someone...
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Kalpi was twisting and turning on her little bed...she was feeling weird...she was feeling restless...
"What happened beta? Are you ok?" Kamla asked in concern...
"Ya mom...it's just...I want some fresh air...I think I should go to the beach..."
"Ok...but come soon...and don't have long walks..."
"Ok mom"
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"So finally I am on the beach...my favourite place in this whole world...I so love this place..." Kalpi said to herself but it was quite louder for the person standing at her back could listen...
"So...at least we have something in common unlike dance.."
Kalpi found the voice very familiar so she turned to see the owner of the voice...
"You here??"
"Why?? Am I prohibited here?"
"No...but"
"Actually I was feeling lil wierd so I came here...and you?"
" lil restlessness"
"Ok...how are you?
"Fine... and you?"
"I am good kalpi..err..Kalpana"
"it's ok...you can call me that..."
"Kapli...I wanted to tell you something. ..."
"Hmmm"
"Vo..actually...since I have seen you...I can't get out of your memories...I feel that... that...I...I...I love you..."
"I...I love you too Raghav...but you know about me na...I don't have muxh time Raghav.."
"Ssshhh...you will live Kalpi...I won't let you die..."
They spent some time and then went yo there respective homes with a new joy in there heart...
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"Mom...I am very happy..."
"And may I know the reason..."
"I am in love..."
"And who's the guy?"
"Raghav...Pakhi's boyfriend's best friend..."
"I am so happy for you Kalpi..."
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"Mom...where are my medicines? "
"Raghav...everything is fine na?"
"Ya mom..."
"But you're asking for medicines...I mean...you so lost all the hopes of living that you didn't even want to eat those medicines but...it seams you got some reason to live..."
"Yes...I have found someone I would live for...I am in love with her mom...Kalpi...she is magical...she gives life to all whom she touches...I really love her mom...I want to live now...for her...with her..."
"I am so happy for you...can I meet her...I mean let me see who's the one who has changed your mind..."
"Sure mom...tomorrow...yeah...I'll bring her tomorrow..."
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"Hey Kalpi...how're you? "
"I'm good...you tell..."
"I have called you to tell you that mom wants to meet you...tomorrow..."
"What! Is it not very early? "
"Of course not..."
"Ok...by the way...even my mom wants to meet you..."
"Ok...I will come to pick you up..I will meet your mom and then we'll go meet my mom.."
"Ok...great idea..."
"Bye Kalpi...take care..."
"Bye...you too take care..."
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"Am I looking fine mom...Raghav's mom will like me na.."
"Yeah Kalpi...you're looking very pretty...she would love you..."
'Ting Tong'
"I'll see"
"Hello Aunty..."
Raghav bent to touch Kamla's feet...
"Be blessed beta..."
"How are you aunty?"
"I'm ok beta...have a seat..."
"Yeah..."
"So...you love her a lot?"
"Yes..."
"Even after knowing about her health..."
"Yes.."
"I must say...my daughter has a very good choice..."
"Thanks aunty..."
"Hey Raghav...am I looking good..."
"You're looking like an angel..."
"Will your mom like me?"
"My mom already loves you..."
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'Ting Tong'
"Hey mom..."
"Hello aunty"
Kalpi bent to touch Gauri's feet but Gauri took her in her embrace...
"You belong here..stay blessed..."
"You're very sweet aunty..."
"Thanks beta...and you're very pretty...come have a seat..."
"Hey mom...Kalpi you talk...I will go and make an important call..."
Raghav goes from there...
"Thank you beta..."
"Why aunty?"
"For giving a new life to my son..."
"I didn't understand aunty..."
"Raghav had lost all hopes when he came to know that he is having a brain tumour...but you gave him new hopes..."
That came as a blow for Kalpi...she stood up and was about to leave when Raghav came back after finishing his call...
"Hey what happened?? Why are you going Kalpi? Anything happened mom.."
"No"
Kalpi moved out of the house...
"Stop Kalpi..."
"You have brain tumour? "
"Yes"
"What? And you didn't even tell me..."
"I was about to tell you..."
"But when?"
(Silence)
"Forget it Raghav...it's all over...my heart is not strong enough to bear your loss..."
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AFTER THREE DAYS...
"Raghav you are fine na?"
"Ya mom...it's just I have some headache...I am feeling very heavy..."
'Tring Tring'
"Mom...where's my phone...it's ringing"
"Don't worry...I'll tell whoever it is that you will talk later..."
"No mom...it my be HER..."
"Ok..I'll bring your phone..."
"Hello...Kalpi.."
"No Raghav..it's me...Pakhi...Kalpi is in coma...doctor told that she had some tension which had depressed her a lot...Please come here Raghav..."
"I 'm coming..."
"Mom I need to go..."
Raghav got up to go but his head swayed...
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AFTER ONE WEEK...
Kalpi opened her eyes slowly...she saw everyone be it her mom...Raghav's mom...Sammy and Pakhi but HIM...
"Raghav?"
Pakhi showed her the video recorded by Raghav...
"Hello Kalpi...I know when you will open your eyes you will ask for me...Kalpi...I just want to tell you something...I love you a lot...I love you much that I want to live for you... I love you so much that I can die for you...I know...I shouldn't have gone like this but I have promised you that you will will live...and...I am very punctual with my promises...you know it...you'll live Kalpi...you'll live...don't think that I am not with you...I am always with you...within you...MY HEART IS WITH YOU..."
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She was back there...the sea...his favourite place...her favourite place...their favourite place...her heart was beating very fast...
"I know Raghav you love this place...even I love it so much you know na..."
His hand was entwined with her's...
"Yes sweetheart...I know it..."
"I love you..."
"I love you too.."
"Sunset looks so beautiful na..."
"But not as beautiful as you're..."
"You have again started it..."
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So...how's it???? I was really very nervous before posting it...Please tell me who's this...I have tried to do something new...Please do comment and like [appreciation and criticism are welcomed]
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