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Destiny,no one knows what's written in our destiny,when and where our destiny takes us... Some people believes in supernatural things and some don't,for them it is only some peoples imagination nothing else but it is really true,if people can believe in god then why can't they believe in ghosts because goodness and evilness are two sides of coin... Well me and my friends also don't believe in all this supernatural things till the time that accident happens with all of us,it changes our thought completely,it was about two years back due to lots of work pressure me and my friends were not able to spend our time with each other,its even impossible for us to talk or even see each other so all of us plans a mini holiday trip to goa so we all can spend some quality time with each other,everything was going well after planning up everything we all left for goa in our cars but suddenly everything starts changes when the tyre of one of the car gets puncher,not only one but all the four tyres of the car gets puncherd so due to circumstances we all were forced to spend our night in that scary jungle like our destiny wants it...we all were wondering that what we all do,how we all will spend our night here,suddenly we all see a cottage,lovers cottage nearby so we all almost runs towards it,for us its like we all got water in the desert but before we all could step inside the cottage someone stops us and as we all turns we find a old man standing infront of all of us,so we all goes towards him,he had a big scratch on his face and due to night he was looking like a ghost which almost scary all of us a bit but we all compose ourselves,before anyone of us could ask him anything,he warns us to not to go inside as this cottage is haunted, people says that ghosts lives here and people also says that on every full moon night their use to game of death and whoever goes inside this cottage on full moon night doesn't ever founds alive but none of us believes on any of his words for us its all rubbish so we all again start moving towards cottage,he kept on warning us again and again but we didn't pay any head to him so at last he tells us that the couple who loves each other truly without any selfishness will able to survive in the end because its only love who remains till the last nothing else then suddenly something strikes at kalpi's and geet's mind so they both turns back and shocking to them that old man was nowhere, he just vanished into thin air which scares both of them even more so they called everyone and tells them the same,after listening this everyone start smiling and making fun of them,they said that may be its possible that he left but both kalpi and geet wonders that how within a second that man can vanish,they both were lost in their thoughts so raghav ask both of them are you coming with us or not due to which they both come back into reality and start going with them and as soon as they all steps inside the cottage a thin air passed through them which makes them all shiver avoiding this they all start roaming here and there in cottage but all of a sudden tv gets on so khushi goes to switch off tv whereas others were still roaming here and there,before khushi could switch off the tv a hands comes out of tv and holds her neck due to she start screaming but when everyone comes their they all saw she saw sitting on the floor,holding her neck and screaming so they all avoid her, then suddenly sid notice a statue of tiger so he too start screaming but in joy and taking pictures with it but suddenly that statue turns into real which scares all of them like hell,they all start screaming in fear but sid was totally clueless about this,he was wondering that why they all were screaming so he questions them due to which they all points a finger towards statue and as soon as sid saw the tiger he too start screaming in fear,he start chanting god's name,he screams for help but no one dares to go near the tiger,seeing tiger moving from its place they all start running here and their in fear and sid kept on saying are you all my friends or enemy,just save me before this tiger killed me but no one of them had the guts but still they all gatherers their courage and together moves towards sid, luckily they all save sid before tiger notice any of them after this within a min tiger again turns into statue,seeing all this they all run towards the door but before any of them could reach near the door,the door gets closed by its own so they all start opening the door with all their force,during this they all realised that roshini was missing so they all start searching her but she was nowhere seen, then madhu notice her sitting on the floor with her back hitting the walls,her face was fully covered with her hairs so kalpi goes near to her,touch's her but shocking to everyone all of a sudden roshini holds kalpi's neck and make her lay on the floor,everyone tries to stop her specially raghav so she turns only her neck but not her body like she if possessed by someone and said to raghav agar uski nahi to kya tumhari gardan dabau and start pressing his neck seeing all this kalpi took out her shiv ji locket and show it to roshini which scared the ghost inside her body as it is said that the ghosts are very scared of god so the ghost left her body due to which gets fainted but when she comes back into her conscious she doesn't remember anything about what had whereas others were very happy that atleast she was fine so they all took a sigh of relief but their happiness doesn't last long as all of sudden someone start singing but no one from them is singing so they all start looking everywhere,after sometime except RK all the others notice something which shock all of them,they all become statues and when RK notice all of them, he question them but he didn't get any reply so he tells to just go and finds that who is singing to which geet says yeh jo upar hava mein skeleton uncle latakaa hua hai vo gaa raha hai(The skeleton uncle which is hanging up in air is singing) and points in that direction and as soon as RK saw that he just get faints,they all did a lots of thing to bring back his conscious but scaring to all of them more suddenly radio gets on that too without electricity and even all the things too start moving from one place to another, so they all just hide themselves under the table till everything gets back to normal but as time passes their fears also increases with passing time as they all start hearing freaking sounds like someone is crying even animals too start making noises like howling,slowly temperature too starts dropping and they all start feeling very cold but one thing for sure they all doesn't loose their hopes,hope to survive till last, hope to get out from here and that was their biggest strength, soon everything went back to normal which gives them all a big relief so they all decided to sleep before anything else happens but they all were totally unaware that tonight sleeps were not in their destiny,when they all were about to sleep taps starts leaking and they sounds like tip tip,window shutters start banging,many glass windows gets beaked,many ghosts appears in air and warns them that tonight they will not leave any of them,they will kill them all shocking to them like hell so they try to call someone of their help but to their bad luck their was no network anywhere and then suddenly raman gets a tight slap on his face due to which he just falls down on floor,he ask all of them that how had slapped him but they all remains clueless, they all with their puppy faces said to him that none of among them slapped him because of tight slap raman just kept on rubbing his check and kept cursing the one who slapped him before they all could come over this they all find a message written on wall that ab tum sab ka waqt khatam hua,ab tum sab ek ek kar maraoge aur hum sab maza karega which scares them but still they all decided to be each others strength not weakness...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Even before her life kalpi thinks about raghav's life so she gives her shiv ji locket to raghav for his protection from all the evilness and when ghosts were about to kill or were about to attack on kalpi raghav comes in between them to protect his love even maan also did the same, when geet dress caught the fire, he extinguished all the fire by his bear hands and when a table was about to fall on raman's head ishita saved him in a nick of time,with all the happenings none of them loose their faith in god for even once,they all keep chanting god's name,with this they all kept on fighting with ghosts and with all their supernatural powers all the night,new morning brings new hopes,new life for all of them,as soon as sun rises the doors of cottage gets open by its own and all of them come out safely from the cottage as they all loves each other truly infact madly...their love for each other wins over all the evilness,the only thing that remains till last is the love which they all had for their loved ones, with their love and loved ones they cross all the hurdles,after that accident no one saw that cottage again even that old man too,people use to say that whatever happens with us that night is all our imagination nothing else but we all knows that its not our imagination,all that happens with us in reality,people believe us or not we all don't care as we all its true and it will remain true and may be till the time when all that happens with us we all were hell scared but now after two years whenever we all remember that accident memories it brings a cute and sweet smile on our faces,we all start laughing,teasing each other as that night may be many scary things happens with us but their were many funny things too and moreover to anything we all had two most precious things of life with us and that are love and friendship and that's enough for all of us to survive... PS-Hope you all love and enjoy reading this story as much as I love and enjoy writing this story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautifully written jjiya like always
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different os .thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmmm! Love conquers all ghosts and fears ! Good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Scary story m very much scared of ghosts nice story end well then all well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os jiya. ..loved it ..
Loved how u explain love n friendship. ...n tere support. ..ture love n friendship remind forever. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Firstly Jiya,Love the Banner πŸ˜ƒ You Beautifully Showed How Love Wins Over Evil πŸ˜ƒ I enjoyed this Little Story Jiya 😳 Beautifully Thought of And Written πŸ˜ƒ 😳⭐️ You should Love always Win and Ghosts πŸ˜• Not my favorite πŸ˜• πŸ˜† Loved the Update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS.
I just loved it.

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