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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice start neha...while reading it it seems like funny stories thank u for ur another work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome storyline 👏
Loved it! Plz continue soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You stopped at such a crucial point! Raghav found his runaway bride. What happens next?
This story looks to be an interesting one. Do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Neha r u busy please if possible for u reply when will u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hahaha jhansi ki raani... very nice dear...plzzz keep updating...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note
i'm discontinuing this story of mine here as i unable to visit more . My frnd just remind me about this thread . So i just come to inforn u i'm unable to update anymore ...
i give note about same in epilogue of my story
thanx for love & support
take care:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Neha, I am sorry to be blunt with you . You have started a lovely concept and most readers [including myself ] are 'hooked' on to it but there you go again discontinue the story. Do NOT play with readers emotions as the DJ did with his serial EMA ! Try to understand the 'feelings of readers , if you can ! You are a GOOD writer , NO DOUBT about it BUT reading any of your stories to the end seems to be a 'DREAM' !!! Sorry , NO OFFENCE meant but I had to point out the feelings of most ardent readers ! NOW you can go ahead and hurl all the abuses at me, I am willing to take it, WITH A SMILE !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Neha dear please complete the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like 1part .please next part update soon.dj ph ki tarah story adhoori mat chhodo.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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k i was missing my queen group so thought to check here . girls go & cgeck msg me angry on u .. U left me their talking to myself .
okz now for ready if any here . I'm busy bcoz of my prsentation stuff for 2 weeks after this. So for sure i unable to update back to back till 2 weeks atleast .
if u wanna still bear crap then here u go . I'm updating nxt part . I've not updated character sketch uet so i'll do as i get some time :) .
but i'll tell u one thing . RAGHAV parents are alive both . Kamala is kalpi maid . Kalpi belong to rich family, her father Mahesh jadhav love her a lot ..
soon u got reason why Mahesh & vikram want Ragna to married. It's NOT A COZY STORY OR MATURED one . U need to wait a lot for that . Only a wild thought ...
part 2
K- don't u have manners how to behave with a girl put me down .
Kalpi say while banging fist on his back.
When she refuse to come with him he just bend and throw her on his shoulder and now she is cursing him.
K- Kahi laaj lajja sharam aahe ki nahi. Visarlas apan kiti chaan shatru hoto te.
( have some shame . How much good enemies we are)
Raghav just open car door and throw her on back seat and he himself come on front seat locking car door automatically so kalpana won't run away 4th time.
K- bappa why u send this jerk back from US.
Raghav u forgot how much we hate each other. U forgot our wild childhood fights.
Plz leave me for sake of those fights .
R- kalpana stop over reacting don't behave like chuhiya
Kalpi widen her eyes
K- whay u say me CHUHIYA??
U are Chuha , monkey no no they are better than u . U ditch me in our enimity . U cheater monkey are even loyal to their master . I know who u are . U are a GIRGIT.
Raghav shook his head even he don't know how he gonna handke this Jhasi ki Rani.
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Singhania mantion
Everyone was worried for kalpi where she went?
Mahesh jadhav ( kalpana father) was sitting on a chair with his head down when vikram ( Raghav father) put hand on his shoulder .
V- don't worry mahesh , u know kalpi very well how much stuborn she is . She love to tease u . She is here at any time with Raghav
M- i know that's why i choosen Raghav for her .
He look toward Gauri and say
M- i'm sorry for what she did!
Gauri give vikram a small smile in understanding and say to mahesh
G- u forgot that kalpi is dearest to me . She is like my daughter . We know her very well how much she hate Raghav so her reaction is obvious.
And all start waiting for Raghav & kalpana to come.
...
It's 20 minute passes
She was tired now due to continious balbarring finally she relax herself on car seat and say
K- kyun muj nanhi si jaan k piche pade ho??
( why are u behind me)
K- main hasti khelti tumhe achi nhi lagti tumhe . ( u don't like me happy)
K- i'll call police and make u arrest for taking me forcefully to mandap and doing my bal vivaah .
Raghav stop car with a jerk
R- BAL VIVAH??
Kalpana u are 18 years 10 days old
K- haan to
I'm still a child to marry an OLD like u!
Raghav eyes widen in schok
R-i'm only 20
K- yaah but still u are old for me. Vaise bhi i want to do many things in my life . I've many dreams
R- like
K- like making boyfriend , my first kiss and
R- and
K- and??
Kalpi look at him narrowing her eyes? Widen her eyes for a moments she say
K- yickss singhania don't fall so low.
Raghav shook her head
K- I so want to live and daddy gona hang me with u yickss.
R- drama time our ms jadhav not Ready to be MRS Raghav Singhania.
He give her a evil smile and again throw her on his sholder to make her inside.

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