Thread 2-Celebration of Fates:RagNa FF, Part-44,Page-100, 21/02 - Page 63

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Posted: 8 years ago
Mothers lap is the most peaceful place in the world, and Father's embrace is the safest place in the world.
Its mother who nurtures the child through her essence, her love, and its father who provides everything to child through his blood and sweat.
Mother connects child with self, where as father with the outer world.
Isn't it an irony that the protector had to become an abductor!!!!
How much ever carefully you have managed, eventually he turned to be a terror , an outside abductor...
Had he not been her father, he would have earned the worst curses for himself,
So he did now too by abducting her Forsaken Angel-Rajkumari...
Fathers care and safeguard the apple of their eye, Rajkumari till their last existence, last Breath...
Here was a father who for a moment took his very angels breath away...

The storm of long lost escapist father struck back and
left the forlorn mother, helpless brother and above all Mighty soul mate totally Ravaged.
The mosaic of mixed emotions created enough pain to let the flower benumbed,
Till it was mothers lap again who facilitated vent of emotions numbed,
To create the firm resolve of punishing the selfish traitor who by all means
lost his right on his Angel-Rajkumari back long...

And finally came the confronation of father in exile,
who made his very apple of eye exiled...
Lots of questions unanswered, lots of confusions to be cleared
and lots of churning of oceans of emotions...

Leading wide awake readers gasping, with dropping jaw and eyes wide open...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry Charu dear, m commenting exactly one month after the update.
Cant say anything more,
But Majboor with Hope, inspite your busy gruelling schedule you will update soon.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Charuuu, Sweetie when will u update? Please update dedo.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Charuuu, Sweetie when will u update? Please update dedo.


I am sounding like someone who makes excuses always. 😭 My Nani expired recently and there were some other developments in my extended family's front. Apart from that, though I know what I want to show. But I am not satisfied with it. I am working on sub-plots. I'll try to update asap. :( Thanks for all the love and sorry for keeping you all waiting.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Mothers lap is the most peaceful place in the world, and Father's embrace is the safest place in the world.

Its mother who nurtures the child through her essence, her love, and its father who provides everything to child through his blood and sweat.
Mother connects child with self, where as father with the outer world.
Isn't it an irony that the protector had to become an abductor!!!!
How much ever carefully you have managed, eventually he turned to be a terror , an outside abductor...
Had he not been her father, he would have earned the worst curses for himself,
So he did now too by abducting her Forsaken Angel-Rajkumari...
Fathers care and safeguard the apple of their eye, Rajkumari till their last existence, last Breath...
Here was a father who for a moment took his very angels breath away...

The storm of long lost escapist father struck back and
left the forlorn mother, helpless brother and above all Mighty soul mate totally Ravaged.
The mosaic of mixed emotions created enough pain to let the flower benumbed,
Till it was mothers lap again who facilitated vent of emotions numbed,
To create the firm resolve of punishing the selfish traitor who by all means
lost his right on his Angel-Rajkumari back long...

And finally came the confronation of father in exile,
who made his very apple of eye exiled...
Lots of questions unanswered, lots of confusions to be cleared
and lots of churning of oceans of emotions...

Leading wide awake readers gasping, with dropping jaw and eyes wide open...


Wow, amazing, perfect, awesome, fantastic. 😃👏 This is superb. 😳 Loved it so so much. Looking forward to more. 😃 Thanks a ton for posting it here and accepting my request. 🤗❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u


I am sounding like someone who makes excuses always. 😭 My Nani expired recently and there were some other developments in my extended family's front. Apart from that, though I know what I want to show. But I am not satisfied with it. I am working on sub-plots. I'll try to update asap. :( Thanks for all the love and sorry for keeping you all waiting.



M so sorry Sweetie Charu to hear about sad demise of ur Nani. I can understand Nd feel the loss. Koi baat nahi take ur own time .
May her soul Rest in piece.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm sorry for you loss dear. Take you time and May her soul rest in peace
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Posted: 8 years ago
Charu when will u update? Waiting sweet thang 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Charu,
Howz u Sweetie? Hope everything is fine at ur end.
Ur family, job all is well .
And hope u remember this sweet story nd ur waiting readers too.
Just drop in n say Hi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
please update dida
waiting
update TMS also please

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