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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

awesome chappy dida.. Mast ekdam.. Mast chappy hai..
Thanks Saumya dear.

Wow.. Kya Chamat mara Kalpi ne uss Nisha Kami** ko.. Aaahhhaaa maza aa gaya... Nd tha Bit** still after 8 year she is same... How can any1 be like this... Wht she will teach her daughter.. Hatred nd all... I feel bad for that littl girl.. She got such a bad , cruel fake mother... Poor she.. Nd poor Ashok..

Yes, that's why she is a vamp. 😃
Dida waiting for nxt chappy plz update soon... I'll try to update in one or two days.😳

Nd plz update TMS nd GW also Not possible to update GW abhi. 1st its too technical, second I'll definitely try to update TMS sooner that I had planned.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ReezaZul

awesome update..plez update soon..

Thanks dear. I'll try to update soon.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

What a SLAPPY update Charu! Now the veil of MU is clear with Kalpi, nd the lioness in her took over to the apparent outside cause that corroded their relationship.Yes agree.

Whenever something uneventful takes place with us, the first reaction is to blame situation, circumstances Nd ppl around us. It is when we are done confronting them, starts our own soul searching. Hence the confrontation with Nisha was necessary, for with that Kalpi realized how much she cared n respected Raghav nd how wrong she was in letting n believing third person in their lives. Raghav is really a gem who actually helped Nisha's husband in giving job as well as franchise to restart his own venture. Had Kalpi not confronted Nisha she wI'd not hv known this side of Raghav nd now she is respecting him all the more. Besides the venomous words of Nisha has actually fueled her emotions for raghav.
True, confrontation with Nisha was necessary. Now Kalpi can finally completely move ahead of her past. But one more step remains, coming face to face with Raghav and telling him about this.Yes, Raghav is almost a perfect man here. 😳 And by knowing this side of him, respect for him has increased ten-folds in Kalpi's eyes. It was inherent nature of Kalpi since childhood, masked briefly by her misunderstanding; to come in defense of Raghav if someone else hurt him or abused him with words. It was like only they had right over each other, to hurt each other. 😃😛 😳
Yes now the last wall of repentance is remaining, which has to be there for their trusted future with each other. Amounts his busy schedule too Raghav didn't forget to care for Kalpi, hope Kalpi remembers this Nd draws her lacking confidence. Indeed Raghav has played all the roles in her life, n now it's her turn to show him, how much she loves him Nd his place in the temple of her heart. Hmm,let's see what happens. 😳 😛But it is certainly Kalpi's turn to show Raghav her love. 😃
You have beautifully captured all her emotions, infact when she was slapping Nisha I felt with each slap she was breaking th wall between her Nd Raghav. Aww, thank you. 😃
Awaiting for the next chappy to see how difficult this last night of separation gonna go between them.Hmm it ll definitely be somewhat difficult for Kalpi. She has to feel her inner emotions of love for Raghav.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pyardil

Lovly update charu
Kali want to teach a lession to that nish bich n she came to meet her
But before that she regret for her decision n talk with raghav to feel good
Hmm good that beach deserved that slapped
Hooe kalpi will share n open her heart n raghav accept her again with full of love


Thanks dearie. 😃 Yes Nisha certainly deserved all of it. 😆 Hope so too. 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Kalpi is so hard on herself for not trusting Raghav who is her everything

Raghav is Kalpi savior. Its so sad that Kalpi had to grow up without a father
Raghav is one amazing man. I love the way he took care of Kalpi and he understand her so well.
Kalpi didn't have to tell him she is sad he can hear it in her voice.
This Nisha is one bitch. I thought maybe she will feel ashamed of what she did to Kalpi but instead she still is one spiteful woman. Because of Raghav she still has a roof over her head and still she is so ungrateful.
Kalpi slapping her a number of times was superb😆 she deserve every slap and some more...
I hope now Kalpi can go to Raghav and share her pain with him and talk things through
Raghav already forgive his Kalpi and she has to forgive herself
Beautiful update. I love the entire chapter
Charu you always express RagNa feelings so wonderfully


Yes, Kalpi should be and has to be hard on herself. She had been very very hard with Raghav back then. So the level of her guilt too has touched skies now. Aww, yes. Raghav is amazing. Like a true life-partner who besides been a friend and more also is father/mother to their partners. Unknowingly Raghav donned all the important roles for Kalpi. It was because of Raghav that Kalpi did not miss her father in many terms. He understands Kalpi more than her since childhood, because he was the one to keep an eye on Kalpi always, for her protection.

😆 Thanks for liking the slaps. 😛 Kalpi shallc ertainly go to Raghav. Without that, their story will not move ahead. Thanks a lot Natasha dear for liking the update and my writing style. 😃 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover


Yes I know you love me 😛 appu also loves u too much u knw right ...no thnx my chashni anything for u 😉 😃


Aww. 😳 Right dear. 😃 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

Wat a super update kalpi bang on 👏 👏 she rocked it

Thanks. 😃 😃 Yes she rocked it.😳
It s really really difficult for a child to survive without parents.. even if one f them not there it's incomplete lyk mother father is also very very important who's like a guiding light in our life..if mother feeds us father shows us the path... n without father kalpi n pakhya suffered alot.. he left them in such a depressed state frstly had it not been fr kamla wht would have happened.. next Raghav n gauri they helped them in every way..yes if not bcx f them def people would have taunted them about her father..Raghav really did everything wat a father could do to her child,, he's always there for her whenever she's in need,, if she needs any books he used to give her,, he warned people to not tease her he's always there lyk a shadow in her lyf.. before her asking he fulfilled her wishes.. but wat she did she didn't trust him ek relationship mai trust nahi toh it's really waste.. can understand at that point f tym watever she saw thought that it was true n just bashed him listening someone else didn't even gave a chance to him to speak.. she deserves let her cry Lol 😛

Yes whatever you said about parents role and father's role, agree completely. 😃 Also about Raghav's importance since childhood in Kalpi's life.😳 Ha ha LOL. 😆

Nisha s going to face kalpi wrath now she s N sherni mode she'll kick that b****h 😡 😡 😡 she preferred to climb the stairs she's recollecting each n every scene happened in past n this s,fuelling her anger more ...aww Raghav how much busy also he never stops caring fr her.. he's always worried fr her by her tone he's sensing something is wrong but doesn't want to force her just waiting fr her to open up.. poor kalpi trying every nerve to not to cry ,,she's feeling sad fr distrusting him n overwhelmed how much Raghav takes care f her.. she's really lucky to get such a person..kalpi soon gonna end this chapter n will confront Ashu waiting for that update 😳

Aww...I love how you understand n explain scenes. 😳 He he I know why u r waiting. 😛 😃 ❤️

That nisha still jealous of kalpi acting all goodie goodie once kalpi said that she knew the truth her true colors revealed 🤬 gosh still she hates them wat kind f girl she s thought she's married having a daughter so she might have been changed bt no kuch log kabhi nahi sudrega 😡 hate her to the core wat did she say that these two will never unite n Raghav will never allow her or trust her in his life.. oo comon shut up nisha Raghav cares fr her too much if kalpi explains him ask him fr forgiveness he'll definitely forgive her u idiot stop laughing at them and look at urself how disgusting u r.. this s the reason u permanently stayed as a side kick Lol 😡 😆 her husband working under Raghav n still she's hating him shame on her 😡 nagini huh... how I loved it slap pe slap superb kalpi hahahaha how many slaps she gave to that idiot Lol I'm grinning 😃

Yes😆 Nisha is a complete negative character/vamp. 😳 Glad you loved the slaps. 😃

Now kalpi s super worried whether Raghav will trust her n behave with her lyk before or not.. he will but it takes tym kalpi intezar karo 😉 lovely update my chashni... completely enjoyed curious fr the next one darling update soon.. muah love you: -*Ha ha, bas thoda aur intezaar. It's Kalpi's turn na. 😳😃 😳 😛😊 Aww, I'll update in 1 or 2 days. Love you too darling. 😃😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

Superb ! Keep up. Thanks.


Thanks so much dear. 😃

Originally posted by: hathway

Finally, kalpi got rid of her misunderstanding baggage, but she will finally get over it once she confesses to Raghav.

Nice update!!


Yes, finally Kalpi is free of misunderstandings. Yes, she needs to face Raghav too. Thanks for liking it and for commenting. 😊 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Charu wat a mindblowing update...jus loved it👏 Thanks Rani. 😃

U brilliantly expressed kalpi's emotion ...indeed every child need both der parents love n support in der life ...she got d care n support frm rags n he helped her in her every phase of life but her stuboorn self culd not see it before n she mistrust him n dat bit*** took d chance to destroy der pure relation n now she is feeling guilty ...hope she talk wit rags n fix it soon n she forgive herself Thanks for understanding the depth of Raghav's importance all through Kalpi's life and Kalpi's own emotions for Raghav. 😳 Kalpi will forgive herself, and RagNa will eventually unite surely. 😳
Loved kalpi n nisha's confrontation n dos infinite nos. of slaps kalpi gave her ...she deserved it 😡 ...how disgusting n disgraceful dat women is she not only in her jealous ruined ragna relation...but still want dem to stay apart...she even dislikes dat her husband wrk under rags to support der fly n hate rags der only saviour who inspite of her past deeds employed her husband n gav dem roof n food in dire need n now supporting him financially to open his franchise Yes, Nisha is a completely negative person.
Rags is a gem of a person...charu m in so love wit dis rags😳😳...loved ragna phn convo...he knws his honeybee soo well ...he culd figure out frm her voice her miserable conditon n hiding sumthing frm him n was ready to w8 for her to share herself Aww, Thanks. At least this Raghav is loved. 😃 He does knows his honeybee very well. 😃😳
Eagerly w8ng to read nxt part...cont soon 😛 I'll try to update soon.😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kinnapatel

😊Beautiul update charms di wow nice to see strong kalpi who went alone at nishas place and more than that she slap that bitch nisha .she need that slap what she done in past with RagNa .she deserv more than that .u beautifully express the depth of love .between ragna even though they both r not 2getr still feels each other love ,sorrow ,pain ,lonleyness .without seeing each other . today happy atleast kalpi found out that was not raghavs fault and only nisha was the only one who creats all this misunderstanding . please update soon please dont update after one or two months .sorry if my any word hurt u .


Thanks Kinna dear 😃. Kalpi was never weak in this story. It is only Raghav who has some control over her emotions,others do not have that.
Glad you liked the slaps. 😳 Thanks for the lovely words. Well, misunderstanding had to be cleared one day in story. And about updating after one or two months, I am not a very happy person to do that. If that happens, there is always a reason. Sometimes even right emotions aren't there; or connectivity with story isn't there. I am sorry and I know readers suffer because of this as I myself am a reader. But I know no writer is happy to leave their stories like this. Sorry from heart really for making you all wait. I try my best to update at earliest; and I ll try now too.
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