Ragna ss : fates decided ( discontinued)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey I was reading a
book, and the story feels so beautiful to me that I felt like writing one in
ragna touch... I'm sorry!!! Since the concept is not entirely mine. I apoloize
if I hurt anyones sentiment. But if anyone feels I should not proceed, they are
welcome to share there opinion.


Thaks for reading.
The story will end in three shots...


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Ragna os : fates decided


Chapter 1:


My eyes were stuck
only at the doors of the operation theater. I urge of going inside and
switching off that red light, which was glowing from the last continuous 4
hours, that made me notice a tall man
sitting beside the chair, good looking too, despite of the creased bows. I surprised
myself from my observation and returned my attention. Pakhya was holding my
hands, letting me know, he was with me. I looked at my 15 years old brother who
looked more tensed and lost but all the time pretending to be very strong. The
nurse walked in...


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The man stood up
and looked at the nurse, then the doctor came out, coming closer to the chair where
I and Pakhya were seated , he said, "I'm sorry Ms jadav... We did our best." I
just sank down on my knees... not wanting to understand the depth of the
meaning suppress in those few words. The doctor walked over to the man. The man
deep voice restrained the doctor to say anything, "Not even her?" His voice
resonated across the hospital rooms.


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The doctor shook
his head, the man stood his arm loose to his side. It took a moment for me to understand.
I ran towards the man and started hammering his chest. It was unaffected on
him, he stood there, taking it as it was deserved.


Pakhya ran towards
me and dragged me away from him, apologizing to the man. "She killed him...
She killed our dad!!!!" I screamed. I looked towards the man face and saw the
tears flowing down his cheeks.


That was the night
I remembered looking at him, when that accidend took his father away from us.
The man, Raghav Singhania, lost his wife... Pakhi kapoor. One accident ended
thier life. Her father, Vithal jadav was returning from the work and his wife
due to overdose of alcohol couldn't managed to balance the car and ended there
lifes.



The week passed
after that accident all the funeral ceremony, Kalpana went to the hospital to
meet the doctor for her health issues. She saw Raghav was sitting in the
waiting room. As I saw him sitiing in the waiting room of the hospital, my
heart skip a beat and it starts pounding. I was feeling guilty of my action and
decided to apologize him for my actions. I moved towards him, He looked up and
as our eyes met, I took a seat next to him. He shifted uncomfortably.



"I just wanted to
apologize for my behaviour that night" I said


Raghav didn't say
anything, he simply nodded.


"Are you fine?" I
asked


"I cannot sleep..."
Raghav said finally looking at me.


"neither me.." I
replied in my low voice looking down at my feet. As I looked up... his eyes met
mine.


Raghav stood and
walked into the office, for all the while, I was sitting on that chair and his
ruined face swims over my mind.


The doors opened
and Raghav came out in his red, puffy eyes. It was my turn to go inside. I
moved past him, my hand brushed his, and he put his hands out, I looked at him,
"will you just go for a coffee out?" I simply nodded and walked in.



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MagicalMadness thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a start 😃 acha hua pehle hi Mar diya maakhi ko aur rags ki wife heart attack de kay leni hai meri life 😉 😆 kalpi has lost her dad I wish it was Kamla tgats to bad lol 😆 so now will rags and kalpi get close ? Update soon !!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hehehheheeheh 😆
U have ur own ways of amusing always

😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res😊

unres

Great,so this was d story u were talking abt😳...awsm start n a unique concept😳

What is this?
Raghav n pakhi r married 😡
the thought rakhi married itself made me mad bt thank god u killd her othrwise i do that..
🤢
I hate people who drinks,bcz of pakhi..vittal lost his life...poor kalpi n pakya😭
bt where is their mothr?

Kalpi hit raghav...bt he didnt protest...raghav is hurt too...i cnt see tears in raghav's eye😭

ragna met again...i lovd the way their convrstn flow easily...no hesitatin,no ego,nthng...
Both r in pain fr loosing their lovd ones...

Raghav askd her fr coffe😳...i think he wants sm peace by pouring his heart n he knw that nly kalpi cn undrstnd him in dis situatin...
I hope this first meeting/date brings them closer to each othr

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dragonok


Hehehheheeheh 😆
U have ur own ways of amusing always

😃



Aur kya that's how I spread the warmth 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aagayee meri light !!!!! Little dia 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What has just happened here ?
Raghav was married to pakhi and now she's deceased.
Kalpi has lost her dad too that night
Pakhi was drink driving ...had an accident in which she got vitthal and herself killed ...
Kalpi ..meets Raghav again and said sorry that she attacked him that night ..cuz his wife caused that accident ..so now both of them have insomnia ...they can't sleep ..they both have lost their loved ones
Hmmm !...coffee date ...is this the start of their friendship ?
Why was pakhi drink driving ?
Was Raghav deeply in love with his wife ?
Interesting start ,.Sim .
Thank you ..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vsapras

What has just happened here ?

Raghav was married to pakhi and now she's deceased.
Kalpi has lost her dad too that night
Pakhi was drink driving ...had an accident in which she got vitthal and herself killed ...
Kalpi ..meets Raghav again and said sorry that she attacked him that night ..cuz his wife caused that accident ..so now both of them have insomnia ...they can't sleep ..they both have lost their loved ones
Hmmm !...coffee date ...is this the start of their friendship ?
Why was pakhi drink driving ?
Was Raghav deeply in love with his wife ?
Interesting start ,.Sim .
Thank you ..




Oye hoye my kameeni 🥺
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally I come across your writing. I loved your responses to the interview questions and was looking forward to your story.

Raghav and Pakhi married?!? 😲 But she's dead now 😃. But due to her drunk driving Kalpi lost her Dad 😔. Two wounded souls meeting over coffee. What's brewing? 😉
Good start. Just don't make Raghav devdas type for his wife. Hope it was a marriage of convenience.
Look forward to future chapters. Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb start candy
Kya baat hai new os now u r enjying writing
raghav lost his wife thank god she died
And kalpi lost her father ab cofffeee
jane kya hoga rama re ⭐️ 👏 😊

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