RagNa SS: The Lost Love...NOTE on Page 36

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I am again with another story...bear it...sorry for my crap...
INDEX

Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 3
Part 3: Page 4
Part 4: Page 8
Part 5: Page 11
Part 6: Page 13
Part 7: Page 15
Part 8: Page 17
Part 9: Page 20
Part 10: Page 23
Part 11: Page 25
Part 12: Page 27
Part 13: Page 30
Part 14: Page 31
Part 15: Page 34



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unique story plot sweetheart👏
I liked that u showed kalpi becoming a strong successfull woman after he heart break instead of sitting at a place and crying...😊
She hs an understanding family and prem as a good friend.. Does prem has any feelings for kalpi? Just curious..
And coming to th hero..oopss.. Kinda like villain of the story, Mr Raghav Singhania...😆
Oh man, how can he do like that.. I reread the update to make sure whether he actually di that or i was imagining 😆
Well, how ca he?😡😡😡
And his boss.. Dosnt he get any othr guy rather than a married guys for his daughter.. Such a cheap father he is🤢
Aiyoo... I feel so disgusted for this raghav😡 but wht to do? I love him so much to hurt him😳😆..
Ok.. Now pls upate next part soon... An pls pm me dear...
Once again.. Awesome update darling😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start dr.kalpi left her family for rags. But he want to leave her just because of money. He deserve worst punishment. Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So Kalpana is now KJ.. Wearing Mask in party?? Sacchiii??
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Originally posted by: Dimple_0510

Unique story plot sweetheart👏

I liked that u showed kalpi becoming a strong successfull woman after he heart break instead of sitting at a place and crying...😊
She hs an understanding family and prem as a good friend.. Does prem has any feelings for kalpi? Just curious..
And coming to th hero..oopss.. Kinda like villain of the story, Mr Raghav Singhania...😆
Oh man, how can he do like that.. I reread the update to make sure whether he actually di that or i was imagining 😆
Well, how ca he?😡😡😡
And his boss.. Dosnt he get any othr guy rather than a married guys for his daughter.. Such a cheap father he is🤢
Aiyoo... I feel so disgusted for this raghav😡 but wht to do? I love him so much to hurt him😳😆..
Ok.. Now pls upate next part soon... An pls pm me dear...
Once again.. Awesome update darling😃


Thank u di for reading it...about prem having feelings or not...let it be a secret for some time...about pms I will try to give...Thanks again di for giving your time...😊😊
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Here I am with another story...I know...I know...I have two more stories in a row and one among them I didn't even give the second part...I will give it soon...but this story was wandering in my mind from so many days...I couldn't stop myself from writing this...this will be of probably 20 part...hope you will love it like my other stories...

Here goes the first part...hey...it will be little longer with flashbacks...and many more so plz bear it...and enjoy reading...I suggest you to read in parts...

Part 1

She was sitting near the window of her small house in the chawl...tears were rolling down her cheeks nonstop...kamla and Vitthal were hell worried for their little princess...she was literally very sad...she was just thinking of her past..." how could he do that to me...for him I left my family and he...he just did that...how could you Raghav..." kalpi thought to herself and now tears were flowing more rapidly...

*FLASHBACK*

"Kalpi...I love you..will you marry me?" Raghav bent on his knees holding a ring that was not very expensive but it was beautiful..."i love you too...I will Raghav..." Kalpi said giving her hand in his...Raghav was really very excited...he put the ring on her finger and put her in a tight embrace...

After about a week from confession day...

"Raghav...plz be a good boy in front of my family...they should be ready for the marriage" kalpi said instructing Raghav..." ya kalpi...this is the twenty fifth time you're saying this...I remember it baba..." Raghav said assuring kalpi...

Raghav reached kalpi's house on time...he was welcomed by the family...kalpi introduced him to everyone...kalpi went inside to help kamla with cooking... leaving vitthal and Raghav alone...

V: so raghav...what do u do?

R: nothing much...I am In search new job...the last one i left because I have to earn lot of money and become very rich...and that job offered not enough...

V: so u don't do anything...how will u keep my daughter happy.?

R: I am trying to find a new job...and don't worry about her...I will try my level best to keep her happy..

V: so you will try...I can't be assured of it...right??

R: I didn't mean that..

V: oh I very well know what u mean..

Kalpi entered to check if everything was well...and saw the heating up argument..." enough guys" she said...kamla served the dinner...after having the dinner raghav went back...

K: so baba what is your decision?

V: I know you will hate me but I won't allow you for this...

K: but y? What is wrong in him?

V:his ideas..u know he wants to become rich so he is leaving all his jobs...how will u both live like that...I won't allow u for this kalpi...never..( saying so he went )

K: I will marry him or no one...

Next day...

Raghav met kalpi and asked what was vitthal's decision to that kalpi told everything...

Raghav was tensed but kalpi assured him thst vitthal will agree to the marriage...and if not..They Will run away...they tried to convince vitthal several times but all in vain...and at last both of them ran away and married in a temple...

* FLASHBACK ENDS*

She held the newspaper in her hand...she was crying holding the newpaper...when Pakya entered with kalpi's best friend Prem kapoor...they saw kalpi who was looking outside and tears were rolling down her cheeks...

Prem and Pakya went near her...Prem took kalpi's guitar and started playing and singing.


Kabhi kabhi kalpi zindagi mein yuhi koi apna lagta hai,
[Sometimes in life, kalpi, just like that someone seems like your own]
Kabhi kabhi kalpi wo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagta hai,
[Sometimes kalpi, when they are separated, it seems like a dream]

Aise mein koi kaise apne aasuon ko behne se roke?
[In such, how can anyone stop their tears from flowing]
Aur kaise koi soch le everything's gonna be ok?
[And how can someone think everything's going to be okay]

Kabhi kabhi to lage zindagi mein rahi naa khushi aur naa mazaa,
[Sometimes it seems there is no happiness nor fun left in life]
Kabhi kabhi to lage har din mushkil aur har pal ek sazaa,
[Sometimes it seems every day is difficult, every moment is a punishment]

Aise mein koi kaise muskuraye, kaise hass de khush hoke?
[In such, how can someone smile, or be happy and laugh]
Aur kaise koi soch le everything gonna be ok?
[And how can they think everything's going to be okay

Soch zara jaan-e-jaan tujhko hum kitna chahte hai,
[Think dear, how much I/we care for you (He could mean I or We)]
Rote hai hum bhi agar teri aankhon mein aasu aate hai,
[If there are tears in your eyes, I/we cry too]
Gaana to aata nahi hai magar phir bhi hum gaate hai,
[I/We don't know how to sing, but yet I/we sing]

Hey kalpi maana kabhi kabhi saare jahan mein andhera hota hai,
[Hey kalpi, believe for a minute that there is darkness in the entire world]
Lekin raat ke baad hi to savera hota hai..
[But it's only after night that day comes]

Kabhi kabhi kalpi zindagi mein yuhi koi apna lagta hai,
[Sometimes in life, kalpi, just like that someone seems like your own]
Kabhi kabhi kalpi wo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagta hai,
[Sometimes kalpi, when they are separated, it seems like a dream]

Hey kalpi hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
[Hey kalpi, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh a little]
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..
[Or else just give a little, little, little, little smile]

Tu khush hai to lage ki jahan mein chayee hai khushi,
[If you are happy, it seems the world is filled with happiness]
Sooraj nikle badlon se,aur baaten zindagi,
[The sun emerges from the clouds and spreads life]
Sun to zara madhosh hawa tujhse kehne lagi,
[Listen, what the intoxicating wind is telling you]

Ki kalpi wo jo bichadte hai ek naa ek din phir mil jaate,
[That kalpi, those who are separated, one day do meet again]
kalpi, jaane tu ya jaane naa phool phir khil jaate hai..
[kalpi, whether you know it or not, flowers do bloom again]

Kabhi kabhi kalpi zindagi mein yuhi koi apna lagta hai,
[Sometimes in life, kalpi, just like that someone seems like your own]
Kabhi kabhi kalpi wo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagta hai,
[Sometimes kalpi, when they are separated, it seems like a dream]

Hey kalpi hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
[Hey kalpi, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh a little]
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..
[Or else just give a little, little, little, little smile]

Hey kalpi hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
[Hey kalpi, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh a little]
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..
[Or else just give a little, little, little, little smile]

Hey kalpi hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
[Hey kalpi, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh a little]
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..
[Or else just give a little, little, little, little smile]

Hey kalpi hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
[Hey kalpi, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh a little]
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..
[Or else just give a little, little, little, little smile]

Hey kalpi hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
[Hey kalpi, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh a little]
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..
[Or else just give a little, little, little, little smile]

( the song is from movie JAANE TU YA JAANE NA...u will find one change...the word...'ADITI' is changed with 'KALPI' as it was fitting in the place and more over this song in this scene is sung for her so...)

Kalpi was little motivated by the song ...she stood up and hugged her family and then Prem...

K: I am sorry for whatever I have done in the past...I know I would listented to you baba..Thank you so much for forgiving me.. ( a drop of tear fell from her eyes)

V: princess...you need not say anything... ( and hugged her)...

Ka: ha kalpi beta...it's ok...

Both of them went from there..." but aai..baba...I will not forgive myself until I give all the respect and all other thing that you all deserve..." she promised to herself...

Pr(Prem): kalpi...I won't let you be sad...you're coming with me to Amsterdam...dad has opened a new brach of the company and I have to supervise there and you're coming with me...if u will stay here you'll think about the past and cry...all the people will not let you forget the past...

Py ( pakya):I agree...kalpi u should go with him...

K: but dada...how can I leave u all like this??

Py: don't think about us kalpu...I will manage everything...

K: I need some time...prem...when u have to leave?

Pr: day after tomorrow...

K: I will tell u till tomorrow evening...

Saying this kalpi went to her room...

Pr: pakya plz convince her...she needs a change...plz pakya or else she will hurt herself a lot..

Py: I understand prem...don't worry...I will convince her...

Prem also went back...kalpi in her room was still thinking about her past...unknown to her...tears were dropping uncontrollably...pakya came in and saw her crying...he went to her...he wipped her tears...it was then she came out of her trance..." dada...you here..had some work..??" Kalpi asked abruptly..." kalpu...plz try and understand...plz don't yourself...just go with prem..." pakya said...

K: but dada...aai and baba...

Py: don't worry about them...I am here na...

K: ok dada...as you say...

Py: thank you kalpu...

K:( giving a small smile ) I love you dada..you're the best..

Py: I know..love you too..lil sis...

Pakya goes from there...kalpi saw the newspaper again and made a firm decision...she called prem...
K: prem...I am ready to come...but...I don't want anyone to know that I am there...I mean I don't want anyone to know about my whereabouts...not even baba and aai...it will be only you...dada..and me...I don't even want that people remember that there was someone named ' Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav...'

Pr: but kalpi...how can...

K: I don't want to listen anything...can you do that??

Pr: ok...as you wish...I will plan everything with pakya and let you know...

Kalpi cuts the call...you want money na..now see Raghav I will have more money...more powers than you Raghav...kalpi said looking in the newspaper...

Everything was settled...plan was made...kalpi left in the morning leaving a note for Vutthal and kamla...kamla got up in the morning and saw the letter on the table...

It reads...

"Aai..baba...I know I have hurt you all a lot..I am leaving without telling u both...dada knows where I am but don't ask from him...I have taken a promise from him..so plz...don't search for me or try to contact with me...whenever I will have a chance I will talk to u...I am going to fulfil all the dreams we all have seen together...bless me aai baba...I need it badly...and don't worry about me...prem is with me...and yes he will also not tell me as he is also bound to the promise...love you...kalpi...and plz forgive me for doing this..."

Kamla told vitthal about this...but he didn't do anything as he himself thought it was much needed for her...

AFTER SIX YEARS...

It has been six years since that day...kalpana..who was a fragile and sensitive girl has become a strong businesswoman THE KJ...owner of The KJ groups...The KJ groups had all...The KJ construction...The KJ lifestyle ( fashion house)...The KJ chain of Hotels and Restaurants...and many more...she was the most successful businesswoman...every company wanted a to deal with The KJ groups...

She was very popular in business world but no one knew who exactly THE KJ was...what an irony...it was only two people knew the face behind THE KJ...they were prem and pakya...not even kamla and vitthal knew about it...they thought she worked with prem in his office...she never told them about it as she knew if they will come to know about it...surely the one person whom she never wished to see even on her death bead will also come to know about it...

Yes...he was searching for her ever since he realised that his life is incomplete without her and that he couldn't live without her...but it was too late for him to realise that...he has earned a lot after she went from his life but in fact he lost everything he had...he was...

" kalpi...till when you will hide this from the world that The KJ behind the mask is none other than u.." prem said...

K: till the last breath of my life...

Pr: y don't u understand kalpi...plz don't do this with yourself...

The reason why don't the people know who is The KJ because she hide her face behind a mask...no one not even her employees know the face behind the mask...kalpi does this because she doesn't want that Raghav should ever reach to her...yes...after some days when kalpi left Raghav has come to ask about kalpi but pakya has thrown him out of the house and informe this to kalpi...since she has to become a big name and on top of it stay away from Raghav she adopted the mask...she didn't attend any party other social gatherings...if it was extremely needed she put on the mask and then...

Raghav was standing on the window of his big lavish cabin...he was thinking of that night when he gained a lot but lost everything...

*FLASHBACK*


Due to kalpi's elopement her family has to suffer a lot...they broke all relation with kalpi..kalpi was happy with Raghav in his small house...Raghav has found a new job with a good pay and on high post...his boss was happy with his work...everything was going so smoothly until yesterday...yesterday it was Raghav's boss's daughter's birthday...Ahana Rajput...

Raghav was also invited...he went with kalpi...after some time Mr. Rajput announced something...

MR ( mr. Rajput): can I have your attention plz ladies and gentlemen...as you all know it is my princess's birthday...but I have a surprise for you all...my daughter is going to be engaged...well u all would be thinking who is the lucky guy...he is the one my daughter loves the most...he is RAGHAV SINGHANIA...

Kalpi was shocked on hearing this and so was Raghav...he went to mr. Rajput and asked him that he has to say something...both of the wrnt in a room and Raghav told him that he is already married...

R: sir...I am sorry but I can't marry your daughter...I am already married...

MR: what?? You never told about this before...

R: sir..there was no such Opportunity...

MR: but now Raghav...you have no other choice...you have to marry my daughter...

R: but sir...I have a wife already...

MR: divorce her..as simple as that...

R: no sir..I can't I love her...

MR: oh c'on Raghav...plz don't talk about those nonsense...just be practical...if you will marry my daughter you will be the owner of the Rajput groups...

R: but sir...

MR: think twice Raghav...you're all dreams will be reality...

On hearing that Raghav thought that it was all true...and after thinking about some time he said yes for the marriage...kalpi has heard everything...she was shocked to hear Raghav's decision...all have come outside...Raghav went on the stage and he put the ring on Ahana's finger amd she also did the same...

Kalpi has witnessed everything the guests congratulated them...even kalpi congratulated Raghav with tears in eyea...

K: Congratulations Mr. Singhania...

Raghav looked into her eyes and he bowed his head down...Ahana took her hand.." thank you" and kalpi went from there...Raghav wanted to run behind her but he was caught by media and started taking their pictures...

After the party was over...he came back to his house...he found a note...

"Raghav...today you proved that baba was right...you preferred money over me...Thank you so much Raghav for proving me that money is more important than love...yes Raghav...you don't have to come for the divorce...because we are not legally married as the we were not able to submit thw marriage form that day...so you're free...kalpana.."

Raghav was sad...but he looked on his engagement ring which ahana has put and then he kept the letter back on the table and went to sleep...

Sammy came to know about the engagement...he came to Raghav's house the next day.

Sa: Raghav what have you done?? How could u do that?? You loved kalpi then y this?? Is your dream more big than your love...

R:( giving an irritated look) Sammy stop it I what I am doing...u stay out of it...

Sa: no I will not...when it is the matter of my friend's life...I will not...

R: Sammy just go...this is the best decision I have taken...u see my all dreams will be fulfilled...kalpi...she...

Sa: stop it Raghav u are so mad about your dream that you are doing injustice to an innocent soul...that girl she left everything for u...her family...everything...she loved u more than her own life...who can go to any limits for your happiness and u...u will repent it Raghav...you repent it... ( saying so he went away)

It took him some time to realise that what sammy has said was true...that she was the only love of hia life...he broke the engagement and went to take kalpi back but it was too late...

Though that day Raghav found that marrying Ahana was the best choice he had to his dream but he broke the engagement...he decided to make it on his own...and he did it..he was one of the top businessman of the country...

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Someone knocked at the door...he said to come in...he was his best friend...Samar Raizada...or better called..Sammy...

R:( turning around) did you get some news of her..

Sa ( Sammy): no Raghav...the detective tried tracing her location but...

R: but what??

Sa: but she and her brother are more smart...Pakya has some system in his phone because of which anyone who is calling...his or her location is bouncing from one place to another... ( I know this is sheer nonsense but bear it...just imagine na..)

R: what the hell Sammy...you can't trace a girl...it's been six years dammit...

Sa: Raghav...I am thinking that...

R: what...

Sa: that...if...she...

R: what do u want to say...???

Sa: that if she is no more...I mean how could anyone just vanish like that...without any clue...we have no proof of her living...at least not a living person...I..think..

R: ENOUGH SAMMY (he said with full of anger in his eyes ) how dare you day like that ...she is still living...she is still alive...you want proof right...SEE MY HEART IS STILL BEATING...don't you ever say it again...

Sa: I was just...

R: I don't want to hear anything...
Here in chawl...

Ka(kamla): vitthal hame Raghav ko bata dena chahiye ki vo prem ke saath kaam karti hai ( vitthal. We should tell raghav that kalpi works with prem...)

V: we have talked a lot on this kamla and I don't what the Raghav to hurt my princess anymore...more over kalpi will not like it...

Ka: par vitthal Raghav ( but vithal...raghav)

Py: ( from behind) aai plz...don't thake his side...I don't want that man to hurt my lil sis more...she is happy in her life...aai plz don't you ever tell anything to raghav...

Ka: but beta...

Pakya's phone rang...he picked up the call...

Py:( on phone) hi kalpu...you're going to live for 100 years...we were talking about u only...

K: hello dada...how are u?? How are aai and baba...

Py: baba...he is fine..le unse baat kar( take..talk to him)

V:( taking the phone from Pakya's hand) ha kalpi..how are u...everything is fine na...

K: yes baba..all is fine here..where is aai??

V: aai...she is here...

Ka: haan kalpi...kaisi hai...time pe khana to khati hain na...sab kaisa hai...prem tera khyal rakhta hai na... ( yes kalpi...how are you...do u take food on time...how is everything...prem takes care ot u na)[ oh I don't know why I can't write dialogues of kamla directly in EnglishEnglish like for all other characters...maybe I can't imagine her speaking her like that...well never mind]

K: aai relax...I am fine...yes I take food on time...everything is fine here...and prem...he takes care of me a lot...

Ka: chal accha hai...kalpi tu humse milne nahi ayegi...che saal ho gaye tujhse mile ( ok...kalpi will u not come back...it's been six years since we have seen u)

K: aai plz don't make me weak...aai...I want to ask u...Raghav still comes there to ask about me?? (Raghav...since he realised that he cannot live without kalpi comes everyday to her chawl to ask about her...it is other thing that sometimes vitthal or sometimea pakya throw him outside...)


Ka: haan ( yes)

K: aai...plz promise me that how much he ask but u will not tell anything..plz aai..

Ka: ok beta..promise...

K: thanks aai..ok I will talk later..I gotta go...love u all..bye...

Kalpi cuts the call as she had some important meetings...



Whoah...quite big chappy...so mistakes are must...so sorry for any grammatical or spelling mistakes...

So how was the start...shall I continue? ? I know...I know everything was little messy...but what to do?? Do comment and plz plz plz tell if u truly want me to continue...

Edited by TheLifeDiaries - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cute_Kate

So Kalpana is now KJ.. Wearing Mask in party?? Sacchiii??

hey di...thanks for reading it...

Yes kalpi is KJ...yes she wears mask not only in parties but even in her office...not even her employees know that kalpi is behind the mask...this was done so that raghav not find could
not find her...as she came to know that raghav was searching for her...anyway thanks again for reading...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Wow rag did break an innocent soul
Hmm kalpi is strong one n hiding from rag
How rag will ever found her
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Wow rag did break an innocent soul
Hmm kalpi is strong one n hiding from rag
How rag will ever found her
Update soon

thanks di for reading it...let's see how Raghav will find about kalpi...😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha.khan

Awesome start

continue soon

thanks di..😊

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