RagNa TS-A Intense Love Story (Last Shot -pg12&13) 31/7 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written
rag confessed his feeling and kalpi accept it because she also loves him a lot
everyone happy eager to know what will happen next
Thanku pm me sorry for late comment these days i m busy in addmission proccess
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks nuts but dear it is TS not a OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachufan

Very well written
rag confessed his feeling and kalpi accept it because she also loves him a lot
everyone happy eager to know what will happen next
Thanku pm me sorry for late comment these days i m busy in addmission proccess

Thanks dear and yeah raghav confessed his feelings and kalpi accepted it because she too loves him a lot and yeah at the end everyone is happy and to know what will gone happen next do read next shot and your welcome dear and no need to say sorry dear,I can understand
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: smala

Loved it.⭐️👏👍🏼

Thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vsapras

Second shot please ...

Will update second shot soon
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Second Shot (The Pain) 10 years later A man is standing at the entrance of his room and had tears in his eyes but he quickly wipes it and plasted a small smile on his face and enters the room and greets his wife with good morning and a small kiss on her forehead but as usually he didn't get any responses in his wife which he too habit off but still he feels sad and tears were about to flow from his eyes so he quickly turns his to other direction and wipes it then he sits besides his wife and sorry darling I know you are thinking that again I forgot our weeding anniversary but this time I luckily remember it otherwise I know you had gone kill me and here is your birthday gift he said forwarding the gift but his didn't take it which again makes him sad and upset and unknown to him two pairs of eyes were watching him and it is none other sam and maya and after seeing raghav's condition they too have tears in their eyes and sam ask to maya that why it is happening with us,why kalpi is doing this,why she wants to go away leaving all of us and raghav doesn't want her to go,when all this will gone end but maya doesn't reply anything and enters the room and sam too follows her then maya place her hand on raghav's shoulder and gave him a assurance look but raghav just hug her and cries and says I can't handle this anymore,I just want to end all this soon then suddenly everyone hears kalpi's voice which shocks as it can't be as from past 7 years kalpi was in coma so they all comes down and see that their children's were watching sam and maya marriage video and soon everyone sits and starts watching the video and revive their beautiful and happiest moment when four of them were together which brings tears in everyone's eyes and maya again says to raghav that bhai now you should move on life with pakhi which as usually irritates sam and from past 7 years sam and maya married life is also going through a very bad phase as maya wants his bhai to move on his life and sam only wants his sister happiness which lies in raghav and her children as from past seven think he is living in a guilty that he is responsible for his sis condition and everyone tries to make him understand that it is not his mistake but they all fails then the doctor comes their for kalpi's checkup and they all start talking to doctor about kalpi's health and unknown to them in room kalpi start breathing heavily and sam goes to see her and noticed it so he imdeaitly shouts for doctor and everyone runs towards the room then doctor checks Kalpi and informs everyone that her condition is getting worse day by day which breaks everyone hearts and sam goes from their and comes down and start crying then suddenly he noticed that kalpi's children were playing with pakhi and they were very close so sam thinks it is not good and he drags the children away from pakhi and start shouting on her and tells him to stay away from his sis children and hearing him screaming everyone hurriedly comes down and ask sam what happen and sam tells them everything and maya says to him that she had told pakhi to take care of the children's as she knows that pakhi can handle the children's as well as raghav very well to which sam shouts on her and ask her to shut up and as usually soon they both start fighting with each other and as usually everyone tries to make them understand but fails so at least sam says to everyone that may be seven or seventh years passed he is very sure that one or another day his sis will surely recover from coma as she is in coma but she is not dead and goes from their and in evening he comes back home fully drunk and maya tries to help but he push's him away which make her fall on the floor and shouts on her and tells her to stay away from me and hearing him shouting everyone comes and helps maya to get up but raghav starts beating sam for hurting his sis but protects him and stand infront of him and raghav stop beating him but sam again push maya and stands infront of raghav and say hit me,just hit me and kill me and just end my all the pain in one go as now I can't live anymore with this guilt that I am responsible for my sister condition,she is in coma just because of me,if that day I had stopped her from going na then this won't happen,I am very bad,I deserve a very harsh punishment and cries which makes everyone cry and instead of beating him raghav cryingly just pulls him into a hug, consoles him and tells him to stop blaming yourself for the thing which you are not even responsible and you know if kalpi once decided anything she won't listen to anyone so stop blaming yourself and maya too tells him that sam it is just a accident and if not that day,it will surely happens on other day as it was return in kalpi's destiny so stop blaming yourself but sam didn't pay any attention to their words and comes to kalpi's room whereas raghav consoles maya and tells her soon everything will gets fine but maya just ask him when bhai,when everything will get normal,I can't take it anymore, I just want my old sam back to which raghav reply only kalpi can give you back your old sam and no one else whereas in ragna room sam sits besides kalpi and tells her please jaan,please come back not for your bhai, not for your raghav, not for your di and family but for your children's, they need you the most jaan so for them please come back,now we can't live without,we all are dying everyday,every minute of our life and I know you are listening everything but not responding and before he can anything else he falls asleep so after that with the help of raghav,maya takes sam to her room and made him sleep peacefully on the bed then tells raghav to go and take care of kalpi and she is here with sam and raghav leaves and after that maya removes his shoes and covers himself with blanket and kiss his forehead and say please sam,please come back for our love and cries and hug him but then she too falls asleep whereas in ragna room raghav cares kalpi's face and gives her a good night kiss then he too falls asleep,then in morning as usually maya comes and tells sam to come for morning pray but as usually he denies by saying that he does not believe in god anymore and left from their without for once looking back at his wife then maya too left from their then she comes to ragna room and shakes kalpi from her shoulders and tells her please doll,please get up,we can't see you kill this,it is killing us and specially your bhai as he thinks he is responsible for your condition but this time also their heart touching words doesn't effect kalpi so maya shouts on her and says OK fine if you don't want to listen us then don't and if your stubborn then we are also and if you can live without us then we can also live without you as we all are living from past seven years and after saying so she left from their unknown to her raghav heard everything and feels very bad as his family is in so much pain and he can't able do anything for them so he slows says please kalpi,please come back,we all need you and tears fell from his eyes but he wipes it and comes down for breakfast and at dinning table maya again tells raghav to move on his life and get married to pakhi as she is prefect for you and this family which irritates sam and he shouts on maya but this time maya sticks to her words which soon leads a fight between and others were just watching them and even children's also but they both didn't care and even no one interfere between them but raghav signals gauri to take the children's inside as their fights are leaving a very bad affects on them and gauri did the same and soon as gauri takes the children's away raghav shouts and say stops it guys,stop fighting and then he says to maya that please just drop this topic here only I myself also doesn't want to get married again as in my life I can't able to fall in love again and I can't able to give kalpi's place to anyone else so I just don't to spoil pakhi's life and left from their without eating anything and others also left from their without eating...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
poor raghav sammy they feel so sad
sammy in pain thinking he is responsible for kalpi condition
hmm maya n sammy fight kalpi has children n maya think pakhi will be good for them
no no
rag say the right thing
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dr. Is pakhi involves in kalpi accident ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome updatee
soo emotional. Kalpi is in coma and sammy think he is responsible for her this condition. Everyone is in soo much pain bevause of kalpi this condition. Sammy and maya fight. Hope kalpi come out of coma soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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emotional update...
kalpi is in coma & Sammy balms himself...
but rags never leave her
why maya fighting with Sammy for rags to get married & move in his life??? first convince raghav ...he is not ready den why shes forcing him????

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