BAS PYAR HO GAYA (OS) completed - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Interesting. Please do continue. Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sana4Zz

Hm. I knw dat.!!
C iz amazing n supporting grl..!!
C helpd me whn no1 was here ready 2 helpd me n m vry thaxful 2 her..!!

thats great...
here everyone is helpful but if they didn't helped you that means its beyond there control to help you otherwise they would have been definitely helped you.😳

Edited by zindgidilse - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Superb start
Raghav sammy both loves kalpi
Pakhi plan something against kapli
sh want to harm kalpi hope rammy save her from chudail
update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
very interesting and awesome concept.👏
So both Sammy and Raghav love Kalpi..hmm...it will be very interesting to read.
Please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Interesting. Pakhi was cheating and got caught 😆😆. You need to be smart enough to cheat 😆😆.ek phool do malli. Who will get her.is Sammy is her bro kind ?? Please complete soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: farhana04

very interesting and awesome concept.👏

So both Sammy and Raghav love Kalpi..hmm...it will be very interesting to read.
Please continue.

Thxxx faroo darlng.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: riaka

Interesting. Pakhi was cheating and got caught 😆😆. You need to be smart enough to cheat 😆😆.ek phool do malli. Who will get her.is Sammy is her bro kind ?? Please complete soon

Thxxx riaa darlng.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Part 2
Kalpi was walking alone on the road , she heard sound of footsteps..!
She was frozen on the spit as she saw four goons are stood before her..!
One goon put a knife under her neck and other goins tried to dragged her wth thm...

K- plz leave me!!

Goons- not so easily jaaneman..first entertain us then you are free.we cnt leave such a beautiful girl without touching you..

Kalpi was totally shocked whatevr she heard..

K- plz somebody help me!! anyone is here.!!

Goons- no1 iz here to help you jaaneman..let's go.

All four were laughing like a devil and tears were flowing down from kalpi's eyes constantly..

Suddenly they heard a voice LEEAVE HER!!!
All of them looked toward direction of voice..

They saw two boys approaching them..

Goons- Dnt interfer in our matter. Just get lost!!
Boys- oh ! Really ..and they smiled micheviouly..
Ohk ! We dnt interfere in your matter, just leave this girl..
Goons- never!! She is our prey..

After hearing this both filled wth angerd and jumped on goons and start beating black & blue and they run awaybfrom there for saving their life..

But second boy run behind them and able to caught one goon and asked who send you here? And goon narrated all the story behind this inccident..and boy face becme pale ans he said in his mind" how could she do this?".. And meantime goon run away from that boy clutched...


When boy turned he frozen on his track whatevr he saw , he couldnt believed on his eyes..he saw the girl whom he loved is hugging his best friend sammy and he tried to consoled her..at that moment he felr that sum1 thrust in his heart by sharp knife and felt huge pain in his broken heart..

He turned to leave but stopped when he heard sammy is calling him..

S- raghav ! Where are you going yaar?

R- oh! I remembered some important work so i am going.

S- ohk.!! You go , i will drop kalpi in hostle..

R- hm..alryt then!! I am leaving..and she turned to kalpi who lowered her head ..

After droping kalpi , samny reached home and found a drunken raghav.

S- what iz this raghav? You are drunk?

R- sammy my friend congrates!!.. But it's paining , pointing toward his heart..today i lost love of my life but i am happy for you..

S- raghav ! Wht are you saying?? Congrates, love , life..i dnt undrstd..

R- ka..l...pi... I...love...k..a..l..pi..and becme unconsiousness...

S- raghav lov kalpi..how? , when?,,..
If he lov kalpi then wht iz he doing with pakhi..
Sammy felt angered aroused as a thought of raghav and kalpi together..


Sorry for the short update, actually typing from mobile that's y short update ..
Hope u wl undstd ..love u all..

Sorry for grammatical and spelling mistake...
Edited by sana4Zz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice start
Wat relation sammy n rag have with kalpi.i think kalpi is sammy sis dat y.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Lovely Pakhi caught while she's cheating n writing the exam 😆 Oh now wat will pakhi do to Kalpi?
Y this Sammy also interested in her whole world 😲
Both Sammy n Raghav are thinking to save Kalpi from chudail 😛
Continue Jaldi 😉

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