Pyar Ka haq last pt pg 40. 12/10 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii khushi...well it's lovely update I thought raghav and kalpi now starting loving eachother it's wonderful but who is that girl u cut her role completely... Hahaha...and yes thanks for.ur reply...I never thought u have read my story too...yar comments to kar Deti muje pata to chalta...anyways u can do it now...but honestly very nice update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 4eversara

wow wow wow so many Q lol 😆

1 yes I already made index of first pg.👏
2 she will b soon but she hav to play the goodly , yes he does hav something 😆
3 that girl was his ex gf who was jealous of her,
4 yes he doubt bxz Bt both r good actor which will prove Kapoor wrong 😉
5 thanks I will. B update that soon 👏
Thanks for u comment dear
P.s want to see raghav mad(jealous) singhania 😊


Thank you dear.I didn't notice that I asked many questions 😆I love to see jealous, mad, possesive Raghav. Love all kind but Majboor Singhania. I really truly hate Majboor singhnia 😆
Edited by riaka - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY

Hii khushi...well it's lovely update I thought raghav and kalpi now starting loving eachother it's wonderful but who is that girl u cut her role completely... Hahaha...and yes thanks for.ur reply...I never thought u have read my story too...yar comments to kar Deti muje pata to chalta...anyways u can do it now...but honestly very nice update...

well as he is singhania 😛he hav been previously in many relationship so she was one of those girl gold digger
Hey I love u r concept,
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
I guess most of ppl don't like it so I will pull the pug soon 😕I'm sorry for terrible story line pls forgive me 😕
Part 3
Ragna stuck in same room
K:srsly y did u told him we r in liv in relationship
R:r we not, damn jus sleep anywhere becz u can't go out
K:I'm going, I can't stay here (she abt to open the door)
R twist her wrist behind her bk
R:didn't u didn't me clear, I said u r not allow to leave
K:I'm not ur slave
R:wel u r, I brought u fr 20lakh
K:still that doesn't mean I'm going to sleep with u understand
R:keep ur volume down, none ever dare to talk to me like this (coming move close)
K:I'm not that type of girl,who will sleep with u like ur other gf
R:don't make me force u into that,do u want it (he twist her hand harshly)
K:aah (she have marks on her hand)
He push her on ground & walk in bedroom, when he come & saw sit on side of bed her cry, he sit on chair with his laptop, & after sometime he saw her sleeping peacefully, he go to check on her & saw the mark on her hand, she wake up
R:don't b scared,I'm not desperate after women's
K:then y did u make me unbutton my shirt that day, it's bother me a lot
R:I was... Looking fr a women who have scar on her chest.. She is my sister
K is shocked know, she don't want him to continue but he didn't stop
R:I was not singhania when I was young, I belong frm old famous family here
when someone cheat my dad & he become bankrupt him, after that my dad disappears somewhere, mom lost her life, mr singhania adopt me
K:& where is ur sister ??
R:I heard she is happy with her family
K:don't you want to meet her (looking at him)
R:no, as far as she is happy, I'm good
K(I never thought he go thro a lot of pain too) she couldn't help but to hug him
He hug her bk,then he want on other side of bed to sLeep , raghav bk was facing kalpi, kalpi try to go but raghav stop her & ask her to stay here, she did
----morning
She wake up early & go fr walk,where she met abhijeet
K: hey abhijeet
A:hey kalpi, how u doing
K:good
They walk fr hour thy talk a lot, then she want to penthouse & made coffee fr raghav & want to give him
K:morning
R:hmmm...coffee
K put coffee down & go to hotel
Sammy tel there & say pakhi will b here in few hours
R:ok so
S:u r not worried that she will
R:no, I hav a gf & I happy with her (wink )
----in hotel
K met Sana
S:kalpi u know what it's abhijeet sir birthday soon , & we r planing surprise fr him, u shld also join us
K:I will ask raghav
S:oh like that, ya sure & if u come he will b happy
K:I will try my best hmmm got to leave now bye
---in room
Girl is standing & try to hug raghav again & again but raghav got pissed
R:sammy where is kalpi, I can't stand this girl anymore
S:she must b here soon
As kalpi entry the penthouse, raghav run to her & hug her
R:baby I miss you a lot, where were u ??? (Still hugging)
K didn't understand it
K: raghav y r u hugging me (said in low voice)
R:that girl is pakhi, mr Kapoor's dau,
K:oh even I missed u raghav nw let me go
Ragna break the hug, P walk to them
P:is this your kalpana
R nods in yes
P: hi, kalpana I'm pakhi Kapoor,I had he is ur bf
K nod in yes
P:really??? I mean u look like some downmarket girl, how raghav the millionaire of this country fall for u (with weird expression)
R was abut to reply bt k stops him & say
K: well, miss pakhi love status ya class Dekha Kar nahi hota (u don't love someone fr class or status) it just happened &
P:don't u know he hate gold diggers, r u one of them
K:( R stare at k giv warm smile to him) I'm sure one day when u fall fr some1 then you won't able to say dat (with smile)
P: smart??? Well the one I love most is with you
K: may b that called luck, (she look around & saw sammy sad)
Saying all this she walk to her room & raghav follow her & hug her, k is shocked
R: kalpi,kalpi,kalpi what an ans to pakhi, did you see her face..
K:you r happy because someone got insulted badly (give him angry look)
R:yes, I hate her...(walk to toward bed)
K:I thought u r nice person but u r cold blooded rich spoil brat
R:enough of ur 0f ur lecture kalpi, now u r getting on my nerves, so before I lose it, get ready fr auction
K:auction ??
R:yes u heard me right auction, been my gf u hav. Know y auction is happening in my hotel & ya wear something nice becz I don't want ppl attention on you, becz u belong to me.he leave
K:weirdo??? Now frm where I will bring nice clothes to wear, let me call the hotel shops if they have something
In hour kalpi come wearing beautiful saree http://picshype.com/simple-chiffon-saree/simple-chiffon-saree-work/17651
down look like angelic, raghav can't take eye of her , she was abt to fall but he catch her & thy hav EyeLock
R(I told her to wear something nice but she look beautiful in everything I cnt tke my eye off her)
K(y this idiot is staring me like this, srsly I will punch him if he say this doesn't look good)
B:oops love birds ( trance broke) by the kalpi u look breath taking
K:thanks u, at least someone appreciates me otherwise some ppl tke mistake (looking at R)
R:no, srsly u look beautiful
K: at least u praise me
S: kalpi I must say if any guys didn't look at u the might b blind ( with sammy as he knew R is pissed till now)
R: sammy we r late fr auction we r go (grip her hand)
P:wait I want to come too
R:sure
But end time she got call frm mr Kapoor
P:yea dad, ok I'm coming, sorry raghav I hav to go dad got some work bye
All say bye to her & had too auction, where they sit in vip room where she can see the stage & what kalpi saw shocked her she Saw a girl in cage jus like her & she can feel what that go thro, she got scared & hold her grip tightly on him
R:what the matter??? Y look scared
K:stop this pls (in lower vioce)
R:what???
K: stop this, (she shouted)how can u tell this happens, after listening to ur past I thought u r nice person but u r selfish who care abut his reputation & money, didn't u think abt that girl or her family whom u r sell like a toy, do u know how it feel like, y don't u care she is none to u,disgusting raghav singhania
S:kalpi jus shut up if u don't know anything, so don't say Anything ???
K: really Sammy then u tell what I don't know, u all r same heartless cold rich people..
Saying all this she walk out of hall &I sammy leave after her, she was walk in lobby when sammy hold her
S:wait, u said a lot of things to raghav, & do u even know what raghav do there must b a reason to it
K: & what's the reason of sell her
S:come I show u (her drag her where thT girl is with raghav, that girl& her buyer)
Girl: thanks u so much, I'm really happy, thanks for ur help
R:my pleasure, u r happy
Buyer: that sir if u were not there I won't see my love in life (kalpi is shocked as she don't know what exactly happeneing here???)
S:don't b shocked, she sell herself willingly
K:what y wouldn't someone do that
S:we hav rule for auction, that no human will b sold without there will, (he look at her who was shocked)ya that diff what happened to u, when we find out abt u its was to late & u were already in auction & raghav bought u becz he don't want u to go in wrong hands...kalpi whatever he do there might b a reason, she sell her because she love that guy(point to that girl buyer) & her current bf was bad, so she ask for help frm raghav & u r too rude with him
K(I said him a lot I shld apologies to him,)
Sammy leave frm there, kalpi want to penthouse & look fr raghav
K:I'm sorry,
R:sorry fr what??
K:I shldnt have to say those thing to u, I'm sorry,sammy told me abt that girl
R:so sammy can't keep it to himself, that fine kalpi, I'm used to it
K:so u forgive me
R:do I hav opinion
K nods in no...
K: I will get u coffee
R:sure
Time fly real fast, pakhi is convinces that ragna is couple but still jealous of kalpi,she spend more time with sammy & fall fr him, while ragna spend a lot of time together jus pretending thy r couple & these days ragna having weird feeling for each other, when k got off she visit her brother & abhijeet birthday is soo.all staff members r so excited abt it, k is worried to ask R fr off
--- in morning
K: good morning raghav with smile
R:morning sweetheart & kiss her on cheek (kappors fr there too)
K: do u want coffee
R:yes baby without ur coffee. My day don't go (kissing her hand, she smile)
She want to kitchen & signal him to come there too
R:ya
K:I want day off
R:ya but y
K:it's my friend birthday
R:oh ok yes u can have it by the way ur coffee getting better
K:ya becz when I messed up u made me do it again so here is ur coffee with 2 spoon Of sugars, (with smile)
R;thanks
K:don't u think 2 spoons is a lot
R:will u need it fr sharp Brain, u shld try too
K:well u r saying be u r not interested in me & i don't want to get fat
R:ur figure is perfect, & all dress fit u properly, so u don't need to lost weight
He left saying that,unknowingly she smile
K:ok
--------precape: ragna first kiss
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sunyy

Well well well. So Romeo rags has purchased kalpi aNd now kalpi is his pet. So u made vithl a kapoor 😉 😆 and father of porky housefly 😆 😉 So rags is pretending that kalpi and him are BF and GF. So when will pretend turn into real? Waiting for next part. 😛

😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Glad that Ragna are getting acquaintance with each other ...
And Raghav ..revealing about his past ...and about his sister was heartfelt ..
Oh miss kapoor is damn clingy ...huh ..
And is jealous of Kalpi ..
So sweet of Raghav to help out that girl ..
Poor Kalpi took this all negative way and told Raghav off ...
Sheesh!!..miss kapoor is falling for Sammy now?..
Well good for her ...but poor Sammy ..he should run away from her ...
When are ragna falling in love ?...hope soon..
Awesome .update
Thank you ..
Edited by Vsapras - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Personally I don't think I shoukd go by comments but there are lots of people who like ur story and I don't think u should pull plug on it. But loved update and oh my Romeo rags seems to be falling for kalpi ? Waiting for the love to come into place!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update dear... RagNa r now comfertable wth eachother.. Nd makhi fallen for sammy but still jealous... Gosh this grl.. Dear m waiting for nxt chappy... Plz update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Awesome update
RagNa are getting closer and I'm loving it
Raghav sharing his past with Kalpi was sad
I love how Kalpi answer that Pakhi stupid questions :)
Kalpi knows the truth about the auction now
Aww Raghav complimenting Kalpi on her perfect figure was nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunyy

Personally I don't think I shoukd go by comments but there are lots of people who like ur story and I don't think u should pull plug on it. But loved update and oh my Romeo rags seems to be falling for kalpi ? Waiting for the love to come into place!!

awww thnaks u I will think abt it ur comment sweetheart, but u giv I'm so cute nice Romeo rags 😉😆I will sure use it in my story 😆

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