Ragna FF - Un(planned) Rendezvuos updated part-1 on pg 10 - Page 3

Originally posted by: jiya007

Lovely start,continue soon

Thnx jiya 😊

Originally posted by: pyardil

Its awesome start appu
Omg first i thought raghav marry with pakhi when i read she said he is my better half but i start smiling when i read he is his twin borther 😛
Update first part soon dear

Thnx dolly just wanted to surprise u all 😛 glad u liked it 😃 I will try to update soon

You really made me think with this story, that even I started thinking about why not Raghav-Pakhi ... I have loved your start.. and am seriously wondering, how do Raghav and kalpi know each other

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

Appy what a surprise tumne mujhe bataya nahi😭

k will read and then critical acclaim😛

Vari DEEVUDAA..!😲 almost gave a heart attack and in the end Revealed that he is twin Brother🤣

By god if she was his anything else than sister then tho i would have been ready with

bathike poyavu poo😆

But hi it was nice u gave such a detail of her dress their emotions and expression👏very well done😛

naku aethe grammatical mistakes kanipinchala but oka suggestion motha oke para lo rayakunda madhya madhya lo enter nokuthu undu😛😛😉

nice prologue i will be looking forward to read next part😃

Santhi I told u na I'll update soon 😡 u forgot? Sry I frgt to add ur name u also supported me to write this stry 🤗
Hahaha Santhi u know na she s his sister I can't make her anything other than that Lol 😆 Thnqqq shan fr liking it.. Yes I thought to write in paragraph but socha prologue kadha ani next nunchi paras 😉

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan

Awesome prolougee

so raghav and kalpi knw each other frm before

so kalpi is raghav life

so raghav and pakhi are twins haha

when I read pakhi say my better half I was like what😲but then the next sentence and I was laughing

continue soon appuu

Thnx ayesha fr enjoying my surprise 😆 glad that u liked it 😉

Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL

Your first story is it.. I understand the kind of feeling it gives.. I myself am writing my first story currently, and seriously each comments matters a lot. At first when you said betterhalf i was like,'Le ye dil todegi' but then Phew, that was close.. They are the twins, and i was jumping, that ek raaste ka kaata to khatam.. Mazaa aya, congratulations and continue plz.

Yes digvi I was so scared whether people like it or not 😉n yes each n every comment matters alot.. Hahaha nai mai kisika dil nai todegi hmm well problem from her you'll know it coming updates 😛 Thnx fr liking it 😃

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

As they shared a mother womb so I made it sound in that way 😛 well I'm Ragna fan so can't even imagine Raghav n pakhi.. 😃

Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY

It's very nice start...oh god I'm also scared first time that raghav is her better half but he is her brother...lol...too good continue soon...

Thnx fr liking it dear 😊 will continue soon

Originally posted by: Cute_Kate

You really made me think with this story, that even I started thinking about why not Raghav-Pakhi ... I have loved your start.. and am seriously wondering, how do Raghav and kalpi know each other

OMG ur thinking about Raghav n Pakhi 😲 well so many wouldn't like it Lol 😆 n Yes They knew each other you'll get to know soon.. Thnx fr liking it Kate 😉

Originally posted by: Cute_Kate

😭But I did!

Well I am RagNa fan too...😃😃😃But then, ... am forcing myself to twist it and see other side.. why not Raghav n Pakhi?

Aww I'm Sry my start made u think in that way 😕