Ragna FF - Un(planned) Rendezvuos updated part-1 on pg 10

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aparna

@Appuu_AshLover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ovee
Lovely.

Thnqqq 😊

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Katty

@Cute_Kate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hearing Better half even I was stunned... I was like...not again... no Raghav and Pakhi... so this does sound exciting :D

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pyardil

@pyardil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Its awesome start appu
Omg first i thought raghav marry with pakhi when i read she said he is my better half but i start smiling when i read he is his twin borther 😛
Update first part soon dear

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Appy what a surprise tumne mujhe bataya nahi 😭

k will read and then critical acclaim 😛

Vari DEEVUDAA..! 😲 almost gave a heart attack and in the end Revealed that he is twin Brother 🤣

By god if she was his anything else than sister then tho i would have been ready with

bathike poyavu poo 😆

But hi it was nice u gave such a detail of her dress their emotions and expression 👏 very well done 😛

naku aethe grammatical mistakes kanipinchala but oka suggestion motha oke para lo rayakunda madhya madhya lo enter nokuthu undu 😛😛😉

nice prologue i will be looking forward to read next part 😃

Edited by _Santhi_ - 10 years ago

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ayesha khan

@Fly2TheStars

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awesome prolougee

so raghav and kalpi knw each other frm before

so kalpi is raghav life

so raghav and pakhi are twins haha

when I read pakhi say my better half I was like what😲 but then the next sentence and I was laughing

continue soon appuu

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Divya Paul

@DIGVIPAUL

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Your first story is it.. I understand the kind of feeling it gives.. I myself am writing my first story currently, and seriously each comments matters a lot. At first when you said betterhalf i was like,'Le ye dil todegi' but then Phew, that was close.. They are the twins, and i was jumping, that ek raaste ka kaata to khatam.. Mazaa aya, congratulations and continue plz.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

This ff is impossible without you 😃 Hmm I'm still a c.writer like I told u yesterday 😆

Thanks dear. ❤️ 😊 😳 😃

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: gargdia
OMG appuu, u r also a writer...awsm darling😳

lovely start...loved kalpi and pakhi bonding...she is looking ethrnl.😳

so ragna knw each othr already...n she is his life.😳
wow i'm loving this.

@charu if ur support n encouragement cn do this type of miracle thn do it me on also,..😆 lol
m just kidding.

Appu continue soon dear...update 1st chaptr soon please. 😊

😆 I am already waiting for a story coming from you. 😳 😃 😉

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FALAK_SKY

@FALAK_SKY

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

It's very nice start...oh god I'm also scared first time that raghav is her better half but he is her brother...lol...too good continue soon...

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aparna

@Appuu_AshLover

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Cute_Kate
Hearing Better half even I was stunned... I was like...not again... no Raghav and Pakhi... so this does sound exciting :D

As they shared a mother womb so I made it sound in that way 😛 well I'm Ragna fan so can't even imagine Raghav n pakhi.. 😃