ragna ff My Revenge ch 13 pg 36 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Awesome update
God so lovely nitu really fun
Haha her dream god
Hmm raghav gonna come
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Awesome update. ..
FB start. ...Neetu🤣 2 funny yaar. ..I loved neetu dream😉😆...
kamala n sahil. ..n neetu kamwali👏😆...I loved this dream. ...super cool. ..😳😆..neetu ko brain hi nahi hai. ...but loved pakhi n prem. ..love kamala n kalpi. ..n listening kamala. ...
I want one more neetu dream😉😆...
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Awesome updatee
neetu and her dream hahah
Raghav goona come hmm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Superb chapter dear
Neetu and dream 🤣🤣
Loved it sweetie
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
😊😊goto see u back with onther story well i just start to read ur story couple days ago and just love ur both storie(hote hote pyar hogaya,,and my revenge ) i become a fan of ur story too .but little sad with this story as we all love ragna as we never can see them sepeart .whatever dj did in ema we dont want see in the story .well ur r good writter may be u know better than me .so just write waht ever u feel good .this all stories keep me always with ragna so cants see then apart thats why .ragna needs stay 2gethr all time .sorry if i hurt u anywhere .hopefully later on ward cappy we see happiness so nice update with beautiful story ,see soon with next one .make sure please update all ur stories ok .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Too much of Neeiu/Sahil/ kamala caused me 'indigestion' ! 1 Whole update gone !!! Sorry. Missed Kalpi n Rags !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Awesome update dear. I loved the intensity of Neetus dreAm. So the tit for tat game has begun!!! RAGHAv better watch out for ur ex wife's threats
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
OMG My Sweet Villan neetu is so funny😆 Her Dream Yikes 😆😆
Lovely Update Sweetie Update soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Sorry for not rplying u comment n thnx for ur lovly co ments guys

Part 4

Kamla come with lil kalpi n went directly in the kitchen n kalpi as usual sit in coner n start her study n amla start preparing breakfast for everyone

Nitu came there n say to kamla what is this kamla ha y u late today u know n without u pooka didn't getup kamla apolozed her n say I will go n wake her up memsheb n she start living but nitu stop her n say n yes today cook something

Kamla asked her y memsheb today ur frnd is coming for kityparty

Nitu smile n say no today ragav is coming so make something special n clean room for him
Kamla nod his head n left from their n nitu turn to leave but stop n look kalpi who is doing her homework n nitu mumble badi aae padhne wali , ek ye kamvali ki beti aur ek meri pooka pata nai kya hoga n she left from there

Kamla wake pakhi n get her ready

Knowing kalpi came prem came kitchen n look at her n goes near her n sit beside her n say lil angrily y u went without meeting me yesterday ha

Kalpi raise her head n look at him n say I don't want to talk to u n y I came to meet u ,u fought with me yeastarday n she again look down on her book

Prem shook his head n say look kalpi I didn't fight with u u fought with me n only buc of choclate u didn't talk with me ha

Kalpi pouted n say u know na prem bhai how much I love choclate n yestarday my frnd gave me in her b'day n u aet it without asking me

Prem smile n say ok i apologist u me n from next time I won't eat ok kalpi look at him angrily n say I don't need ur apologist n I m not going to forgive u

Prem smrik n say ok then if u don't need my apologised ok then I think then u don't need this choclate which I bring for u hena n he pritent to geting up form the ground n immedately kalpi hold his wrist n say I forgive u n he again sit n kalpi continue now i forgive u now give me my choclate

He slightly hit his head n say take this kalpi n she took that pakhi n kamla came there n look at them n smile n pakhi say this is not fair bhai sometime I'm think u r not my bro u never give me choclate kalpi n prem look each other n kalpi say prem bhai something is burning he na

Prem smrik n say ye kalpi I'm also smell hearing kalpi n prem word pakhi pouted n say look kamla ma both again start pulling my leg n she hug her

Kamla say in fake anger n say stop pulling my kalpi leg u both prem n kalpi get up n come near pakhi n say hmm kalpi n prem took one one choclate n say here is ur choclate pooka baby they tease pakhi calling her which name nitu gave her pakhi look at them in fake anger n snach choclate from prem n kalpi hand n say not call me that perm pull her choti n say we will call u pooka baby n both start chanting her name hear her name she trying to hit them but befor she hit tey start running n pakhi run behind them n they continuosly chanting her name trio run in hall they run around the couch pakhi get chance n she run behind kalpi ,kalpi run toward the door n dhumm she bump someone n fall down n she sit on ground ,looking kalpi fall down prem ,pakhi ,n kamla run toward her befor they reach near her a 14 year boy exten his hand toward kalpi she hold his hand n he make her get up she stand in front of him kalpi apologist him in fear

Boy shook his head n say its ok ru ok na u didn't get hurt ha kalpi nod his head in no kamla ,prem n pakhi came there n worriedly ask her if she ok or not she node her head n say I m fine aai don't worriy

Kamla how many time I told u don't run fast but u didn't ready to listen me now look u fall na thnak god u didnt hurt if something happen to u what is said ur baba

Kalpi smilen looking her innocent smile a small apper on kamla face n a boy face she hug her aai n said I'm ok aai prem n pakhi also start scolding her n she smile looking her smile prem said we r scolding u n ur smiling
Ha...

In meantime

Sahil came there n said raghav beta y ur standing at the door come let's inside raghav look at him angrily in meantime nitu came there n say ohh my raghav beta welcome home beta she look kamla n say yr u standing here go n take artiki tali my raghav came his home first time go fast she say too much sweetly n kamla let from there hearing her too much sweet talk trio giggle n look at each other sahil introduched raghav to everyone

Kamla comes with arti ki tali n she handed to nitu , nitu does raghav arti n put tika in his forhead n welcome him he came inside


Hop u like this ch if not to sorry n plz comment frnkly dears its mean to alot for me
Sorry for mistake n free for comment n don't forget to hit like button
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Wonderful update
prem,pakhi and kalpi bond was too good.
update next part soon

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