I love you like I hate you seaseon 2- Part 5 updated on page20 - No PM - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaka

Keep waiting😆.sab writers long vacation per hai😆



Especially when gabbar junior and gabbar in training are afrer them 😆
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Originally posted by: sunyy



Especially when gabbar junior and gabbar in training are afrer them 😆



Boss tussi hi batao ab hum ki kara 😆 😆
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Dear where r u when will u update please reply
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R u busy? 😭
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Part 5:

"I hate you. I will always hate you"- she is feeling extreme hatred toward him. Is he the same person to whom she was attracted once. She can remember the day how she saw him once again in the fair on the day before akshay tritiya eve. He was taking photographs of people and she and Maya saw him in the fair. She turned back never wanted to see him again. She was infatuated by his charm and she did not want that. suddenly a commotion starts in the fair. A small child fell on the ground and people were running here and there. Her baba rushed to help the child and so was Chotte kunwarji. They both saved the child. He became her 2nd hero, after her baba.
"Di, why are you looking upset" - Sanskar's words bring her back in the present. She wipes lone tears which is about to spill from her left eye and turns to see Sanskar and Sanskriti. "I am upset as My kriti has not kissed me from last 2 days and my best friend has no time for me." " Di" and sanskriti kisses her both the cheeks and Sanskar hugs her. She hugs him back muttering in her mind - "I know my baba did not kill your parents but still I am sorry for your loss. " Affection of these children are keeping her sane here. Her hatred, her anger vanish in a moment by their smile. They don't know about her pain but still they soothes her pain. Sanskar sleeps but again sleep is away from Sanskriti's eyes. Kalpana help her to lay on the bed and lightly pats her back and starts singing lori for her.
Raghav and Bhavo who were discussing about Raghav's strict behaviour with Kalpana heard the lori. Raghav could not help herself but to go to her room and he sees her singing lori from ajared door. Her face is so affectionate. Her eyes are soft with love. Her lips are moving in rhythm. Little pat on back and Raghav holds Bhavo's hands - "I love her. I love her so much. Why can't she see my love? I don't want to force her but I am helpless. My position demands my wife to be present in certain occassion. This Royal family demands their daughter in law to behave in certain fashion. She is my wife ,bhavo though she does not accept it. She is mine". Bhavo does not say anything. She just let Raghav bare his heart in front of her. She can see his helplessness , his love. She looks at Kalpana who fall asleep sitting on the ground and her head at the corner of bed and her one hand still lays on Kirti's back. She murmurs - "She has to understand this relation. It is for her good also. She wants it or not society has accepted her marriage 5 yrs back and she is your wife in their eyes. She should behave like one when we go to Jodhpur again. Are you sure you don't have any issue about Kalpana meeting her baba."
"I hate vittal Yadav but I love her more. I can snatch his daughter but I can't snatch her baba."- Raghav answers.
"Why didn't you let her meet her baba in last 5yrs when i asked you so many times?"- Bhavo asks again.
"I still hate Vittal Yadav and I love Kalpana. I want to punish him miserably and keeping his daughter away from him is my way of satisfying my hatred. I don't want Kalpana to see her father in prison and it is my way of protecting her"- Raghav answers and goes into the room. Today he does not pick her in his arms and lay her on the bed. He is battling through so many emotions. He is not a common man. He is a prince and he can't live like a common man and so is she. She will be forced to be princess, his wife and daughter in law of this family soon. He had given her ample of time precisely 4yrs 10 months 9 days 21 hours from the moment he fell in love with her. Now it is enough. She will accept this relation either willingly or forcefully. "Forced" - this one word is their life's cruel reality and he knows this will make her hate him more but he is arrogant enough not to let her go. She is his wife. She belongs to him.

Kalpana wakes up and finds herself on the floor. Finally, she had slept on floor. She is about to go to washroom take a bath when a maid enters into her room and gives some clothes to her - " Mam, Chotte Kunwarsa sends this clothes for you and asks you to wear these clothes."
"I have my clothes in almira, tai" - Kalpana says. "Chotte Kunwarji donated your clothes in morning Mam" - Kanta tai speaks. Kalpana opens her wardrobe to find it empty. Kalpana remembers Chotte Kunwarji's words from last night and her anger seems no bound. Kanta tai who always calls her bitiya affectionately is calling her mam.
She asks kanta tai -" tai what happened to you. You always call me bitiya. What happened today".
"You are daughter in law of this family." - kanta tai speaks.
"I am your bitiya. Please call me bitiya only and give me this dress." - Kalpana takes the dress from tai's hand and tears it.
"What are you doing bitiya"
"Tell chotte kunwarji, it is torn"
Kanta tai leaves from the room. And Kalpana realises what she had done. From last night, she had lost control of her temper. She should behave. But behaving means accepting this marriage and if she will acccept this marriage, she will become far from her baba. No, she will irritate them so much that they will never talk about marriage.
"Kalpana" - chotte kunwarji's voice echoes in the house and Kalpana fearing his temper come downstairs and sees him smiling.
Raghav asks the maid to give Kalpana new dress. "It is torn"- Kalpana speaks. Raghav picks the dress and unfolds it infront of her - "it is not torn". Kalpana's temper gets best of her and she takes dress from Raghav's hand and tears it.
"Now it is damaged"- Kalpana says in anger. Raghav just smiles and asks the maid to bring new dress. Kalpana takes it from the maid and tears it infront of him. Raghav again asks the maid to bring new dress. Kalpana takes dress from maid and is about to tear it when Raghav holds her hand - "you will be tired tearing the dresses and I will love to see you tearing these dresses in anger. You just look more gorgeous when you are angry".Kalpana just leaves the dress and her ears turn red in embarrassment and anger.Kalpana looks at him in disbelief. He is still smiling. Kalpana takes the dress from Maid and goes to upstairs in hurry.
In room, Kalpana stares at the dress. It is quite elegant anarkali dress. It is not bad but chotte kunwarji has given her the dress. He had already given away her old dresses. She is stuck to wear it but she will not accept the defeat so soon. She takes the scissor and cuts the lace and kalis of the dress. When Kalpana is done with it, None is able to recognise it as anarkali. At breakfast table, Kalpana makes her entry. Raghav and Bhavo are shocked to see her modified dress. Kalpana sees that only chair which is left empty is near Chotte Kunwaji's seat. Kalpana settles there much to her annoyance.
"I will keep in mind your preference of the dress. Soon, your wardrobe will be filled with dresses of your choice" - Raghav speaks in Kalpana's ear.
Answer him back. Make him angry. Irritate him. Being polite is not gonna work with him and throwing dart is not gonna help your anger. Give him back. Her mind shouts
"Sure. I have plenty of plans to wear those dresses. This is just a trailer. I am going to destroy each and every dress in new style."- she whispers
"I will love to see you in your self styled dresses. You are looking more beautiful in this dress. The anarkali which i had given you would have hidden your beauty" - Raghav stares her from head to toe.
Kalpana sinks in the chair. She wants to hide somewhere from his laser sharp eyes. She knows what he means by those words. The dress is quite well fitted , not her style but she was forced to make it like this to cut off all the embroidery. Kalpana does not utter a word and starts having her breakfast.
Raghav smiles thinking -" I know you are not going to cut your dresses from tomorrow onward after this. I am sorry for forcing you but you did not leave any other way to me. This is not a game,Kalpana. It is battle of my love and everything is fair in love and war".
Kalpana checks herself mirror in again and again. She should not make this dress so fit. "You look gorgeous when you are angry... you are looking more beautiful in this dress" - his words ring in her ear and she starts blushing and she suddenly remembers about her baba. No. She is not attracted to him anymore. He is the monster who snatched her baba from him. She had accepted his baba's jail sentence but she will not accept chotte kunwarji's manipulation of making her away from her baba. She will not fall in his trap. Her only aim is to free herself from this marriage and she will do anything for it. Chotte kunwarji is going to regret his decision soon. She is not going to take his crap silently anymore. She will fight for her baba, her freedom and everything is fair in love and war.

Kanta tai enters into Kalpana's room with some other maids and they start to lift Kalpana's belongings and Kanta tai informs Kalpana that Chotte kunwarji had asked them to shift her belongings to his room and this is the last nail in the coffin.
Kalpana angrily goes downstairs just to witness Raghav and Sammy are busy in some important discussion. Kalpana is angry and seeing Raghav, she loses her temper. She picks the vase from the table and throws it to Raghav's direction. it misses Raghav nearly and falls into floor shuttering into pieces. Raghav looks in disbelief at Kalpana who is angry that vase has missed its target. Bhavo, Prakash and servants of the mansion come running hearing the sound of vase breaking.
Bhavo looks at Kalpana with anger - "what nonsense is this Kalpana?"
"you want to ask about nonsense. Ask your highness chotte kunwarji. He had ordered Kanta tai to shift my belongings to his room. How dare he to do this" - Kalpana says in anger.
Bhavo looks at Raghav. She is angry on him. She had already warned him not to rush the things. Raghav downcast his eyes. He knows Bhavo is not going to approve his method. But he will make her understand later. Right now, Kalpana needs to learn some manners and he holds Kalpana's hand and starts dragging her. Bhavo asks Raghav to stop . Prakash is also not happy with the way chotte kunwarji is treating her sister. Raghav arrogantly informs everyone to stay away from husband wife matter.
Raghav drags her to his room.
"This is your room, Kalpana and you better start accepting the things".
"I will not stay with you in the same room"
Raghav comes nearer to her and she moves backward. He comes nearer and she moves back. Her back hits the wall and Raghav is hovering on her. She tries to move from side. Raghav cages her placing his arms on her both sides. Kalpana gets stiff sensing him so close to her.
"I said it is your room. When did I say it is our room and I will stay with you."
"It is your room" - she stammered.
"Not anymore. I have already shifted my belongings to other bedroom"
"I am comfortable in my room"
"Sanskar and Sanskriti like this room more and they always sleep with you. So, I thought to give this room to you."
"Oh" - She whispers in low tone.
"What are you thinking that we will share same room" - he gives her a mischievous smile- " or you wanted to share my room but you don't want to accept it. I am kinda irresistible"
"Nopes. I don't want you near me." - she again whispers in low tone. His close proximity is frightening her.
"Are you sure Kalpana. Your reactions are saying a complete different story."
Kalpana shivers at his words. She starts hitting his chest with her hands. Raghav holds her both hands with one hand and holds her hair loosely with other hand and he pulls her closer and whispers in her ears - "You are mine Kalpana and if I want I can do anything with you. But I will not do anything without your permission. I will not force you to stay with me because if it happens, l fear I may lose my control. I can't allow that. We are Rajputs and we are taught to respect woman. I will wait for the day you accept me as your husband willingly". "That day will never come" - her anger is back though she is shivering in his arms. "Never say never. And don't forget ever that I am your husband. So next time be careful before throwing something to me. Right now this is your punishment"- he kisses her on left cheek and the very next moment he feels a hard slap on her face. She had freed her hands from his grip.He feels humiliated. He is angry and he loses his tempers. His hold on her hair becomes tighter and he pulls her towards him. His lips are inch apart from her lips. He just pressed his lips on hers and She closes her eyes in fear. He looks at her face and he realises he was about to kiss her forcibly. He leaves her and goes out of the room hurriedly. Kalpana falls on ground. Tears of anger and humiliation are streaming down from her eyes. Raghav comes downstairs and he leaves the drawing room ignoring everyone. Bhavo looks at Raghav worriedly. Sammy assures her and follows Raghav. Raghav is about to start his car, Sammy forcibly enters into the car.
"I want to be alone right now" - Raghav's tone is rigid and authoritative.
"Cut the crap and tell me what happened" - Sammy knows his friend too well. There is a soft person inside the shell of royal prince.
Raghav remembers Kalpana's slap and his hand automatically caresses his cheek. Sammy looks at him in disbelief understanding his gesture and then bursts into laughter - " please don't tell me Kalpana slapped you". Raghav looks at him angrily. Sammy controls his laughter - "you deserve it. You are forcing her to stay with you in the same room when she is not ready to accept you as her husband"
"I was not forcing her to stay with me in that room. I had already shifted to another room:
"Then what did you do that she slapped you?"
"I just kissed her"Raghav looks at sammy's O shaped mouth and finishes his sentence "on cheeks"
"What!!!" - Sammy again blasts into laughter- "She slapped you for a kiss on cheek. What would have happened if you would have really kissed her"
The memory of her parted lips, his lips touching her lips and her closed eyes flashes in front of him - "she would have killed me with her bare hand but it would have been worth."
"Raghav you are hopelessly in love with her".

Note : I am trying to keep it simple and light hearted. I just want to handle only two emotions in this ss - love and hate. Some clarification for Raghav and Kalpana's character.
Raghav - he is prince, he is from royal background. So arrogance will be in his blood. He is not bad or grey either. He married Kalpana in a fit of rage and then he fall in love with her. He is well aware of social custom and he is determined to honour his marriage vows but he hates vittal.
Kalpana- she was brought up by her father. Hence she was unaware of marriage concepts. Suddenly she finds herself attracted to a prince like the stories she used to hear from her father and oneday she finds herself captive and distanced from her father. She loves her father so she hates the person who made her baba away from her.

Note:
I don't know how this update is. I have written it a long time back. then something drastic happened in my life. I have lost someone precious and I am dealing with this loss. Hope you all will understand my mental conditon.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
please take care
Edited by Nandinisai - 10 years ago
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I M REALLY VERY VERY VERY SORRY DEAR I DONT KNOW ANYTHING
I THOUGHT U DISCONTIUE IT AND I LOVED IT SO MUCH I M VERY SORRY FOR ASKING AN UPDATE
I CAN UR PAIN I M SORRY DEAR


NOW WHAT AN UPDATE JUST WHAT I WANTED ITS AMAZING AWESOME PERFECT BEAUTIFUL WHOLE PART WAS
PERFECTLY WRITTEN AND UR RAGNA NEGATIVE CHARGE AND POSITIVE CHARGE PASS CURRENT
BOTH R AWESOME I LOVE THEM SOOO MUCH LOVE U SOOO MUCH FOR THIS SS AND SABSE BADA WALA THANKU
RAGHAV WANT KALLI AS HIS WIFE AND DIL OF THE ROYAL FAMILY HIS WAY WAS AMAZING
OMG KALPI SLAP HIM FOR A KISS SO AND SAMMY LAUGHING SO THEY R GOING TO JOTHPUR
WHAT WILL RAGHAV'S NEXT MOVE AND WHAT WILL KALPI'REPLY IMPATIENYLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

THANKU FOR GIVING US SUCH A BEAUTIFUL SS
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was just thinking about this story, I am very happy to read it...

But But But,
please take care and break if you need. Prayers are with you.

About the Update:
As usual, I am loving the story, Love and Hate are two extreme emotions, and I love this "Arrogant" by blood Raghav, and Arrogant by situation girl.. no woman Kalpana... Completely enjoying it... as it is and it's flow.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Its awesome
Rag get angrier but loves kalpi
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you for the update inspite of your loss. We are sorry to have pestered you for the updating. Done in ignorance of your problem. the update is superb. Rags behaving like a typical ' archaic ' husband in the presence of others but is an absolute 'softie' in privacy of their room ! Well written. Thanks again. Hope things get better for you.

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