Raghav Ki Papad Factory. .. 4th Papad on Page 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
dushman na kare dost ne wo kaam kiya hai... lambe update ka wada karke chotu update chipka diya hai...i m angry... but still part was very nice...plzzz update next part asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update
Raghav going bare foot to bappa temple...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
wow finally u updated
thank you..
was nice.. raghav going
to walk bare foot...
awww...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Nice papad!😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 😆
Ye kya, Gade ke pitaji was seriously going to jump off the cliff? 😆 Gauri ki jaga muje bhejna tha naa? Khusi khushi dhakka deti.😆

Chal koi nhi. walking to sidhivinayak barefoot? I'm going to purchase Nails. 😈 Make sure Gadhe ki dadi Gauri bhi barefoot ho.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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4th Papad kab milega 2months baad?😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ban18

4th Papad kab milega 2months baad?😛



Naa re din do din mein

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Wow!!! It's amazing...but give him his Kalpi bak soon
Love u sej
Waiting for more 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Papad 4:

Next morning,

It's huge bedroom. Girl flutters her eyes open, and smiles as sun rays reaches her eyes. It's Kalpana there... Kalpana gets up and sits up on bed with same smile stretching her arms, "So, finally!" she thought, "Day when my dreams will be here," she continued. She picks up the phone and dials a button, "Yeah, meri coffee and newspaper lekar ready karlo.." she requests politely before getting up and heading to washroom with smile

Yet again after another sleepless night Raghav is up, and looks at watch. He quickly sits up, "Ramu!"he shouts as he walks out from room, Ramu comes in front of him with head facing floor, "Who dared to enter my bedroom, and why is my phone switched off?" he asked angrily, when Gauri comes in saying, "Because you needed the rest!" Raghav looks at her angrily, "I TOLD YOU LAST EVENING! I HAVE AN IMPORTANT WORK, AND WE ARE GOING TO TEMPLE THIS MORNING..." Gauri rolls her eyes, "Yes, beta, but maybe not today, as you..." Raghav snaps his fingers, "I have cleared so called debts to you guys for giving me birth, and completed my revenge ... STOP INTERFERING IN MY LIFE now!" he stated in commanding tone, hurting Gauri enough as tears rolled down her eyes. Raghav turns back to leave, but informs Ramu to get him, his bitter coffee soon!

Kalpana dries her wet hair looking at herself in mirror, and heads toward balcony. She picks up her mug and newspaper reading it. She flips pages to find news her eyes had been searching for, "Swarna Sapne" re-established! She smiles, "Yes! Orphanage which was once shut, gets it's new beginning... and all those children left behind without any parent will lead life to achieve their golden dreams!" she was just in the thought mode, when she heard her phone ringing to gain her attention. Kalpana headed inside to pick up her phone, "So manager ji.." she heard male voice from other and she blushed, "Yes, Co-Assistant Vikrant Suryavanshi Ji.. I am ready..." she said. Vikrant on the other end smiled, "Cool, so we are heading to Siddhi Vinayak first.. right?" he asked. Kalpana nodded and said, "Yes, Viki, we are ... We need to pick up Aryan and Shruti (Couple whom Raghav had over heard previous night at temple... read papad 3) as well... Ask driver to get car ready out from gate, I will be there in few minutes..." she informed.

"Is car ready?" Gauri asked, as Raghav came out. "Why are you asking for car?" he questioned. Gauri looked at him confused, "We are going to temple right?" she asked in return. Raghav nodded in yes, "But I am going to walk," he said, "There is a belief, which I would like believe, that if you walk bare foot to bappa's home, he will grant us with our wishes..." he informed. Gauri stood there, shocked... "What?? Bare foot?" she asked, "Have you lost it Raghav?" she looked at him with open mouth. "I am not... going by car, and I am also NOT telling you to come along.. You do what you want... I don't care..." saying so he headed towards door. Gauri was sad seeing it. She quickly picked up phone and decided to ask for help, from one who can convince Raghav, hopefully... or say beg for help... Gauri too ran after Raghav, but made sure to wear her footware, and carry Raghav's too in a bag, to convince him.

Raghav reached outside main gate, while on other hand Kalpana settled herself in car, when she heard her phone ring.

Kalpana: "Hello?"

Raghav has joined main crowd walking to Siddhivinayak, while gauri is trying to connect to phone, which finally seems to be connected!

Gauri: "Hello... Hello beta, sunn meri ek baat, Kamla phone nai utha rahi hai.. and yahan..."

On the other hand, Kalpana shouts, "What? But achanak aise kyun?" she asked,

Gauri on phone says, "Now only you can help me, please talk to Kamla, she can maybe make Raghav understand..." she begs crying... "Okay, I will see..." PAKHI replied, and puts phone down, to run to Kamla for help, and tells her everything... "Please maa, let not him suffer.."

Kalpana on the other hand, keeps phone down. "Let's go... to temple directly..." she commanded. Seeing her Vikrant was confused, "But... what about..." Kalpana just told him, "It was Aryan, they are coming directly, they had to go to doctors..." she informed him cooly and Vikrant smiled, casually saying, "Hope she is okay now..." and Kalpana too reverted "Hope so too.."

Gauri can see drops Raghav sweating, and runs to him as his breathing rate had shooted up, Gauri held him, and tried to pull him in side so but he continued to walk, without stopping or leaving crowd. Gauri then seeing no other option looked around and found a shop, she went there leaving Raghav to walk, and asked shopkeeper to give her water as she paid it's bill. Raghav had walked ahead slowly. Gauri offered him water and some food, but he refused to have any.

"Kalpi, I think you eat something," Vikrant suggested making her look at him, "as you didn't even have breakfast and we have left little early, so we can just have some break time and have food," he offered. Kalpana smiled and nodded in yes, "Ofcorse we should, I am really hungry."

Raghav was by huffing by now with continuous walk, and drop of sweat started rolling down his face, and his shirt was almost as wet, as he walked with crowd with sun shining bright right above his head. Extremely tired Raghav tried maintaining it's face, with every passing second, praying that he would find her Kalpana, and make her with him forever. No sooner Kamla stopped Rickshaw and ran to help Raghav, "Raghav baba!" she shouted getting his attention. Raghav looked at her, recalling that slap she had given Kalpana, that night when she he applied mutthibar sindoor in his Kalpana's maang, and knowing one of the several reasons of Kalpana to leave him was Kamla itself; he ignored her and turned back to his walking, not paying attention to her. Kamla came to him, still unhappy with the fact with what he did with Pakhi... she tried to stop him from such steps that can hurt him, just so that Pakhi can be at peace. She remembered her daughter Pakhi's crying and begging Kamla to go and save Raghav. Though she didn't allow Pakhi to join her, but knew she would there restless enough.

Raghav continued walking but stopped for some reason. He looked down at the reason for him to pause, it were small pointed pieces of stone that had pierced in his foot, and blood was oozing out. Gauri stopped, seeing the trail of blood, she ran to hold him, but he denied her help, and huffing continued his walk. Tears rolled down Kamla's eyes, "Raghav baba, Kalpi will come back to you... But you need not do this!" she begged, trying to make him stop. Raghav stopped for a second, those words were enough to of addition to motivate him to continue his journey, he smiled and with new boost continued in his way, as Gauri and Kamla kept crying and walking along with Raghav.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesomezzz 👏sej love u 🤗but pls raghav baba is crying 😭to much to handle...
Love it 😉😉

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