RagNa FF : Tough Heart!! EPILOGUE on page 74 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice CS
I'm looking forward to read
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Looking forward for readong it..

sure...first part will be coming soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: switymango


Superb cs. ...
Raghav is actor...n kalpi is medical student. ...how they meet...
fhikar not our writers is here😉😆

Yippee kamala is dead no pakhi kmo scene😆
pm 4 m...n update soon ..

Thank you for the appreciation...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Nice CS
I'm looking forward to read

Thank you very much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice cs
looking forward to reading it
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here comes the first part:

Part 1

"Ok baba, main chalti hu." (I am going) Kalpi said by touching her father's feet.
"Kalpi maine kitni bar kaha ki kaha karo ki main aati hu." (kalpi how many times I have said to say that I am coming) Vitthal said.
"Ok baba." Kalpi said raising up. "Baba atleast give me blessing then tell everything". Kalpi said while smiling. "Yes, yes kalpi...may God fulfils all your wishes and give you a long life."
Vitthal said by keeping his hand on kalpi's head.

After this kalpi took blessings from kamla(obviously from her photo) then she came downstairs with her father waiting for her Pakya dada wgo have gone to bring taxi.

"Kalpi take care." Vitthal said who was little worried for her princess. "Sure baba. And you too take care of yourself and dada." Kalpi said and gave a faint smile.

"See Pakya has come." Vitthal said while pointing towards the main door of the chawl. Pakya came out of the taxi and came near kalpi and Vitthal. "Pakya to kalpi ko train me baithakar hi aana." (You only return when kalpi will sit in the train) Vitthal said by giving instructions to Pakya. "No baba, I won't go to drop her." Pakya said by making a little crying face. "But why dada?" Kalpi said as she was getting little worried. "Because once you go to your hostel, you don't want to come back. Last time you went you were back after three months. You like Mumbai so much ki you just forget about Pune." Pakya said. "Dada it is not like that you know na...I have such a big dream to fulfil...and baba said that to get something wonderful we have to lose something very dear...you know na what was aai's last wish...that I have to become a very big doctor...and since then it was my dearm..." Kalpi said with a sadness on her face. "It's ok kalpu...I just said like that...you got serious it seems...chal it's ok...I buy you a gift to cheer you up." Pakya said by trying to cheer up kalpi. "Gift? But dada it's not my birthday or any other occasion." Kalpi said questioning. "It's your farewell gift." Pakya said. "No dada..I don't want anything...you just drop me at the station." Kalpi said. "Take it princess..vaise bhi tere bhai bahut bada kanjoos hai...aisa din hazar saalo me ek baar aata hai."(take it..your brother is a miser...this day comes once in thousand years) This was said by Vitthal to litghten up the atmosphere and it happened. All were there in a great laugh. "Ok kalpi...let us leave now otherwise you will miss your train. "Pakya said while keeping the luggage in the taxi.

"Bye baba. Take care. "Kalpi said and hugged her father. Her eyes were little moisten. And then she finally got in the taxi. Since there was no traffic so she reached the station little early. Soon the train arrived on time much to kalpi and Pakya's surprise. She boarded into the train and after some time the train started to move. She said bye to her dada. Soon the train got into its speed and left the station.


Kalpi reached at the Mumbai station and found Pakhi there who was waiting for her best friend. "Welcome back kalpi." Pakhi said as she hugged kalpi. "Pakhi..why did you come? I said na that I will meet you today. " Kalpi said. "Ya you said that you will meet me today but you see I was missing my best friend so much that I could not wait." Pakhi said having a broad smile on her face.



Huh...here goes the first part...hope you liked it and plz forgive if there was any grammatical mistake.



Sorry if u didn't like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So you're starting a Story? Yay I'm reading😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
D best part of your intro was
Kamla -dead.
Lol
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
The start seems good ...continue soon so I can add it to my fav lists !;
Di 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -AriaRai-

So you're starting a Story? Yay I'm reading😳

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Read it soon and comment on it...I'll be waiting...

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