❤️ ❤️ PAPER HEARTS ❤️ ❤️ ~ Part 13 Page 48 18/6 - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

😆 kalpi andar athe he Raghav ko chod diya 🤣 poor Raghav is now free for his prey 😆

oh prem is he acting or is he trying to annoy kalpi by being with paki 😛

senior he already now the power of kalpi punch still came to have it once again she straight away slapped him that was unexpected for me 😲 but hurt her wow hero ka entry tho hona he tha kalpi had always taken care of herself now Raghav came to stand for her that might have pulled some string in her heart 😛

their convo is always fun to read 2 equally strong headed people but Raghav now is more like concern then answering back 😆 he still make sure to get it done the way he want 😆 kalpi ko utake hospital legaya

nice update but what a point to stop 😈 agar adress nahi janta tho puch saktha na 😆


And there u go again ...the length of ur comment is inversely proportional to the level of ma update ...when I feel Tera ek chutku sa comment hoga u come up with this 😛😆

Glad to hear that u liked the update ... What is Prem upto ? Get to know that in the next update ...

Hahahaha ...address wali line cracked me up. Agar address usko pata hoga toh main story kaise likhungi 😆😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

I love the way he calls her 'partner' in that way she feels comfortable and not like a normal girl!! Rags have already read her n knows exactly how to deal with her! At least she noticed he stood up for her!! Nice I like it!!


And who could notice the Partner thing but u ... Trust me , even I hadn't !! 😆😆 I had been writing it on random basis ...but after ur mention I realized I have used it a bit too much ...& it somehow sounds good ..

Mega glad to hear that u r liking the changing relations between ragna of paper hearts
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

I'm totally ROFLing every time I read an update 🤣

This one was sort of serious though, except some parts...
But then the last line got me... Where are we now? Lost!!
What will RagNa do now? 😛

PS - I know this comment might be a bit confused or stupid kinda one, I'm bad at commenting 😆


Rosy ... U laugh on hearts ke updates ...now that's a compliment (the kindda thandi person I am when it comes to sense of humor )

Where are ragna now ... Get to know that soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Nandinisai , @Reezazul , @mallika90 , @Natasha ...
Tysm for the comment & glad to hear that ull liked the update .
Shall update soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maarushkaa


And there u go again ...the length of ur comment is inversely proportional to the level of ma update ...when I feel Tera ek chutku sa comment hoga u come up with this 😛😆

Glad to hear that u liked the update ... What is Prem upto ? Get to know that in the next update ...

Hahahaha ...address wali line cracked me up. Agar address usko pata hoga toh main story kaise likhungi 😆😛

😆 then u should think I'm being normal lol, I still don't understand this inversely proportional in length thing , do I really do that if it is yes then U have show a lot in few words that can justify my comments being inversely proportional 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maarushkaa



And who could notice the Partner thing but u ... Trust me , even I hadn't !!😆😆I had been writing it on random basis ...but after ur mention I realized I have used it a bit too much ...& it somehow sounds good ..

Mega glad to hear that u r liking the changing relations between ragna of paper hearts


Are you serious?! You really didn't notice the 'partner' move!! I mean, so clever you are , i was sure you put it there willfully!! Only to get her to talk to him freely n more comfortable! Oh well, let's see where it goes from here! I'm loving it though!! Somehow I'm seeing a change!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update
Poor rags kalpi left him as soon as dey entered d venue for vampire girls to have him as dinner lol😆
kalpi got hurt n hero cam on tim to save her was superb...to humari heroine impress hogayi first tim Someone stood for her 😉😃
N den der convo was as always fun to read😆
Hmmm rags lost his way ...pata nahi ab phulandevi humare hero ka kya haal karegi 😉😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyyylllooo mariee 😉
Hope u dng well.. 😳

Here I am commenting after a longgg tym and had to read all the chaps to rewind the whole story! 😛 it was so refreshing and good reading it, yet again a bit suspensous abt kalpi's character! In each n very update u give us some new angle of kalpi's!
I loved the way u wrote abt ragna's interaction. Kalpi doesn't want to be with rags, BT he makes it happen to rid off those despo girls LOL 😆 I'm liking it so far.. And I'm very intrigued to know kalpi n abt her dad.. And I also wonder how does ragna's relation blossoms 😉😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 8


R : Ummm partner ...where are we btw ?

Kalpana looked around. There were dense trees on the left & dense on the right , remote concrete road ahead & an equally remote road behind. The only living existence around was Raghav who was looking back at her with a big question mark on his face & a tinch of panic

K : I dont know ...I have never been to this part of the city.

R : You don't know your own god damn city ??? What have you been doing your entire life apart from fighting with people.

K : First thing (counting one with her point finger) I don't fight with people , people wrong me & i just prepone karma for them. Two (continues counting) You were the one driving so you should kept a track of where the car was going ...three

R : If only someone had sat quietly in the car beside & not go all lady-Tarzan on me I would have kept a check on the road ..

K : Oh !!! So now its my mistake ...

R : Ofcourse it is !
He poked her with his finger on the shoulder.

K : I guess someone's forgetting the part where this so-called lady-Tarzan was being stuffed in the car against her will & ...

R : Then someone's also forgetting the part where a tiny little girl couldn't even walk ...

He argued back as he poked her shoulder again. Knocking his hand off with a slap

K : Dont touch me !

He poked again.

R : I will if I want to ...

He said poking her shoulder again. She glared at him. But for unknown reasons she wasn't feeling as angry as she showed she was. If there would have been someone else standing in front then by now she would have beaten the pulp out of him. But in Raghav's case ...she wasn't able to think straight, she didn't know why. How long has she been knowing him , and she felt like she had begun to trust him already. Now that's a record for an insecurity filled Kalpana.

All her facade that was responsible for her terrifying image in college was slowly crumbling ...and maybe thats where the following reaction came from

K : If you touch me ...then ...then...I can touch you back !

This time it was she who poked him on the shoulder. And there started a poking competition... Which ultimately ended in fits of infectious laughters.

The moment was interrupted when Raghav's phone beeped. Yet continuing with the poke game he fetched his phone from his pocket. The moment he saw his caller id ,his expression changed drastically. It became more serious and then a small smile tugged on his lips

R : Excuse me !

As she saw him walk away. She heard nothing after a warm voiced 'Hello' as he now stood faraway

K POV : Aise dur jaane ki kya zaroorat thi ? Not like I'm interested in his talks or something. He could have spoken here also in front of me.

It had been 5 minutes as Kalpana was staring at Raghav stroll around on the road observing every single expression change on his face. She was now sitting on the bonnet of the car with her legs crossed & her chin resting on one of her palms ..

K POV : (narrowing her eyes) Why is he grinning so much ?Could it be a girlfriend ? OK ...so not like I have got anything to do. Why would I ? I mean I have been knowing him for just a week , what he does in his personal life is his lookout. So what if he has helped me a couple of times & lets say the only guy who's stuck to me even after being threatened so many times & speaks to me as a friend ...

She heard him laugh. That made her feel ...she herself didn't know what !!!

K : (yelling) Agar tumhaari socializing ho gayi ho toh can we actually work on getting a way out of here ?

That instantly drew Raghav's attention as he quickly mumbled something on the phone & cut the call.

R : I'm sorry...I just got a bit carried away.

K : Whatever ! Now let's try figuring a way out to get out of here.

(The story belongs to my sister ka time when there was no existence of smart phones & so also Google Maps ...hahahaha...kabhi kabhi lack of technology is a good thing na 😉)

R : Hmmm...lets try driving back so we can see if we recall the way ... We have to get back before it gets too late.

K : We would have already reached halfway by now if people wouldn't have been giggling with their girlfriend !!

She finally said it out hopping off the bonnet & walking towards the car's passenger seat. Literally following her like a lost puppy

R : What ? You thought I was speaking to my girlfriend ? Noo...I wasn't ! I was actually talking to ...

Kalpana heard him trail off as he walked to the other side of the car hastily. Once inside , his face was way more stern.

R : Yes you are right ! I was talking to my girlfriend ...

K : None of my concern ! Now start driving please.

There was an awkward silence in the car for the next hour as they tried getting their way back home. Who could say that these were the very same people ?

Everything was fine , Raghav had finally succeeded to figure out the correct way ...everything was fine until ...



Until ? Until what ? Find it in the next chapter

MARIEE




Edited by maarushkaa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update maru..
Finally u r back..
Plz update nxt chappy soon..
Waiting..

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