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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks taniya😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaka

Lovely update dear. Raghav and kalpi 😃growing feelings for each other. Please continue soon 👏

Love is in air
Thanks dear😉
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

Very nice Swara, loved it especially the last part. 😳 n nice collection of old songs.

Thanks dear
Raha sawal collection ka to wo Bollywood ki den hai😆
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Thanks farhana😳
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Thanks dear😉
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Originally posted by: ovee

Waiting for ur rocking songs. Pls update soon.

😳😳 enjoy the new collection😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here is part 6 hope you this too😉

Part 6


The siren of train broke her sleep in pieces... She opened her eyes slowly scrubbing them by her palm when her eyes felled on Raghav who sleeping like a small kid with his opened mouth. His hair spread on his forehead which male him more handsome than others... She was sat there seen to him for a while.

When train recoiled on its destination...kalpi's trance break up by the jolt...she get up from her bed and collect her luggage where as Raghav still busy in his dream land. Her heart stop racing to see him in front of her she don't know why but heart doesn't want to go leaving him there. She close her eyes tightly due to control the dust-up between her mind and heart

' kalpi ...he is a stranger for you, don't lose your heart for him...jis mod pe janahi nahi us mod pe mat ruk ...safar mein bahut log milte hai aur bichad jate hai to bhi uske liye ek raat ki humsafar thi Jo subha hotehi apne raste pe mud gayi aur tere aaibaba tere liye Jo sochenge WO achcha hi hoga...take your bags and leave from here...' She understand herself and turn to leave but her legs stoned there, they refuses to step further

' but I have to say him bye at last time...may be after this we never meet to each other... He helped me saved me so last time ek thank you to banata hai' she persuaded her mind.she turn again towards him and nerved her heart.. His cute face brings a smile on her face...her hand move toward his hair on the forehead but stop there...

Kalpi: Raghav... She shakes his shoulder ' hmmm...' He replied scrubbing his eyes.

' I came...to say...bye'she said in hesitate.., her words makes sense in his brain.

' what.. Are we reach' he asked surprisingly.

' yes...we reach... So finally our destination came and time to say bye' she replied ' OK bye if destiny make then we meet again' she said leaving the compartment.

' oh shit...kalpana listen' he said hurriedly but Kalpi subsided from train's stairs. Raghav pick up his luggage fastly and ran towards her. Kalpi's internal trauma also on step of break down but she make her heart hard and wear a plastic smile on her face.

Raghav:

excuse me

Kalpi:

kya re ...

He rolled his eyes and smiled biting his lower lips.

Raghav:

mera dil tere pe fida re...

He sang putting his hand on his heart.

Raghav:

train mein dekha tujhe pehli baar

compartment me ho gaya terese pyar

bolta hoon main sacchi baki

Jo sochna hai wo soch yaar.

Kalpi laughed.

Kalpi: excuse me

Raghav: kya re

Kalpi: ek monkey kar raha mera intazar re. Raghav show fake winced in his heart...which make Kalpi smile.

Raghav: marry me... Kalpi surprised.

Kalpi: Raghav don't kidding me.

Raghav: I am not kidding you... Really I want to marry you... Look you are going to marry to that monkey then what is the problem in this gorilla. She smiled.

Kalpi: no problem in this gorilla but that monkey is decided by my parents and I can't disobey my parents... Raghav's face dropped.

Raghav: OK I understand..he take out his card from his pocket and give her that card. ' this is my card if you want to change your decision just make one call to me.. I will come from any end of this world to you..can I hug you last time' she looks at him expressionlessly... She don't understand what to do or not... Tears are gathered in her eyes but her mind doesn't allow them to flow. ' if you don't want I will not force you' he said and turned..

' Raghav..' She called him back and hug him tightly. She want to cry in his embrace but control herself.

' take care' she said smiley breaking the hug.

' you too' he said when siren of train played.he smiled

' look Miss. Kalpana Jadhav siren ringing ...this journey is the most beautiful journey of my life...I never forget you.. Take care..he turned waving his hand towards her with singing the song '

Gaadi bula rahi hai city Baja rahi hai

chalana hai zindagi hai chalti ja rahi hai

gaadi bula rahi hai city Baja rahi hai.

He walking selflessly in his own tune..Kalpi stand there seen him going until he vanished from her glare. She watch the his card ' when I don't want to keep any relation with you then what is the use of this' she said herself , a drop of tear fell from her eyes and she throw the card on floor.

She turned herself with heavy heart towards the exit , her leg was not allowing them to move forward...tears flowing from the corner of her eyes very slowly... She does not obscure what is bothering her...he is no one to her but now he is everything for her...she was wanted to go away from him but soon his aloofness is bothering her tremendously. She can't able to examine ,what her heart wants... Why she feels like this stranger as her's...as if she knows him from long time... when she feels him around her.( Kalpi pe Raghav ka asar kuch jyadahi huva isaliye usne apna personal orchestra shuru kar diya)

'Ajanabi mujko itana bata

dil mera kui pareshan hai dekhakar tujko aisa lage j

aise baraso ki pehchan hai...ajanabi mujko itana na bata

dil mera kui pareshan hai' her heart cried out.

' ho gaya hai tujko to pyar sajana

lakh karale tu inkaar sajana

dildar sajana hai ye pyar'

he sang smiling towards her taking back his step facing her and vanished in crowd. She stood there helplessly only seen him disappeared. She sat in auto...when the auto driver start his radio which show the emotions of her heart through song.

' kyun khologe khile khile rang ud gaye

kyun in deno khudase raheti hoon mai

khafa khafa...khafa khafa'

a drop of tear fell from her cheeks.

' ek ladki muze chahati hai magar

Bolati kuch nahi mai kya karu'

she saw him sitting beside her in auto biting his lips. She was going to touch him when auto stopped. She get out of the auto and turn to see him but he was no where there.

' hum dil de chuke sanam

tere ho gaye hai hum

Teri kasam Teri kasam'

she sang in her heart closing her eyes. She opened her eyes when she saw Raghav standing leaning to the piller of her house's main gate.

' hum pyar hai tumhare dildaar hai tumhare

hamse mila karo hamse mila karo

koi shikwa agar ho or shikayat agar ho

Hamse gila karo Hamse gila karo'

he came near singing the song and kiss her forehead and sang again passionately

' ja Maine bhi pyar kiya hai

ha Maine bhi pyar kiya hai' .

' Kalpi...' She saw her mother coming running towards her hug her tightly, kamla cares her hai ' I so miss you beta' . but Kalpi

'Ha Maine bhi pyar kiya hai

ha Maine bhi pyar kiya hai'

she said herself with tears who helped her to tell the story of her heart.




Edited by swara2504 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Wonderful update. ...👏
O no Ragna bichad gaye. ..😭 poor kalpi raghav ka pura asar huva hai. ..😆 pure sad song. ...loved it. ..
Update soon next part. ...long update next time. ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
As always ...entertaining !!
Why am I getting a feeling that Raghav is the chosen guy for kalpi by her parents ??😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Muje laktha hai monkey or gorilla ek hi hai 😉 superb emotional update 😛

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