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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Fabulous post.. 👏

Chal ab story likh de iski😉

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: appyK
Fabulous post.. 👏
Chal ab story likh de iski😉

I was thinking the same to tell her.😃

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
I was thinking the same to tell her.😃

Phirse 😉

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: appyK

Phirse 😉

yes 😆

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rkonly

@rkonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
yes 😆

IM SORRY BUT I CANNOT WRITE A STORY...

AND THANKYOU ... I AM GLAD YOU LIKED IT...

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rkonly

@rkonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

KALPI REACHES HOME STILL UPSET OVER THE "OGGY MANIACS".

THE MAIN DOOR OF HER HOUSE IS OPEN ... SHE CAN HEAR SOME NOISE COMING FROM INSIDE... SO SHE JUST PAUSES OUTSIDE TO LISTEN...

INSIDE PRAKASH IS RECITING A POEM...

K: (FORGETS EVERYTHING AND BEAMS WITH PRIDE) HHHAAAYYYEEE MY BABY... AWWW ALWAYS RECITE POEMS... YOUR SOOO GOOD AT IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE U BACCHA!!!!!!!!!!

P: OK DEE...

K: (STERNLY) DEE KISKO BOLA???????????????

P: NAHI . NOT DEE... DEEPAK... HE TAUGHT ME HOW TO PLAY CHESS!!!!!!!!!!

k: happily says REALLY... OK FINE FROM TODAY ITSELF I WILL WATCH ALL CHESS TOURNAMENTS WITH YOU... HAPPY??

P: but i want to see oggy...

K: sighs... ok baby... you watch oggy ... ill go out and eat ice-cream...

then after coming back ill take your studies...ok????

P: actually even i want ice-cream...

K: (cooing)ok baby... who is stopping you???????

now please continue...

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

kalpi still upset about oggy maniacs

n whenever i read the update i feel neetu speaking like bachaa

it too sweet

continue soon

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dnirmala

@nimi4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

To be frank I never felt this character had a impact on story nor the writer felt so ..when creator has no respect towards the character neither as bro nor as son he changed the story so for me wether he us elder or younger nothing is gonna change . except his few comic scene with Manda Thai...if he would have played a neibourhood guy whom she would hv called bro would also fine .