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sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

lovely par abhi hate rag hmmm poor him n kalpi open her heart t rag

update soon

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Neha and Marushkaa, loved both the updates. Fabulous job. I am wondering, first how will I manage to write? Second, how will I write double revenge track. 😛 especially because I have not much seen the other shows of the characters used here.

One request to Ishaani, dear please update index of updates on first page and also orderly wise list of writers.

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Awesome story dears! Ishani, Neha and Maru, you all were amazing!

As I haven't seen any serials of the characters, Ahil, Abhi and Kabir can't comment on them... but I trust you with this... Will think of them as Kalpi 's support system. ... I knew Raghav will not see Kalpi's pic and meet her without knowing who she is..

Smart woman, she knows how to change a flat tyre and bechara Raghav stood there feeling majbhoor. ... 😆 Don't want to comment on mother- daughter duo Kamala and Pakhi as they are irritating as usual. ...

Like that Kalpi has good friends in her life who care for her... They are with her to help her in taking revenge... and now Raghav has joined the revenge game... Amazing! !!!

Way to go , girls! 👏

Edited by Kiaraah - 10 years ago

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Please make an index at the first page for the chapters... helps a lot...

Thank you... 😃

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

A fabulous ff is 'growing' in to a the most beautiful garder ! I am sure all the SUPER minds will create an exotic 'garden ' ! Thanks.

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Brilliant work maru, ishaani n neha👏

Wow kalpi has gr8 support system n she is successful business women...want to read more abt kalpi's bonding with her buddies

Both ragna planning revenge on kapoors n rags wants to join AK2 company in whc kalpi is partner kalpi ignored makkhi n dumbla😆

Loved ragna first meeting as strangers n dey felt an unknwn connection betwn dem 😉😳

Curious to read double revenge track 😛

PS- maru thnxs for pm or I would have missed dis amazing ff 😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: farhana04
lovely

😳

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: varahi
Superb marushka.. So who is next...

Ty ...next is swara ...

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: ishani12
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unres

mariee di thank u so much for the update.
it is lovely.unknowingly also they feels connected to each other thats y it called two body one soul.
lets see how next writter will continue with it..

next update by swara...

waiting.

Oo ty ishani ...glad that u liked it !!